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Reviewer: londonluv (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 6- Safe and Sound
This chapter was so emotional... It made me tear. I hope Edward will be okay when they finally get him home. thank you for updating. Hope to read more soon.
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 6- Safe and Sound
This is a great story, but the "baby" talk is a bit unsettling...is there a particular reason why? I get that he is their beloved and is taken care of more because of his blindness, but it's just very strange. Otherwise, I love the premise of the story and look forward to more.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 6- Safe and Sound
Wow! A question - How did the venom not restore his sight?
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 6- Safe and Sound
I'm so glad you started writing again!!! Please don't stop. It made me very sad. I can't wait to see where this story is going.
Cat
Reviewer: ArodLoverus2001 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 6- Safe and Sound
interesting update. can't wait for bella to come into the story. please update soon.
Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 6- Safe and Sound
OMG, this is horrible, but I'm glad Dr. C and Jazz was able to calm him down. I love this story so much!!!!
Reviewer: foreverstudent (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Dear Dr. P
This story is interesting. Please update sometime.
Reviewer: Weewaa (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Dear Dr. P
Loooooooooving this story please more soon ;-))
Reviewer: Benalli (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Who is He
gorgeous cronicles heep!
Author's Response: Thanks , I think? Well I may have no idea what you are saying but I'm glad you thought it was enough to make you review ! ;)
Reviewer: londonluv (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Dear Dr. P
This chapter was really good. It's getting more exciting! I want Edward to go home! I can't wait to read more, please write more thank you.
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Reviewer: faeking (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Dear Dr. P
um... moar please. Edward needs to go home.
Reviewer: danielle (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Dear Dr. P
i love it please write more it is so amazing!!!!!
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Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Dear Dr. P
thanks good chapter
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Reviewer: PunkieMama (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Who is He
the wholebaby boy and children thing really throws me off...imean alicein chapter two sounded like seven year old when she called carlise daddy. i had to take a break from it after three chapters...dunno if i will come back for more. but hopefully things improve later on. the plot idea was intresting but the style may justbe to juvenile for me.
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Reviewer: Evi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2011 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Alive
Really a weird story. Not sure I like the whole vampires acting like little babies and such.
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Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Dear Dr. P
The concept of children is throwing me off. How old are they? Curious...
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Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2011 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Dear Dr. P
You go Jasper! Bring Edward home!!!!
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Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Who is He
It takes quite a bit to get me to stop reading ;) Jasper leaves Alice for Bella, Bella turns into a werewolf and inprints on Jake, those stopped me reading. You story, however, had great potential to be a favorite for me. And I don't mean just as a means to keep track of it.
Author's Response: I'm sorry for not responding! I got so caught up with stuff that wasn't able to keep up with wonderful reviewers like you! ;) I'm gald you like my story and I hope my soon to be next chapter keeps you reading! Thank you for the review, you have to be one of my favorites so far! ;p
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Information
Potentially interesting, but it's form a real opinion on so little material. I look forward to further updates
Author's Response: I'm glad our still reading at least! I hope I can please you! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: whisperwind (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Information
Great story so far...
Author's Response: Thanks... I guess these dots our to silently telling me to move my butt and get the next chapter up huh? Well I start on it tonight, don't worry! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: redauntie1 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Information
crap, daddy is mad and on the warpath.
Author's Response: You bet, but just to tease, someone starts for Daddy! I bet you can't guess who! hehehe sorry don't worry it will be in the next chapter! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: londonluv (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Information
Awe poor Edward, I hope he heals after all of this. Thanks for updating hope to read more soon. The plot is good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your praise helps me write so much faster! Thank you again!
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Information
Wow, I'm so completely captivated!
Author's Response: I'm gald your enjoying the story! I hope you are still captivated by the time I get the next chapter out! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Information
thanks good chapter
Author's Response: Your Welcome, and thanks for reading and reviewing! It makes my day! ;)
Reviewer: redshoes (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Information
great!
Author's Response: Glad you think so! Thanks for reviewing and reading!
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