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Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Your Girlfriend Is Here, Right?

How the hell did she get into the house? That was sick, that stalker is nuts! But I like so much how they did in the press junk and how the other fan treat her! I like the Facebook page

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Your Girlfriend Is Here, Right?

Sick sick stalker!!!

Reviewer: neese96 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Your Girlfriend Is Here, Right?

It's such a sad situation all around. You have to wonder what happened to a person to break them mentally to where those types of actions are seen as acceptable to them. And then the poor person being stalked! I feel sorry for both sides. Loved this chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Your Girlfriend Is Here, Right?

Ok that would scare the shit out of me. I have stayed at a Red Lion Inn not to bad of course it was also a casino so that was a plus. I hope they catch this crazy person soon but I have a feeling it will only get worse before it gets better am I right? Love this story your great.

Lilly

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Did You Really Mean It?

Another fab chapter. I love how Marissa deals with the paps, they don't know whether to be scared or grateful, lol, they should be both.

I'm not sure that Joshua really knows what he's let himself in for, even after that confrontation with the pap.

I'm glad that Rob and Marissa sorted out their disagreement and Marissa will hopefully move in with Rob, but will it be that easy with her job? Is she going to find herself in that position of choosing one over the the other? I know what I'd do 'cos like you I'd love to wake up to Rob everyday too, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: neenee12111111 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Did You Really Mean It?

Great stuff you got here!!! PLEASE put more im dieing here...

Reviewer: tenna (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Did You Really Mean It?

Great read.

As always, looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for writing such an interesting story with lots of spice!

Reviewer: cemcclelland (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Did You Really Mean It?

I have to say, Marissa is a little bit bitchy in this chapter. If Joshua wants to be called Joshua it's rude to call him Josh. She wouldn't like it if he called her Mar. And the trashy comment about the pap's car was unnecessary.

I love your story, especially their relationship. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Call Me

Yay! Definitely yay! The more Rob lemons, the better! ;)

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Wanna Go See a Movie?

I would never have been that calm, cool and collected confronting K.S.

Reviewer: eoanne (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Nothing to Worry About

oooooo!!!! crazy stalker fan!!! love it!!!

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Wait, Where Am I?

I'll take (at least) two Rob-handlings, please!

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Crossover

NC-17 is always better for Rob stories!

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The car ride

GAH! You're killin' me with all the teasing!

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 8 - I'll Be Seeing You

squeeeeeeeee!!!!!

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Sunday Part II

*sigh* Just one kiss??

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Nothing to Worry About

Hmmm, stubborn is right. Marissa should listen to Jerry and Rob, this stalker sounds as though they're closer than Marissa thinks. I mean how did a delivery get into her office without the receptionist noticing? It's either someone she works with or the stalker has 'persuaded' someone else working their to put the flowers in her office, either way she should seriously be on her guard.

I hope that Rob can take what Marissa said as something that was in the heat of the moment and wasn't meant to devalue their relationship in any way, I can see why he would be offended though.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Jane x

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Do I Know You?

Awww. He likes her.

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meet Up

Hooked...
Oh, if only...

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Nothing to Worry About

Creepy stalker alert. You knew something like that would happen.

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 18 - It's a Wrap

I am loving this story! Can't wait to see what you do with these two. Great job!!

Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 18 - It's a Wrap

LO-OVE these two - so happy they are together again!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 - It's a Wrap

I love Rob and Marissa and how they're not hiding their relationship at all. I love what her colleagues did for her in the meeting at work, lol.

Wow that reunion was hot, I'm still fanning myself now.

Is Marissa courting trouble being so friendly with the paps or should I say FWC's (I love that)? Will there be a stalker coming out of he woodwork? Will Benny turn into some sort of psycho? Lol.

I really love this story, it's so different and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Jane x

Author's Response:
Hi Jane,

I'm so glad you like the story. Rob and Marissa are so fun to write for. Stay tuned for what happens next.

Thanks,

Mary

Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 18 - It's a Wrap

This is a great story! Just finish it and I liked it! So how come the paps haven't found where she lives? and What was Melanie going to tell her?

Author's Response:
Hi AmayaBlack,

Thanks, I'm glad you like the story. I hope you'll keep reading - I think you'll like where it goes.

Thanks,

Mary

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 18 - It's a Wrap

I think it is great that they love each other so much and it is really nice to see him having a some what normal life with the women he loves. I can't wait till she takes him to work for show and tell. Till next time.

Lilly

Author's Response:
Hi Lilly,

Thanks for your comments - I really appreciate them. I'm anxious to find out what happens at Marissa's office, too. :o)

-Mary

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