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Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 04:35 AM · On: The Ultimate Cover Up
I love this story! I hope you continue. I'm not a huge fan of the different points of view though. I like reading one point of view with an option to read another if I want. Not just your story either :) I'm just a big BPOV person! Makes it more real and mysterious as to what Edward is really thinking! Please continue the story!!!
Reviewer: Dee100 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 11:11 PM · On: The Ultimate Cover Up
Loving this story...please update soon :)
Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 03:43 PM · On: The Ultimate Cover Up
awesome story! great start, wonderful pacing and good sense of character development. i'm very intrigued as to where you will be taking this story. i'm along for the ride. kudos ajr818!!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 12:29 PM · On: The Ultimate Cover Up
can't wait for more
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 10:49 AM · On: The Ultimate Cover Up
So several thing have made me curious. Why doesn't he want to see his Mom? Why is he such a jerk and what are those files he's hiding?
Very curious... thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 04:50 AM · On: The Ultimate Cover Up
well I hope the repeat stuff won't be a regular occurance. It feels like NOTHING happens when you just repeat the same happenings in the other POV.
Looking forward to seeing what you do next.
Reviewer: LadyExcalibur (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 03:23 AM · On: The Ultimate Cover Up
Loved it! As always.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 11:45 AM · On: Unattainable
ready for more
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Unattainable
Hmmm I wonder what made Jasper run off... LOL It was very inappropriate for him to gab and hold her like that in the elevator, I did notice that althought she didn't really mind, there didn't seem to be any "heat" on her side in that she didn't really enjoy it. I can't wait for E&B to meet, I want her to take Rose' advice and be snarky. I love a fiesty Bella. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Dee100 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Unattainable
oohhhhh...very interested to see whats going to happen with Bella and Jasper, is he into her? and alos cant wait for bella and Edwrad to meet
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Clumsy
Absolutely adorable but before the praise and adoration can begin, i have questions
will there be Emmett? you cant have a story without Emmett, especially if there is a Rose
Will there be an Alice, espicially if he is already hitting on B
not sure how i feel about that :p
you are off to a great start, i am buckled in and ready for the ride
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 01:22 PM · On: Clumsy
looking forward to more
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 01:22 PM · On: Clumsy
looking forward to more
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 10:05 AM · On: Clumsy
Hmmmm.... I wondered if it was Jasper or James that knocked her over. I can't wait to how this goes.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 04:29 AM · On: Miss Independent
Okay so excited to see where you take this :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 01:27 PM · On: Miss Independent
Looking forward to more
Good writting
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 01:27 PM · On: Miss Independent
Looking forward to more
Good writting
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 01:27 PM · On: Miss Independent
Looking forward to more
Good writting
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 04:07 AM · On: Miss Independent
This looks like it might be an interesting story... I look forward to more.
Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 01:45 AM · On: Miss Independent
Okay, let's see where this baby is going to go! Obviously no love triangle with the Jakester -- thank God. We're not going to have any messiness with Jasper/Bella/Edward, are we?
Anyway, your opening chapter gives me lots of hope!
Reviewer: ichiko (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 03:41 PM · On: Miss Independent
this story so far is really cute! i love bella and edward stories like this! looking forward to more! :3
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