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Reviewer: dianasdaughter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 1- Conditions
Loving it so far. I appreciate your attention to detail in following the same dialogue as Eclipse - I also like seeing how some of Edward's responses are interpreted, especially the statement, "You compare one small tree to an entire forest".
Reviewer: dianasdaughter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 1- Conditions
Loving is so far. I appreciate your attention to detail in following the same dialogue as Eclipse - I also like seeing how some of Edward's responses are interpreted, especially the statement, "You compare one small tree to an entire forest".
Reviewer: goldeyedsoul (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 2- Visions and Vacations
Hey,
just found your fic:) really really like it!
Hope you'll update soon!
xoxo
Author's Response: I'm working on it! Will get the next chapter out as soon as I can....darn real life tends to get in the way!
Author's Response: I'm working on it! Will get the next chapter out as soon as I can....darn real life tends to get in the way!
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 2- Visions and Vacations
I like seeing how his thought process works. All the detailed descriptions.
Author's Response: I really wanted to be able to get into Edward's mind. It's a crazy place...and it's gonna be getting crazier!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 2- Visions and Vacations
Great chapter. Looking forward to Florida
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 1- Conditions
great start! this first chapter meshes well with Eclipse. can't wait to read more EPOV.
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 1- Conditions
I can already tell I'm going to like your story. Seeing things from Edward's viewpoint in your story meshes well with Stephanie's writing of Bella's story.
Reviewer: cmg (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 1- Conditions
Looking forward to your next chapter - you have captured Edward very well!
Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 1- Conditions
Good job! Eclipse is my favorite book, so I'll definitely be sticking around :) There aren't too many EPOVs around.
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