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Reviews For Masen House
Reviewer: KimiD (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 09:57 AM · On: 1

I totally hunted you down~ from ff ~  I collect banners as my screen savers from wherever I can find them and found one of your other stories that lead me to ff and then here!!

I totally fell in love with this story.  It wasn't until Edward found, but had not shown Bella, the picture of Em that I figured out that "Bear" was Emmett... the name alone should have been the "clue"  LoL... But I floved Edward's reaction to the new information.  It was like he was saying, "yay, I have a connection" maybe I can keep her and the baby, who is a part of my brother I miss so much... Em was pretty cool about the situation too.  And so was Rose.  I loved the girls' name and following the the Rose theme... very original~!

And I absolutely loved that the girls had Edward's hair and eyes, like Charlie had Em's features... being with Bella and all. All in all a great o/s

Would make a lovely expanded story as well...  gotta see what the new baby looks like... LOL  KimiD

Reviewer: Susan2e (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 12:43 AM · On: 1

Great story.  Thank you.


Reviewer: TheSneakyFox (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 01:56 AM · On: 1

Hm... Messy hair, rakish winks, and Chucks. Is new and improved Edward perhaps modeled after the tenth Doctor?

Author's Response:

Ah, this made me laugh! On a subconcious level maybe I did, SneakyFox, maybe I did. I do. After all, I only like seasons of Dr Who with the tenth Dr. :-)

Reviewer: marinob (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 07:27 PM · On: 1

I love this one shot. Brilliant story and a lovely twist. Once again I love your writings and cannot wait to read more.

Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2012 01:17 AM · On: 1

Strange twist but absolutely charming story :)

Reviewer: Vaderian (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 06:48 PM · On: 1

Aw.... Edward in this story is just too adorable!

Reviewer: chantiemaya (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 07:48 PM · On: 1

What an adorable story! I love the originality of it and it flows so well. I would have loved to have read this more drawn out, with more stories of the pregnancy leading up to their love, in a 4-5 chapter thing. Maybe more of Charlie's first year! But I still think it's great and utterly cute <3

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 02:50 AM · On: 1

I loved it, lol!!

Can't wait to read more from you!

until next time


Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 01:53 PM · On: 1

This was great.  Love your writing.

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 01:28 PM · On: 1

I'm so glad it turned out the way it did thank you for an amazing story !

Reviewer: Crazybee3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 10:06 PM · On: 1

Wow. I really, really liked that. I loved how Emmett was the biological father. I wish I could see more of their expanding family.

Thank you a bunch for this wonderful story!

Reviewer: Eddica (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 04:22 PM · On: 1

love this. it's written very well and I love the plot

Reviewer: KissMyLips (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 06:05 AM · On: 1

awe, very cute! sorta wish it was a multi chapter story, but do love how you covered so much in a one shot!!

Reviewer: JessiCullen (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 11:54 PM · On: 1

Fantastic job, chica! I'm so very glad I gave this a read. Loved it! Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: o2b18 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 08:28 PM · On: 1

i love an English E and B fic.

Reviewer: Shortcake (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 03:18 PM · On: 1


Reviewer: SweetiePie818 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 03:07 AM · On: 1

this story is so many levels of awesome! i loved it!

Reviewer: cherylstweedy (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 07:23 PM · On: 1

Very cute. I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 03:13 PM · On: 1

This was cute, I am glad i stopped to read it, even if it was just a one shot, was so worth it!

Reviewer: s3xyr0s (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 05:41 AM · On: 1

love it!!!

Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 02:03 AM · On: 1

This was Wonderful, I liked reading it. Glad that everything worked out for Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: missscarlettbelle (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 10:44 PM · On: 1

Sorry! Menat to give it a 10!

Reviewer: ALambInLoveWithALion (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 09:19 PM · On: 1

Beautiful story to a beautiful ending!!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 12:23 PM · On: 1

Oh my God I loved this! I loved the plot, the characters (Edward was so cute!) and your style of writing. I'm glad E/B got their HEA. The story was really sweet and I feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside now :) I'm glad Edward and Emmett mended their relationship too. 

Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 03:58 AM · On: 1

Excellent one shot! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and thanks for sharing it with us :)

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