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Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hey very cool 1 shot i like it cause its different =]=]=]

Reviewer: AnaPrintemps (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

It's a nice little what if, although it implies a higher rating, you know!

Still, it's a sweet notion. And well written besides. Good job!

Author's Response:
Hmm, I only implied a few kisses and nothing else... I'm not sure what you mean

Reviewer: AnaPrintemps (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

It's a nice little what if, although it implies a higher rating, you know!

Still, it's a sweet notion. And well written besides. Good job!

Reviewer: KerriDia (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

I've yet to read anything that you've written that I haven't been impressed with. I'm not prone to read one-shots, but I decided to take a chance ;). Needless to say, I'm glad I did! Excellently written....as usual.

Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this take on something Edward would be thinking. It seems very realistic to what Stephenie Meyer would have Edward think. Hope to find more of your writing.

melanie

Reviewer: LeeLeeLove (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is so sweet and sad...

Reviewer: edwardandbella4eva (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

that's awsome!!!!!!!! this is one of the best one-shots i hav read so far!!!! it is so sweet, yet so sad. awww, he seemed so happy to be human and so in pain when it went away.... awwwww. good writing!!!

Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this! It was so beautifully written, very poignant and incredibly heartbreaking. I always imagined how their relationship would be different if Edward were human, but I couldn't imagine it. This story gave me a small but lovely glimpse into the life they could have had, and it was heartbreakingly beautiful. :o)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this. It was very sweet and very emotional. You reached in to Edward's head and pulled out his most sought after dream. You did it brillantly. Very well done!

Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

So beautifully written. It was subtle, not forced whatsoever but so, so emotional. It was amazing. WONDERFUL JOB.

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