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Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2016 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 9
A good but unexpected finish.
Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 3
hey, i'm still reading. its all so poignant
Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was beautiful.
Reviewer: bella2699 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
That was good oh and HEY IM READING
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're reading! Thank you for your review and I hope you will continue to enjoy the story! :D
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 7
I guess I missed this chapter when my sister called. She cannot let go of him anymore that her can let go of her.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 9
Such a beautiful story. I cry real tears in the beauty of thier HEA. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Sandra
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading my story! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it and I really appreciate all your lovely reviews along the way! :D
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 8
This night. It was his fate. His destiny. Will he join Bella? Or will she return him?
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 6
Yes, and how does one explain that? It is as if she is there watching over him.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 5
Last chapter I was so wrapped up with Bella that I did not ask about Jasper. And my heart sinks further as nothing more was ever found of Bella.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 4
OMG, NO! Will he ever find her?
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 3
With a Father's blessing promises of tomorrow are just that .... promising.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 2
Ah, to be so young and so in love already.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Who wouldn't want to be seen? Aknowledged?
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 9
You did an amazing job! Fabulous story! I loved the happy ending & all the facts & research!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the story! Thank you for reading and for all your wonderful reviews along the way!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 8
Wow ..is this the end for Edward?
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh!!!! Great twist,!!! ;). Loved this, wonderful job!!!
Author's Response: Yeah! So glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and for all your lovely reviews! :)
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 9
Thank you - this was lovely!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading and for your review!
Reviewer: twilightfanatic (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just started this story, i
wanted to know the ages of edward and bella, thanks!
Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for reading. To me the exact ages aren't important because I want it to be about the feelings the circumstances evoke and I want readers to be able to fill in the blanks on some of the finer details so I left it more general. But in my mind, in the first chapter they are meant to be 6-8 years old. In the second chapter they are meant to be 10-12 years old. In the third chapter, they are 19.
I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh no! I guess they'll be together in the afterlife......
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Next chapter should be up soon. :)
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 7
Hey darlin'
Sorry I've not reviewed, I've been dealin' with real life and then went to a get together of 20 Twilight Moms...of a certain age! Had a blast!
Anyhoo, I am still fascinated with your sad tale of love lost. I hope that somehow you'll get them together again. Although he's not my fave Cullen, I hate to see Edward so distraught.
Could she be real? Will he take his own life to be with his love? Will she come back in another body? I'm prayin' for an HEA, here, but that's not always the case now, is it? Gahhh...so many questions to be answered in the next couple of chapters.
So, now I am waitin' for MORE PLEASE, ASAP
Hugs,
Ellen xx
Author's Response: That's cool, I know how real life is. :) Glad you had fun at the TwiMoms get together! And I'm so happy to read your review as always. :) Next chapter should be posted soon!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
I guess bella is a ghost? Poor Edward...he is just tortured without her, but can he live with her in this state?
Author's Response: So glad you're still reading! :)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 7
he's able to touch her???? so she's real? not dead??? can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you're still reading! :) Next one should be on its way soon!
Reviewer: Cora (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hi!
You've got me really curious :-) I wonder what Bella is now...because I really don't think she's human anymore.
I guess I'll have to wait a bit until I now ;-)
Thanks for writing this, it's a great story so far!
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! :D Thank you for reading and for your review!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 6
Very interesting! Is Bella a ghost or part of his imagination? Looking forward to more ... love your descriptive writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
So sad....
Author's Response: :( Thank you for reading.
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