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Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 02:46 AM · On: 6: Switzerland Takes a Stand
Love this story!
Sometimes I get a little frustrated with Bella's attitude, she is holding a little bit to much power over Edward sometimes and I think she is sometimes getting back at him for leaving her and they need to be equals! Edward needs to stand up to her once and awhile because we all know that Bella won't withhold sex for to long because she loves it and Edward alot!
After all she is the one that pushed the sex issue and now she is holding it over his head all of the time! That is the first thing she always threatens him with when she gets pissy! Just my thoughts!
Author's Response: True about the withholding sex. I do it to my husband too but we both know it will NEVER happen and it hasn't. Technically they are equals, Edward dazzles Bella without meaning to and Bella does the same to Edward and doesn't know it. In the next few chapters, Edward calls her bluff which will be funny to see.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 12:49 PM · On: 6: Switzerland Takes a Stand
loved it!!
and don't sweat over the updates everyone gets stressed out, lol
can't wait till the next chapter
well until next time
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you loved it and understand if my updating slows down. I hate having to slow it down. >.<
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 12:19 PM · On: 6: Switzerland Takes a Stand
freaking emmet! i bet he did that on purpose! they are so cute! and im glad to see the dog is still giving edward a hard time!! i love that dog!
Author's Response: LOL, leave it to Emmett to mess things up. I love the dog too. She adds a level of humor to the story that Emmett can't.
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 02:47 AM · On: 6: Switzerland Takes a Stand
Really good chapter. I do wonder which one, Bella or Edward, will murder Emmett and Rose first. hehe
Author's Response: LOL, well currently, only Edward is really capable of dismembering....OOOoh, what if they gang up, I could work that in somehow. That would be funny.
Reviewer: sweetblood19 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 02:20 AM · On: 6: Switzerland Takes a Stand
omg, edward keeps getting cockblocked! way too funny i am crying over here and can't type properly, talk about bad timing emmett!
Author's Response: I figured it would be a funny way to end the chapter. He/they will be able to vent next chapter ^_-
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 01:07 PM · On: 5: Suggestions
they are so awesome together! i have something like that with my husband! it actually hurts when hes gone. i hope that they can get victoria before she causes anymore damage!
Author's Response: I have the same with my hubs, I hate it when he's at work all day. We know they get Victoria but I'm not guaranteeing no damage will be done first.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 05:13 PM · On: 5: Suggestions
enjoyed Bella rendering Alice speachless hehe :) seeing Leah so sunny was a bit odd, but good for a change :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it would be a nice change to see Leah happy for once.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 09:49 PM · On: 5: Suggestions
Well I just love your Edward and Bella, they are sexy and just so damn funny together.
Thank you for putting Leah and Jake together, I think they are perfect for each other and a happy Leah is about time in my book. She always got the short end of the stick if you ask me in the books!
Loving the Lovin! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks. I agree about Leah, she never did get her happily ever after. I much prefer if everyone gets a HEA by the time I'm done with my saga. ^_^
Reviewer: dmsummerfield (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 08:20 PM · On: 5: Suggestions
loving the story please update soon
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 08:38 AM · On: 5: Suggestions
I love this story. It is exciting, funny and sexy. This Edward and Bella are fun and the sex is great. It is good to see Jacob happy and that he and Leah are imprints. She needed love too.
Update soon.
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Author's Response: I'm glad your happy about everything. I never did like the fact that Leah was a genetic dead end in SM's version. I want everyone happy ^_^
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 05:40 AM · On: 5: Suggestions
It's so nice to see Leah happy and in love, especially as everyone always writes her bitter, sullen and sour on life. Bella and Edward are like two incendiary magnets, slamming together and bursting into flame. Bronte is so much fun to read about, she's just one smart dog!. I'm betting Edward is thinking right now of presents he can buy for Alice as a reward for her idea of moving stuff to Edward's .
Author's Response: It's good to hear that you liked the happy Leah. Concidering their connection and need for each other, its only natural that there would be fireworks. Hmmm, I need to do some thinking on the Alice gift, she already has her car.
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 04:13 PM · On: 5: Suggestions
Yummy chapter... :)
Author's Response: LOL, thanks.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 04:10 PM · On: 4: It's All Too Much
Edward is the most thoughtful, considerate, loving vampire in the world. At least, in Bella's world. The unknown vamp scents, in Seattle and on Quileute lands are not a very good sign. Vigilance is the watchword . It's a really good thing that all the Cullens and all the wolves are on the lookout for trouble. By the way, I have to chuckle every time I think about Charlie thinking he's too young to be a grandfather. I should introduce him to my sixty-six year old sister, who's a great-grandmother, three times! That would blow his mind, if he was real!
Author's Response: LOL, my niece is 26 and a great grandmother 2x by marriage. Things are going to getting more interesting regarding vampires/wolves/humans. Hope you have your seatbelt fastened. ^_-
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 03:49 PM · On: 3: Satisfying
Bella knew all along how her mother can be and usually is. All things considered, the visit went well, sex on a moonlit beach with Edward doesn't sound like too much of a hardship. Jacob running from horny teenage females was pretty funny, but his news of Victoria wasn't very amusing. Things are not looking good!
Author's Response: When Victoria is involved, when has it ever been good? Even during serious situations I try to make things a little funny.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 03:28 PM · On: 2: Plans for Escape
Wouldn't you think Edward knows by now, not to try to keep things from Bella? For some reason he thinks he can protect her from everything, and that just isn't feasible. She always finds out,or hears it to begin with. I'm beginning to think sex with Bella is clouding his mind, it's all his hormone-ridden seventeen year old can process. It sort of drowns out the older vampire side of him. Kind of cute, in a way. He needs to focus on what Victoria is up to, to keep Bella from harm.
Author's Response: LOL, the 17 year old is definitely taking over his mind and its oh so funny to see him cuming out of his shell.
Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 01:21 PM · On: 4: It's All Too Much
I liked that Edward got Bella a laptop and that she accepted it. I also like the Jake/Leah pairing. Thank you for updating.
Author's Response: No problem, I'm glad to update when I can. ^_^ J/L should have been a couple from the start but thats my opinion.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 10:14 AM · On: 1: Imprint
As I suspected, Timber is beautiful! This chapter was a goody, I thought, although Renee surprised me by being so accepting of Bella and Edward's engagement. As to why Jacob's imprint isn't returning his devotion, no idea, nor can I think who it might be.
Author's Response: Timber is my baby boy 120% ^_^ I liked the idea of renee and Charlie being more supportive of them. And with the fact that Edward didn't really leave, her parents don't have a reason to hate him. Jake's imprint will surprise you.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 06:47 AM · On: 4: It's All Too Much
Lol no they can't, but it makes this story funny and interesting. And l think bella loved her new laptop.
Loved this chapter and sorry for the late review! lol
well until next time
Author's Response: LOL, better late than never. Honestly, who wouldn't love a laptop, even Bella.
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 08:31 AM · On: 4: It's All Too Much
good chap, looking forward to the next :)
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 01:26 AM · On: 4: It's All Too Much
Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 01:14 AM · On: 1: Imprint
please post soon! I love your story!
Author's Response: Thanks. Its DS's turn to be updated this Friday. ^_^
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 03:51 AM · On: 3: Satisfying
Great chapter, I couldn't stop laughing. Vitamin V, priceless!
Author's Response: Well, vitamins help your body...vampire venom is helping hers...vitamin V is born, lol.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 03:02 AM · On: 3: Satisfying
yes i loved the scene with jake is was hilarous and he rightful deserves it, lol.
I also love how the wolves and cullens are closer it just makes the story so much better.Of course you got to love renee i would die if i had her as a mother lol.
well until next time
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you're liking the fact that the Cullens and wolves are closer cause I'm planning on keeping it that way. I agree about Renee, I would probably die too.
Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 12:16 PM · On: 3: Satisfying
I really liked this chapter. Jacob interactions are much more enjoyable when he's not manipulating Bella and trying to break them up. I also enjoyed their time in Florida, especially Renee's teasing and their midnight walks on the Beach.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm having fun writing out alternate scenerios of the three of them when they're not fighting about something. With them being in Florida for so long, you knew they had to get away for some private time somehow. ^_^
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 09:36 AM · On: 3: Satisfying
There is nothin like some good ole fashion lovin in the sand!!!!!!!!!!!
Poor Jake, getting attacked by some of the girls at Forks! I like that Jake and Edward get along in this story, some of my favorite fanfics have them as friends and I like that Leah is not going to be the poor sad bitchwolf that she is potrayed as in almost every story!
Author's Response: I figured since the triangle was nonexistant they could get along better. I don't think Leah really had much of a chance to have a selfpity party before her own change/imprint. Things will definitely be different between the 4 of them. I'm glad you like the little twists. ^_^
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