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Reviewer: sweetswirlypop (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 7
Awww. A desperate and emotional chapter for Edward.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 7
Aww...poor Edward.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 7
She wouldn't leave Benny!!!! I have to go with Edward and see hope, it's better than the alternative. However, I do understand why Marcus has to go the other side in this one. Sadly that's what Edward needs, even if at the moment it makes him feel worse yet.
He has been scared of being left alone, behind, for a long time. He wasn't afraid or ashamed about telling her about it. She got him, probably because of different circumstances, but she got him. She said it, where would she go?...
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
Poor Edward. You're right; it was sad, but it was also very good.
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ah ha...so he finally is realizing that she is missing and that she didn't run away. Now I think we're getting somewhere. Can't wait to see where this is going. Write soon please.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 7
thank you!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 7
=*( so maybe bella didn't leave on her own accord? because she really doesn't come off as the type of girl to run from her problems. poor edward and benny.
Reviewer: Misti92482 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh my God, that whole strapping Benny in the seatbelt, I about died. That was so freakin cute & sad. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :) I love Benny.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 6
It's probably been asked already but stilll, if she willingly left, why did Benny stayed behind? To keep Edward company, as a reminder?
He seems awfully important to both of them.
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! Benny will be in the next chapter. It just needs to be validated.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 5 / Outtake
How he was able to leave the messages without laughing is something some of Mike's co-workers might be wondering, I am.
In such a situation it is things like this that help people to not loose their minds.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 4
Edward needs people on his side, not to defend himself to the outside world only, but to stand by him and help him find out what has been going on that he has so clearly missed.
Talking... it's under-rated, over-rated, under-estimated and most of the times simply isn't taken into consideration when it should be one of the most important things. A simple assumption can make things go so good and so bad...
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 3
Both were nervous, unsure and it does seem didn't go out much, so at least the awkwardness is something they both understand and feel. Was this strange start an omen of what was to come next?
Edward feels lost, even in a small and well known place like Forks. He realizes he isn't seen as a victim, he isn't liking it. But he isn't helping his case either....
Reviewer: bogchild (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
what a tease!
Author's Response: I know, right? But it was at least a romantic cockblocking, no? Haha. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
great part.
Author's Response: Thanks :) It's my favorite so far.
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 6
Aww...this was so sweet, and so sad.
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my....this looks so good! I loved the timeline of 500 days of summer, and I can't wait to see how you play with time here.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 6
That was sad and cute at the same time.
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 6
You know your writing, your use of phrase is really good. I'm just having trouble following the story.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 6
Edward can't see in the master bedroom because of waking without Bella. Strange her prize possession of Benny, a gift from her father, was one of the personal possessions she didn't take with her. Wonder why? To have Edward lay on it now and to remember the night they almost made love on her twin bed laying on it then. Benny actually snuggled with Bella when Edward handed it to her. He placed above them and then next snuggled to sleep. Benny represents her innocence and sweetness. Edward is missing her. Still stumped why he would want a divorce if he has such strong feelings for Bella.
Author's Response: Yep, Benny will be in the next chapter as well. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 6
Love it! he seems so cautious & captivated with bella - I just can't figure out where things went wrong!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 5 / Outtake
Funny! I guess Edward showed them!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 6
well that a different turn of events she wouldnt leave her bear would she?
Author's Response: I like the way you think, my friend. Edward brings that up in the next chapter.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 6
Thank you!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 6
Ugh...I'm dying to know what the hell happened between them to break them apart! Amazing job, keep up the good work! ;)
Reviewer: fiercepixie (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 6
I am liking this story the more I read it. It is a slow burn that's for sure. So many questions, I can't wait to read and find out more. Good story.
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