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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 12:29 PM · On: Forward

A more serious Alice than I am used to although she remains unfailingly optimistic.  Great story😊

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!  

Reviewer: Mirgar (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 04:03 AM · On: Forward

A wonderful start-- and you began at a perfect place to allow you to really write Alice's story. I'm sure you realize that you chose to write from the most challenging viewpoint. I hope you will continue your writing. I'd love to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I do have plans to complete the story.  I am trying to work on it in between bouts of writing my thesis so its been somewhat delayed, but I will be posting additional chapters when I can.

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 02:00 PM · On: Forward

A very interesting start to your story. I am looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!!  I am glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Smily13 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 02:02 AM · On: Forward

Where is the next chapter?

Author's Response:

Thank you for review!  I am working on the next chapter and will post it as soon as I can.


Reviewer: andrew6807 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 01:43 AM · On: Blank

i've never given much thought into Alice. I honestly never even thought about how her visions worked and interferred with her normal sight. this is a very interesting story, and i really look forward to how you write this. good luck and i cant wait to read more :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I am trying hard to be true to Alice's story.  I am working on the next chapter at the moment and hoping it lives up to everyone's expectations.

Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 01:07 AM · On: Blank

An interesting start. I have read a few Alice stories (starting at her change) and this is the first I've seen that includes visions of Bella. I will be back for more! :)


Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Chapter 2 is in the works!

Reviewer: Anna46 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Blank

Wow! That was an amazing start to Alice's story. Please, please, please carry on writing this amazing story!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!  I've always wondered what things looked like from Alice's perspective so I am hoping to carry this through for quite aways.

Reviewer: Sarsacia (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Blank

I love hearing stories about Alice.  I can't wait to see where this one goes.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Blank

I love it - Alice is such a wonderful character and your making her "human" - please give Alice a full life and voice! looking very forward to this one!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  Alice is my favorite character, and I love writing from her POV.

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