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Reviews For It's Not Over
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 10:48 AM · On: Eleven

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 07:27 AM · On: Eleven

Powerful ending to this chapter!  Wow... awesome.  The sad news is I've caught up.  Oh well... now, I just have to add you to my favorites so I  can get myself an email.  :-)

Thanks for sharing your talent!

Oh... hate to break the mood.  But Doctor Carlisle Cullen is no longer at Forks, remember?  Just saying...

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 07:05 AM · On: Ten

This was a fun - well executed chapter!  Well done!  Bravo!

Thank you for sharing your talent!  :-)

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 06:38 AM · On: Five

I'm enjoying this a lot... but that second to the last paragraph just screamed at me.  Referring to Edward's phone call with Alice, you said "She'd blocked the remainder of her thoughts, claiming that I would find out why when I got there."  NOPE.  Edward can't read thoughts over the phone.  :-)

But anyway, enjoying your tale and I want to thank you for sharing your talent!  I so love it when I get to press on given I'm only half way there with what you've completed thus far.  :-)

Reviewer: loving1 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 03:19 PM · On: Ten

fantastic the way Bella handled herself. heres hoping she meant every word.

ppms

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 01:12 PM · On: Ten

Squeeee U can't believe you ended at them pulling away NOOOOOoooooolol!!

Post again soon love love love

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 06:52 AM · On: Ten

I love how Bella handled Tanya!

Reviewer: loving1 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 02:36 PM · On: Nine

ohhh well now I'm curious as to the other thoughts? could it be laurent with them?

ppms.

Reviewer: loving1 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 01:13 PM · On: Six

loved that bella didn't hold back when she Edward arrived at the house. fantastic.

Reviewer: loving1 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 08:39 AM · On: Five

I am loving this fic so far. I'm ,glad I found it. I will b up to date by tonight and hoping that you update often.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2012 08:24 AM · On: Nine

oh snap oh snap oh snap!!! post again soon post post post!!! I wonder if they brought Victoria not knowig teh details muah hahahaha!!!!  I am so proud fo Edwarda nd Bella!!!   I am so glad I found this story because its about time Bella went after Edward!  I can't wait to read more post again soon please please please!

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 02:04 PM · On: Nine

loving it so far!!

Reviewer: wendycd41056 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 02:33 AM · On: Eight

great story  - update soon please

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 05:02 AM · On: Eight

Nice chapter. Hopes she says yes, but I'm wondering if it will really be that easy.

Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 03:23 AM · On: Five

wtf?

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 12:01 PM · On: Seven

Seriously? What kind of evil cliffy is that? Are you trying to torture us? I might just go insane with my imagination working the way it does. Please, pretty please, update ASAP.

Alaina

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 02:39 AM · On: Seven

Woohoo Edward! Makin' moves on Bella! 

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 02:35 AM · On: Seven

Wake up Edward!

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Six

:)

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Five

Hey there,

I was just sort of skimming through this to get a feel for it.  It's a lot like many other New Moon AUs I've read, but still it's own thing.  I just have one quick comment on the end of this chapter.  Edward is talking to Alice over the phone and you mention him blocking out her thoughts.  Was that intentional? Or did you forget that he wouldn't be able to read her mind from hundreds of miles away?  Cell phone or not?

Just curious. :) 

-Ginnie

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 01:33 PM · On: Six

Oh yeah. I love it when she doesn't immediately give in and gives him a piece of her mind.

Alaina

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 03:02 PM · On: Six

Glad they are on the road to recovery.

Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Five

Nice one for Jake!

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 02:01 AM · On: Five

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: motherhen (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 01:14 AM · On: One

I really like this take on the story. Please continue! I NEED to know what happens!

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