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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 7

Well, I guess Charlie is about to meet everyone. I loved that they got together over Chinese food and chopsticks! What a rough way to start a relationship!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

Love that they are officially together. Oh no...poor Esme.

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 7

loved the chapter looking forward to the next cahpter 

Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 6

I like it!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hey lady,

I am still working on your banners. Sorry its taken so long but my schedule a work went from days to nights and I'm still adjusting. But I am almost finished with them both and hopefully you will have them tomorrow.

 

Becca

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2011 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

Cool progress. Sad. Happy.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loved New Year's Eve with Edward and Bella. I want to spend my New Years with them! Poor Momma :( She has to fight for everyone!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm so happy that she admitted her feelings to Edward! The dog poop had me hysterical! I know just how he feels about the smell... Real or imagined! Can't wait for another chapter!

Reviewer: GG999 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter.  Looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 6

This really has been probably your most amazing chapter yet.   It really did show such a warm and wonderful side to the love part of the relationship of Edward and Bella.   I know Bella wants to try to stay proifessional around Edward and his family, but her heart is completely in favor of a real relationship with Edward....and we all agree.   They are absolutely adorable together, and so cute and so tender.    Their kisses, their simple touches...GAH!   So wonderful!   How he touches her back when he leads her somewhere....how Jessica tried, but failed miserably....how Newton tired, and failed as well.   These two are perfect together, and the little dancing they did...with Alice and Jasper...too funny.    I was absolutely ecstatic when Bella made her confession to Edward about how much she cares, even though she shouldn't...but her heart wanted to stay with Edward....yes ...yes...yes!!!   How they kisses at midnight...DAMN....who doesn't want a kiss like that????    Everyone in the room seemed to agree.   I was happy that Bella had Edward stay for a while, and then they ended up falling asleep together.    When he woke up and was so happy to be holding her....DAMN!!!   I can see the light filtering into the room, and his panic set in...lol.    The pancakes...and Bella's reaction to how Edward looked hotter than the pancakes....hehehehe.   Loved it!!!   Your story makes me smile...even though the phone call with Edward's dad was so sad...it is still a story about never giving up....and that is what Edward's mama believes.   Never give up.   She's trying her best to do everything she can to stay alive.   It might be just to see her baby boy happy, but maybe she wants to see her future grandchildren.    Such a heartwarming story, and I for one, love every single chapter.   Please write again soon!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

loved this chapter looking forward to the enxt chatper 

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 5

do you still need a banner maker?

Please check out my thread and email me back with what you think. Thanks, Readergoof.

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=5683

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Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love this fic. That was a nice look into Bella's heart and it is always fun to hear Edward get teased. Keep up the great work and I can't wait until you update!!!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

I'm really enjoying this.  I like Edward and Bella's relationship.  It will be interesting to see how it develops.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 5

Loved the chapter even though, there was some pretty heavy stuff in this one.

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

looking fowrad to the next chapter

Reviewer: LaceyBlack (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 5

yay, I was thrilled to see this updated! Keep going!

Reviewer: GG999 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 5

What a sweet story.  Loving it so far.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 5

Well let's hope Edward soaked up enough words of wisdom this week! Though now that Bella has seen the photo albums, there's no way she won't fall hard for him! Pudgy with braces Edward sounds adorable!

Reviewer: bwaygirl0521 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

i really like how you grouped the different cullens, its different  can't wait for bella and edwawrd to meet

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

this is such a heart warming story ....your characters are so warm real and loving ...he need to keep him at a distance is heart breaking ....i hope he can convince her to try...loosing a mother to Cancer myself it brings back the painful memories but its such a beautiful story .....i love her strength

Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 5

another great chapter :)

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 4

loved it 

Reviewer: kgunter34 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great update.

Reviewer: meltingstar (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

i love, love, looooove your ff. it's truly beautiful!

x thea :)

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