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Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

Cute.  This is the first Human story I've read where Jasper is a dad and used to married to Maria.  Interesting.  Constructively speaking, I wanted to say that while the writing is solid, the story  feels somewhat unfinished.  Do you have plans to add to it?



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I do plan on writing a sequel to this, that I'm going to be starting in the next day or so, so hopefully it will be up soon. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sweet!  I don't think I've read many Dadsper stories; I really liked this one.  I'd love it if you turned this one-shot into a two-shot.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I 'm glad you liked it! I am going to write a sequel to this. I've got a nice long three week break from school and I plan to make the most of it. So hopefully it should be up soon. Thanks for reading! :)

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