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Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2014 01:23 PM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

This story needs to be finished. It is very well done.



Author's Response:

It is finished on TWCS and fanfiction.  It can be read there.  Fanfiction even has some one-shots.  It was just too much hassle to get the chapters through the review process here.  Times might have changed, I haven't attempted it in years.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2014 01:16 PM · On: He Picked Me

futuristic... sort of has a A Handmaid's Tale flavor... I like it

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 06:09 AM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

this is good, i really hope there is more to the story then this!

Reviewer: blackrose166 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 11:35 AM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

when are you going to write a new chapter please respond

Reviewer: kadds (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 05:09 PM · On: The New Age Begins

I really can't wait for you to update! Love the story so far(: 

Reviewer: blackrose166 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2011 06:10 PM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

when are you going to post a new chapter?



Author's Response:

I have redone the story and restarted the process. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: blackrose166 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 04:52 PM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

this is really good when are you posting the next chapter



Author's Response:

I can't seem to be able to get my next chapter by the validation beta.  She won't accept it unless it is beta'd.  I put up an ad for a beta on the Twilighted Forum almost a month ago and no has responded. So I have pretty much given up.  I am sorry, but I don't know what else to do.  Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: blackrose166 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

this is really good i liked it. its really diffrent from most of the stories and its refreshing  bravo.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

Very creative! Ready for more! ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 09:33 PM · On: He Picked Me

Pretty darn severe, but if anyone needed Time-Out, it would be Rosalie!

Author's Response:

Well, I thought time-out would be an appropriate punishment to give her time to think about her actions.  I really didn't want to use physical abuse as a punishment, I want her to gain trust in them.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pinklady34 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 05:12 PM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

oh i loved epov...i hope we get more in the future.  and emmett is going to have a real hard time getting rosalie to submit to their ways.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and yes, Emmett will have his hands full.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 03:04 AM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

i am not sure if this is accurate but right now, i am picturing the twilight living community to resemble that of the one in night. m shyamalan's 'the village' lol. however, i'm enjoying the added "other planet/superior beings" twist. can't wait for you to belt out the next chapter and describe the binding ceremony as well as to see what or how rosalie is going to be handled by emmett



Author's Response:

The clothing may be similar, but the housing in more elaborate and there is a small town with stores that they can purchase things.  I will have pics of the houses in the upcoming chapters.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 12:37 AM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

i love E's POV! is the isolation room just for 1 day?

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter!  No, Rose will stay in the isolation room until she comes to her senses.  In other words, she will be in there for a while.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 10:30 PM · On: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

i find this a very good story keep going and post soon

bye bye



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you are enjoying reading it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 07:32 AM · On: He Picked Me

keep gpoing and post soon

bye bye



Author's Response:

I plan to keep going and I hope you are enjoying the story.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 07:54 AM · On: He Picked Me

i like this idea very much and i hope you continue writing it.



Author's Response:

Thanks and I hope you continue to like my story. Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 04:36 PM · On: He Picked Me

Rose looks like she'll be spending a lot of time in that room......

Author's Response:

Yes, it takes Rose a while to come around to the Twilight way of thinking.  Thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: pinklady34 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 04:28 PM · On: He Picked Me

i am glad that bella is being strong and really trying to make things work.  i wonder if we can get a epov?  and emmett really needs to be patient with rosalie and carlisle is really hard core!



Author's Response:

Edward POV is next.  Carlisle is strict right now, to get his bluff in on the girls.  He warms up and the true Carlisle shows up later.  But he still holds a lot of authority, him and Peter started this community.

Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 04:23 PM · On: He Picked Me

So......branded, confined, and told what to do and when.  Yup, sounds fabulous.  All I can say is, the sex better damn well be "out of this world"! 



Author's Response:

LOL, I try to make it out of this world.  Bella will have no complaints.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Vamp-by-night (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 04:11 PM · On: The New Age Begins

Im intrigued by this whole concept. It sorta reminds me of The Handmaiden's Tale. So far it sounds interesting but Im looking forward to more getting to know alien Edward a bit more.



Author's Response:

Thanks and I hope that you enjoy the story and thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 02:50 PM · On: He Picked Me

Interesting and cute , keep writing !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 09:52 PM · On: The New Age Begins

Very different! I'm curious as to how you are going to handle this story. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you enjoy it!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 03:54 AM · On: The New Age Begins

good begining, good luck, can't wait to read the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you enjoy my story and thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: pinklady34 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 04:31 PM · On: The New Age Begins

this story seems interesting and i really can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you will enjoy it.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 07:31 AM · On: The New Age Begins

I am looking forward to this story - very interesting and different.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review and rating!

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