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Reviewer: luckyladyfla (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2015 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

I miss this story!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2014 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

Well, I'm glad I finally noticed this update. I was getting quite worried about Rob and Marissa on that board starting some shennanigans, lol, I thought it was brave of them to risk being papped doing something like that but then the real bravery came when they both helped to save little Sophie/Sophia. Although Rob is angry and tired about being photographed all the time it could have been a different set of pictures that were being taken.

Will Rob take Marissa to the UK? I hope so, the change will do them both good.

Jane x

Reviewer: nzjojo (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2013 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

Awesome chapter and I can't wait to read more. A move will be a new adventure for these two!

Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2013 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

I bet his family will be happy with them moving to London. And maybe then they can start working on a couple of mini-me. Good chapter!

Reviewer: suzuki (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2013 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

I know what's wrong with her! she wants a kid! XD now let's see how long it takes her to realize this XD great job and plz update soon ^^

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2013 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

i think i see babies soon!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2013 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

Loved it :) My heart raced as the situation with the little girl evolved and Rob and Marisa were there to save her.

Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2013 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

I think I see english babies in the near future!!! Happy ur back...

Reviewer: Fuzzyfurr1977 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

Love the end. Can't wait to see where they land. Rob needs normal with maybe a side of crazy in the form of a baby?

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

So nice to see you back. I love the whole going to England idea. A whole new country to explore!

Merrily

Kat

Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

Great chapter. Glad you are back. Love the last little bit of twilight humor..

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 40 The Beach

I think it's been too long.

Author's Response:
Does that mean it's been too long since an update and you've missed the story or it's been too long and you're not interested anymore?

Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2013 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Just Well Taken Care Of

I love it love it love it! This is amazingly well written. The characterization is brilliant. love rob and marissa character. Their love is smoldering hot and passionate. I wonder if M's stalker is someone she knows?

Reviewer: fozzie (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2013 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Someday

Wow this is one Hot story. Loving it and I'm so glad she was ok.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Someday

I'm so glad that Marissa is feeling better. Rob was so sweet when they were discussing having kids 'someday'. It is a bit of a dilema when to start a family but I think you eventually know when the time is right. So it's back to reality with a dirty great big bump, I love how Marissa sent her man off to work with a packed lunch, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Someday

all caught up - so yummy! xo

Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 40 - Someday

Ahhh home sweet home....

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Solice

Geez, I'd love to wake up to Rob that way and never stop, lol, impossible I know but a girl can dream. It's so good to have you back again, I'm looking forward to more.

Jane x

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Solice

Yeah, I want wake him!!!!!!

And he can wake me too!

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Glad to see you back. Excellent story. Great chapter. Loved the ending texts!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2012 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Well thank God for that, I really couldn't see how they could come back with a different verdict. I think it will help Marissa to move forward a lot more once Samantha is finally sentenced.

Jane x

Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Yippie, now we need a baby!

Reviewer: suzuki (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

lol I'd actually almost be interested in seeing how it's possible for the jury to find her not guilty XD great job and plz update soon ^^

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2012 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Another amazing chapter, I miss this story soooo much.

Xxxxx

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2012 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Verdict

Oh, if you had found her not guilty, you'd better have locked her crazy ass up in the booby hatch for a loooong time!!

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