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Reviewer: Perla (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

AWESOME!!! I want more NOW!!!!!!

Kisses,

Perla

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Just Like Heaven

Loved Bella's last night as a single woman!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 06:48 PM · On: Just Like Heaven

And I'm sure that Bella feels like she's in a dream too! Not sure I'd want to wake up!

Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 11:23 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

Am I a bad person for wanting Bella to get to Vegas just to find out that Jacob married a stripper named Nessie (and yes, that would be her stage name. She know how to handle long necked monsters) I know that Bella would have a broken heart but she could go back to Edward. I have a feeling that he would welcome her back with open arms.

Reviewer: hughug (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 10:48 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

Loving the story so far...Big part of me is goin, no no no bella can't go off to vegas now that she has met edward...she's gonna stay in that little town and live happily ever after with edward....hope for another chapter soon am excited to read what comes next.

Reviewer: KissMyLips (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

yay! Loved this sooo much!

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 10:10 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!

Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

Yayy for the 22 chapters! :D I'm LOVIINGG this story, haha :D And jake's annoying me. maybe it's cuz i'm an edward girl at heart, but he seems like he's being a little whiny XD Though I suppose he has a reason to be whiny, haha! Hey, if I were Bella, I'd obscenely flirt with Edward any day ;D

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 09:52 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

Bella really is in a difficult position now... She is so attracted to Edward, and Jake is waiting in Vegas. Maybe she should really think about what she wants since it seems getting married is more what Jake wants than what she wants. I just hope she doesn't do anything stupid.

Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 07:21 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

Trouble indeed Miss Swan, but in my opinion, the very best kind ;)

Reviewer: mstre11 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 06:07 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

That was a good chapter love their joking and flirting it's cute. Can't wait 4 next chapter!

Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 05:29 AM · On: Just Like Heaven

Love Mechanicward! Glad you have so much written. I hope you didn't have to write the name Jake too many times!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 03:18 AM · On: Prologue

Really nice intro to your story. Sounds like an interesting one. Yes 113 at 11:00 would sound normal there. I was in Vegas when it was 115 at 11:00 at night.....lol. Reading on!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 11:21 PM · On: I Caught Myself

Loving it! Jacob's kind of a pussy lol. Love GreaseMonkeyWard and Sassella :)

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 02:45 PM · On: I Caught Myself

Well they certainly have chemistry between them! Can't wait to hear what is wrong with her car? Or did he create a problem?

Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 02:02 PM · On: I Caught Myself

I think you should keep going, this sounds like it might be a fun story. So by all means continue my dear.  Looking forward to the next chapter. ~Jen

Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 06:52 AM · On: I Caught Myself

For someone that has been engaged for 3 years and driving to Vegas to get married, that girl sure likes to flirt.

Reviewer: mstre11 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 06:40 AM · On: I Caught Myself

I'm really liking this story so far!Can't wait 2 c what happens next and the song 4 this chapter is my shit love it!

Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 06:14 AM · On: I Caught Myself

Thanks for the quick update. Wonder how long the repair is gonna take?  Maybe Jake can ged laid tonight in Vegas so he has a distraction.

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 05:51 AM · On: I Caught Myself

Hmm, was her car trouble enough to keep her there for a bit? Did he have to sabotage her car as well? :P

Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 05:26 AM · On: I Caught Myself


Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 03:45 PM · On: Prologue

Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep it coming!

Author's Response:

It's coming! Next chapter is in queue to be beta'd and posted. Soon, I promise! I have 22 chapters written already :) Thanks for reading and reviewing <3

Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Prologue

This story seems like a Whole Lotta FUN! :D can't wait for an update!



Author's Response:

LOL! I think it is! Most of the story is already written, so hopefully you won't have to wait long. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 10:31 PM · On: Prologue

Great beginning!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Prologue

So does she really want to merry Jake? I hope not thats just eeew. So stop hiding and keep writing, Looks good for the small bit ou have so far!!



Author's Response:

Ha! She feels kinda stuck with Jake. More about their relationship will be revealed in time, but just keep in mind that this is an ExB story. I can't write it any other way! Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

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