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Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2016 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 31

Anybody out there?  i think this site has been abandoned.  updates? ?

Reviewer: ficfangirl (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2015 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 31

I started reading this story on Twilighted, so I feel I should review here instead of on ffn.  I'm so thrilled you're continuing the story.  I have really enjoyed it and agonized over the angst.  I really want a happy ending for the stars of the show. 

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2015 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 31

Am I seeing double? I thought that I already read this?

Author's Response:

You probably already did. It takes much longer for the chapter to post on here than on the other sites. 

Reviewer: Roro2015 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2015 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 30

Your really good thanks for the quick update. I hope they sing a song together 

Reviewer: Roro2015 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2015 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

How often do you update? Your story is awesome.. I can't wait to see what happens. I thint they sing a duet.

Reviewer: tonya030303 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2015 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 27

When are you gonna finish the story? I would really like to know how it ends... 

Reviewer: PuchuSwanCullen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2014 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 27


Reviewer: WiseOldSoul (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2014 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 27

hope there will be some updates soon.

it has been quite a while since last update,

hope this story has not been abandoned.

i would so much like to see the HEA for

Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: WiseOldSoul (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2014 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 20

crying, weeping,

so so sad :(


Reviewer: WiseOldSoul (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2014 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 17


now bella is behaving like  fool.

if she wants to break down,

she needs to do that privately!

both of them are just so messed up!

Reviewer: WiseOldSoul (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2014 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 15

Bella gets so mad at stupid crap. 

Sometimes you do things for love.

and yes sometimes no matter how great your music is,

having the support from your love is the greatest gift.

bella is so damn annoying!

Reviewer: WiseOldSoul (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2014 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 14

Yea, Edward messed up royally.

but you can't help feeling sorry for him. 

He is so desperate and I do have to agree

tanya deserved everything she got, and then some.

however, we all know the truths will eventually come out.

esp since jake saw something....(probably)

i hate what's going to happen soon when the truth is revealed...:(

but I still hope for the happily ever after for Edward and Bella...

Reviewer: Rainbow girl 87 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2013 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 27

Just read all this story in one day,phew! Please update when you can. I'm enjoying it muchly. Xx

Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2013 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 27

Love the story! It's totally emotional and makes me wanna throw things...although you might wanna go back and edit the chapter in the uploader since it copied the chapter twice :-) its happened to me before too. 

Reviewer: Keggera (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2013 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 27

I literally have just sepnt the past 8 hours glued to this story. I was completely enamored with this version of Bella & Edward from the first chapter. Of course I cannot wait to see these two back together. I hope you are able to update soon, but mostly thanks for continuing sharing a great story! 

Reviewer: Maddy Masen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2013 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 27

Welcome back!!  Congratulations on surviving the first year (plus) of mommyhood and on the new little one to come.  I had wondered what happened to you, and by extension to these characters.  So great to wrap myself up in your writing again!


Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 24

Close to the last chapter I read. Maybe one more..

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 23

you wrote this so long ago. Cory just died  from this. Sad.  Rob & Kris supposedly broke up. Of course the Rags bring us that news.  I guess you stopped writing after this chapter. then some time you started back. Sad story, I hope it gets happier.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 21

Yea for Jacob. Edward is spiraling down.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2013 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 20

If you never put them back together it is fine. Drugs destroy lives. You needed to show that slippery sloap he was on.  Trust is gone.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2013 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 19

This is the summation of a roll of bad situations.  She is not safe with James. Edward is out of control. She has got to stand up to him and tell him what she knows. Then either accept it or move on.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2013 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 16

Not loosing faith in you. I may be sick of Edward right now, but hey he earned it!

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2013 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 26

Yeah! You're back. I'm looking forward to the next updates.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2013 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 15

Yep but the sleeping together still is not out.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2013 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 14

when she finds out she will be devistated.  Lies, drugs, alcohol. Edward is not good for her.  Tanya is just what he deserves.

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