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Reviews For His Eyes Were Hers
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 03:55 PM · On: His Eyes Were Hers

You cruel, evil people! How do you do something like that to someone as sweet and innocent as Alice! You should all rot in hell! *cough* OK, angry rant over now. *Happy dance when she finds Jasper*

Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 12:44 AM · On: His Eyes Were Hers

So gentle and sweet this story was: I wish it was longer, smiles! 

Well done!

Reviewer: Alicesanakid (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 07:26 PM · On: His Eyes Were Hers

I loved it! Great job! :D

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 02:29 PM · On: His Eyes Were Hers

Before you say anything, I am going to review again because it is a PIC thing. We are allowed to complain, but shh..secretly you know I will always be reviewing regardless of what you say!

So I will comment on something I didn't comment on before..

Her eyes snapped open, the light before them felt like flames. She closed them again, hoping to return to her utopia, the dream land where she could see him, her angel.

Jasper, I love him, she remembered.

But she knew she had to wait now and the grief at her loss settled heavily over her stone heart, the heart that would remain cold until she saw him again.

It is like she has to remind herself that she loves Jasper, and even though she is in that hell, she loves him and that love will keep her going until she is free from that place and can find him.

Just imagine how long she had to wait though, in that place and then afterwards when she was a vampire. It was so long for her to wait for Jasper :(

Yes, yes, Edward had to wait longer..but shh, we are talking about Jalice here ;)

I still hate those people there using the word of God as if they have the right. I know I said it before, but they are the people God would be against. Disgusting people.

What happened to the friend? Did she die? It wouldn't surprise me if she did, what those people do.. *shakes head* They wouldn't have a problem covering it up, either.

Oh, I added this to my Jalice series..hope you don't mind :)



Author's Response:

Crazy PIC, reviewing EVERYTHING! But I love you for that so I'll shhh. 

It's something positive to think. Even if it happened or not, I like the idea that Alice saw Jasper when she was human and that Jasper was 'there' for her. 

People in that time where crazy and with religion it's worse. It's so sad that all this abuse was covered so easily, even today the church, any church, has crazy things that they just hide. Crazy, fucked up priests and nuns. 

I think the friend was released in a bad shape, but I don't think they killed her. 

The Jalice series?! YAYYYY! 

Reviewer: idealskeptic (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 01:11 AM · On: His Eyes Were Hers

Awesome story! Such perfect Alice and Jasper. Thanks for sharing and good luck!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your amazing review!

They had ugly, dark pasts but in the end, they are together. :) Glad you liked it <3

Reviewer: kelcom (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 11:15 PM · On: His Eyes Were Hers

so good!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it :) 

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