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Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Stem

oh so bella is auntie... and were alice and jasper on drugs or something???

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 04:42 PM · On: Blossom

Poor sexually frustrated Edward! I think I would have made out just a little or a lot later-still satisfying! Plus, she needs to go with her gut on Jasper, a little spying would be justified!

Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 11:38 AM · On: Blossom

Great chapter!!!!! Maybe Brandon is starting to like Edward more than Jasper so he is a little sad to have to go with his Dad. LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT UPDATE :)

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 06:08 AM · On: Blossom

Thank you!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 05:01 AM · On: Blossom

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 10:31 PM · On: Spring

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2011 08:45 AM · On: Spring

Awesome chapter!!!!!!!! the check yes or no was just to cute <3 PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: cherromate23 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2011 05:18 AM · On: Spring

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW....I wish someone would ask me out like that :)

Reviewer: JeanneC (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 05:52 PM · On: Spring

Edwards note was cute.

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 02:39 PM · On: Stem

Wow ! I didn't see that coming. Nice. i'm really enjoying this.

Merrily

Kat

Reviewer: Nyla Sparks (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 01:38 PM · On: Spring

I love Grumpy Old Men; it reminds me of my Grandpa- old and extremely Grinch-like. =]

And you're right, this chapter was fluff to the extreme- I love it!

-Nyla Sparks

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 09:59 AM · On: Spring

It's so fluffy!!!!! I saw that movie 10 times eight of those times by myself. I just love your story and am going to see how it ends. I am sure there are some tuff times a comeing but I am in for the long run. I love your Edward and LaLa and Brandon has won my heart. So till next time thanks for sharing your story.

Lilly

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 07:22 AM · On: Spring

that was just too cute ....right out of second grade but cute

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 06:24 AM · On: Spring

Aw, Edward is so cute! So is there more to Brandon's reluctance to go with Jasper than his illness? I hope not. Though the new car raises some alarm bells!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 03:24 AM · On: Spring

Hi! Thank you! Sorry for my ignorance, but could you explain "color-coding" for drug probation?

Author's Response:
I'm sorry, I probably should've explained it a little more thoroughly. It may not be a common practice everywhere. If someone is color-coded, they are assigned a color. Each day, they are supposed to call in and see what color what chosen for the day. If their color is chosen, they have 24 hrs to check-in for a drug test. There are no patterns to the colors, so it's very random. A way to keep them on their toes, if you will. I hope that explains it. If you have any other questions, send me a message. =) Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 01:41 AM · On: Spring

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: mstre11 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 11:32 PM · On: Spring

Love this story!Edward is so adorable that was so cute with the note askin her to be his girlfriend.Glad she's letting him in so she can have some 1 else to turn to and be happy with.

Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Spring

I loved it! Usually when Edward asks that it's just cheesy and this was cute and funny! I've got some suspesions w/ Jasper and his car, I really hope I'm not right. We shall see though, update again soon :-)

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 05:20 PM · On: Spring

well they are so cute together! keep the updates comming

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 12:40 PM · On: Blow

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: rbdfan08 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 09:30 AM · On: Blow

omg that was beyond cute. i admire this bella so much and edward and her are cute. thanks for the chapter and please post soon!

Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 10:49 PM · On: Blow

Its nice to get some answers, some I expected. I love the dandelion story, it fits in nicely :-) Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: malie (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Blow

i liked the story .ed didnt mind aboubell story good man i think allice should give her rights up as a parent because she sure didnt act like one for jaz how can he have alight scentis jaz should got more WRITE SOON PLES DONT LEAVE MY HUNGIN HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!TRUE READER

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 02:30 PM · On: Blow

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 02:23 PM · On: Blow

And Edward can already see the worth behind her devotion! Now kiss him!

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