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Reviews For Midwinter
Reviewer: MattmuttSmith (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story. Great flow and character. However, you said that when she called Edward "lad" that that saved her life from Edward killing her. Why would he kill her? He only killed the vile monsters of society not the righteous good folks that hung around churches. Was the Irish lady bad or was she having thoughts of killing someone? Or was he just so thirst stricken that the lady caught him off guard while he was listening to the sermons and caused him to have a momentary lapse of control until she called him "lad?" I don't know, that's the only part that didn't make sense to me, so unfortunately that was the part of this that I did not "like." Overall, great oneshot!

Author's Response:

"Or was he just so thirst stricken that the lady caught him off guard while he was listening to the sermons and caused him to have a momentary lapse of control until she called him "lad?""

YES! You are right that he only killed the monsters of society. That didn't stop him from thinking about killing that lady, though. He's starting to realize how false his god-complex really is.

Thank you for reviewing,
~Woodlily

Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was fantastic!  What a perfect way to end it too, that he had lied and was very, very thirsty.  It's such an Edward way to think and workd it.  I am much interested in Edward's rebellious years and depression as well, keep it coming!  :)



Author's Response:

<Blush> Thank you! Poor Edward, so conflicted-- so guilt-ridden. He caught himself just before he really and truly lost his way.

Sometimes, these vignettes tumble out, complete, all at once; and sometimes, they emerge, bit by bit. This was an example of the former.

I'm very glad you enjoyed it; do keep in touch,

~Woodlily

 

Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

But Edward never took an innocent, he could read their minds. Does yours? Otherwise a well written and good story beginning!

Author's Response:

That's right; he didn't. But who's to say he didn't contemplate it? Once he gave into temptation and drank human blood, how difficult was it for him to stop, I wonder? How far must the avenging angel fall before he finds his way back home? That's what I love about fanfiction: the possibilities!

Thank you very much for your review. Please keep in touch,

~Woodlily

 

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