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Reviewer: Gwenna (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
first fiction i read love it
Reviewer: abracadabra (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
Haha!! Best story I've read in a while!! Are you sure you don't write professionally?
Reviewer: Ariellizabeth (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Haha, this one-shot is friggin' amazing! At least make this a two-shot so we know what happens next... ;)
Reviewer: abracadabra (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ha ha! that was a funny ending.
Reviewer: princess bella edward (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Cute!!!! I loved the last line the best, and I loved Carter and his attitude and cockiness.
Don't like the red head, or her 'BFF'. Whatever happened to 'helping a friend in need?'
Oh, well. I enjoyed nonetheless.
Reviewer: edward-my-life (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
i love itt! can you turn it into a storyy?! please?
Reviewer: dancegirl (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
This story is super cute, keep it up!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was cute!
Reviewer: MVC93 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is really awesome, I love it!
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story. You have clearly demonstrated that closets can be more than just storage devices. I really liked these two characters. Perhaps this could be turned into more than just a one-shot? Please keep writing.
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very interesting. I wish there was more!
Reviewer: lov_u_lotz (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a brill story
Reviewer: coffin-loves-cullen (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
omg!!! that was great!! i love it!!!
Reviewer: DJRswims95 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
nice nice nice. I love it.
Reviewer: jmeyer (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi,
I entered the most recent original fiction contest on Twilighted and have spent the past several days reading the stories of the other contestants. I enjoyed them so much I decided to read the other original fiction stories that have been posted here, and well, I haven't been disapointed.
This was truly entertaining. I can tell when I am enjoying a story because I read it in a blur. There is nothing about the story that confuses me or sounds off that causes me to pause and think about the logistics, I just fly through because I want to know what happens next... and next... and next. And I read your story in a blur.
I love that the characters are so well defined. I love how funny this whole piece is, and how snarky the main character is. I love the cockiness of the mind reader. The dialog was really natural. This was just great. Bravo.
Congratulations on the honorable mention!
jmeyer
Reviewer: screamingstares (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story! Are you planning on writing anymore chapters? I am very interested!
Reviewer: Mazzakenzie (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is great! You should totally write more! It's funny and has alot of potential! So keep writing! hahahaha!
-Mazzy
Reviewer: willistongirl (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
oooooooh hot. i love it!
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
OH! that was... hot. And fun to read as well! :)
Reviewer: Neurotika (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Brilliant!
xx
Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved this!
Reviewer: twilightspell (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
hahahah
" you think i'm sexy"
"you want my bod"
LOL! awe please make a continuation on this! i want more carter! i wish this was not a one shot. you are a FANTASTIC writer! Loved it!
Reviewer: mrseacullen (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is fantastic! Major props! I wish it would have been more than a one shot, I would love to see where Carter and Becca would have ended up (aside from the closet of course).
Reviewer: christtt315 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
This shit is hott/ frikin funny beyond belif LOL
Reviewer: geophf (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2008 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Um ... this is a one-shot? You know that's a wee-bit little unfair to your readership, right? I do wish Carter was a certain vampire, but then the protagonist would need to be a certain other person, but the 10-minutes-in-heaven game is certainly an interesting scenario development ...
Lost track. Sorry.
Continuation, please?
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