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Reviews For The Perfect Girl
Reviewer: browniegyrl (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2014 02:56 PM · On: The Unforeseen Consequences

Wow!  What a first meal together!   Poor Bella.   Can't wait to see what happens Next! 

Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2014 10:19 AM · On: The Impulsive Chase

LOVE IT!! Will you be updatin sooner now??

Author's Response:

I submitted the next chapter on Sunday, it should be up later today. Thank you for reading and reviewing. xo Mina ♥

Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2014 11:20 PM · On: The Idealistic Painter

Enjoying this story... so glad to be reading at Twilighted again!!!


Reviewer: sunshine_yellow (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2014 04:23 AM · On: The First Meeting

wow great story more please

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you are enjoying it. I upload a chapter every Sunday, but it usually takes a couple of days to get validated. So the next chapter should be up by next Tuesday/Wednesday. xo Mina

Reviewer: bluedove (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2014 05:42 PM · On: The First Meeting

Love the story so far, can't wait to see what happens next update. Renee is such a bitch, why does she favor her son over Bella?


Author's Response:

Your questions will be answered soon, have patience. I have a plan for this Bella ;) xo Mina

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 06:26 PM · On: The Pragmatic Gentleman

This story has a great start. I really like that you didn't tell us who Alice was talking to right away. Edward seems his normal emo self;) Great Bella trying to make the best of things.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 12:30 AM · On: The Pragmatic Gentleman

So I take it that this Bella is still in highschool...of some sort?

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. Bella is a senior, about to graduate from High School.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 12:34 PM · On: The Pragmatic Gentleman

Love the story!  Poor bella just can't catch a break here!  Edward & Alice are so much fun interacting together!

Reviewer: sweetswirlypop (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 03:55 PM · On: The Pragmatic Gentleman

I like it so far. But you should probably credit/ put a disclaimer about the manwha as well.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and I credited the manga on the story notes.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 08:01 AM · On: The Pragmatic Gentleman

great beginning! can't wait to read the next chapter.....i can sympathize with Bella about the favoritism issue...!

Author's Response:

thanks for ALL of your reviews.  I whished I could update faster, but it takes longer to update here than in anywhere else... =( Glad to see you couldn't wait and found the rest of the chapters over the other site! LOL

Reviewer: butterlfybetty (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 08:02 PM · On: The Pragmatic Gentleman

So happy to see this over here:)

Author's Response:

me too! my first fic and it's on twilighted... so happy! :)

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