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Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 08:12 PM · On: Part Two: Isabella Swan
Wow... so that's how the family gets gathered... touching story
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 07:51 PM · On: Part One: Alice Brandon
Poor little Alice..
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Introduction
Interesting intro...
Reviewer: Lu Silva (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 10:43 AM · On: Part One: Alice Brandon
vc está no caminho certo,a ftc está muito bem escrita com emoção,amei.
Reviewer: Lu Silva (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 10:27 AM · On: Introduction
gostei da maneira que vc escreve é um tema muito forte e indepedente da classe social tem atingido várias familias.continue postando.tchau
Author's Response: Obrigado. That is about the extent of my knowlege of Portuguese. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Addicted2fanfics (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Part Two: Isabella Swan
So far so good. Looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: carlislelover83 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 06:25 AM · On: Part Two: Isabella Swan
Wow! That story...just wow! I tried to read it earlier today, but couldn't do it, it's heartbreaking. However, it stayed on my mind throughout the day and I got home and was able to finish it!
The emotions and feels are so real, you captured them very well!!! Great job! I would love to hear Rose's story!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working on Rose's tale right now but it usually takes me a while to get these chapters done because they are so heavy with emotion. I do try to make it a story of hope, because it is possible to get out of these situations. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Dee100 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 10:07 PM · On: Part One: Alice Brandon
Very moving chapter - the lyrics in between the story was very emotional - will watch out for the next update
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Bellas story is up now and I'm working on Rose's story now.
Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 02:37 AM · On: Part One: Alice Brandon
The blend of the lyrics and the story line is fantastic. I'll be watching for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. I really love the lyrics of this song. I'm not a really big Eminem fan normally but his new CD came out and it's the only one i bought because of how real the songs were. He and Rianna really opened up a door for the world to see what it's like on both sides for abuse. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Rosie2007 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 01:49 AM · On: Introduction
I am now hooked to this story. Its sad that so many poeple today are abused, and I hope that this story is able to reach out to people who are an abusive relation seek help.
Reviewer: eldertree (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Part One: Alice Brandon
It's really promissing, this story! Please continue.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. This story is really hard for me to write and then once it's all out there I'm never sure how it will be recieved. I'm not sure when the next chapter will be but hopefully it won't be too long. Just be patient with me please. Again thank you.
Reviewer: PyranicPhoenix (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 11:41 AM · On: Part One: Alice Brandon
I love it! Not necessarily the subject matter, but the fact that it is being addressed. I did hear a song recently that made me think of this story called 'Black Tattoo' by FM Static. But I love it and keep writing!
Author's Response: I know what you mean. This story is never really loved for it's subject manner, but I'm glad that you're ejoying what I'm putting out there. This is really hard to write. It takes me nearly months to write each part because I can only write a few paragraphs at a time before I have to put it away, because I have to go to a dark place in order to get the emotions across. I hope that I'm doing okay at that. I just went and listend to the song, and it does remind me of this story line. I might use it if I ever decide to expand on this. Thanks for pointing it out and thanks for the review.
Reviewer: PosyThatsMe (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 02:20 AM · On: Introduction
That was very good! I'm so excited to hear more! Can I find you on fantiction.net? (:
Author's Response: yes you can find me on fanfiction. I have the first two parts posted there. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: SaraiCullen (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 01:36 AM · On: Introduction
My interested has been peaked...
Author's Response: I'm glad. the first chapter is in the cue line now so now it's just a matter of waiting for it to go through. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Dee100 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 11:13 PM · On: Introduction
great first chapter, makes me want to read more and hear her story - look forward to next update
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The odd thing about this one is that While Esme starts out the story you never really hear much about her past until the end chapter 1-3 are about Alice, Bella, and Rose. The next chapter is in the cue so It should be up some time soon hopefully.
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