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Reviews For Leaves of Grass
Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

well, you learn something new everyday! aren't you a bucket of knowledge :)

still loving the story, cant wait to read the meeting!



Author's Response:

"A bucket of knowledge." I love it. Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: adalia (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yay, update! And you left us with a cliffhanger! I look forward to seeing how Jasper reacts in the next chapter :)  I love your style of writing, it has a very good flow and I'm impressed by the amount of research that must have gone into this to make it so historically accurate :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the history in the story. I spent a few weeks researching before I started to write my outline. I really enjoyed reading Confederate women's memoirs about life on the homefront.

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 6

I can only imagine how dashing Jasper must look.



Author's Response:

Indeed! Human or not, Jasper's always a sight to behold.

Reviewer: peacheschica (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

Yay for an update! Thank you

Author's Response:

I'm glad two updates got up so quickly. Chapter 7 will be up soon as well.

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am looking forward to the dance where I hope a certain handsome officer appears.



Author's Response:

You won't be disapointed. ; )

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is the conversation that Bella should have had with Edward in the book. I always felt that Bella let him off to easy and their relationship was a little to controling.

Reviewer: aeronae (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love the plot for the story so far!  Update soon please :D



Author's Response:

Thank you. Validating has taken a while, but Chapter 6 was submitted the day Chapter 5 went up. Hopefully, it will be up soon.

Reviewer: peacheschica (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

What an interesting story line. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it progresses.

Reviewer: MistyH (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

I'm just discovering the genre of historical Twilight fiction, and I love it!  Thanks for contributing.  I'm interested in discovering more about the pre-vampire Jasper...and how things change with Bella in his life almost a century and a half earlier.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. If you are enjoying this, you must check out "Only Human" and "Beyond Time." Both are B/E time travel fics. BT was just completed, but it absolutely owned me week after week while it was being updated. Both stories are fabulous.

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 5

eek! can't wait for the next chapter! loving the story :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Hopefully chapter 6 will be up soon; I'm submitting it today.

Reviewer: austoz (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 2

I like this story so far, thanks for writing! It seems funny to me now to realize that whilst reading the books It had never occured to me that Jasper would have been absorbing everyone's feelings of bloodlust during the times when Bella was near the other vamps or in their home, the huge surge in power of those feelings would have been like an explosion for him when Bella cut herself. Again thinking of the books I must admit that I thought it odd that Jasper could tolerate each day in a school (how many kids hurt themselves in a school each day??) and being with Bella in the confines of a car, a hotel room and then seemingly be imune to her massive bloodshed in the ballet studio, but react to one drop through a papercut?? I always thought that really didn't make sense in the books, along with a lot of other things.......I like consistancy and for things to make sense, I love imagination but I'm analytical too, Haha!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. These things certainly don't make sense in the Twilight universe. This is why I am so thankful for fanfic, because we can try to make sense of these inconstancies. In high school, kids are always bleeding somewhere in the building.

Other than my reason for why Jasper didn't react in the ballet studio (which if you haven't guessed it, will eventually be revealed), the only thing I can think of is that Alice warned Jasper on the way there that there would be bloodshed, and her papercut was a surprise. 

We just have to try not to pick SM world apart too much, as there are a ton of inconsistancies.

Reviewer: ElaineEscalera (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

i love this story ") cant wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'll be submitting the next chapter to the validation queue this weekend.

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

cor blimey! you must have done some amount of research to know all that! love the chapter can't wait to see Bella's reaction when (I'm assuming) she doesn't wake up from the 'dream'. eeek so excited -L



Author's Response:

Thank you. I did do a fair bit of research for the story. I spent a few weeks reading memoirs and other accounts of Confederate women on the home front. I also studied some general Civil War histories and some texts specific to Texas. Then, there was also some heavy use of Google outside of the library. I'm glad the research has paid off.

Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 4

First CONGRATS on the darling - enjoying your story but was caught short with the time change - anxiously awaiting what happens!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope you continue to enjoy it as the story progresses.

Reviewer: cagemydreams (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2011 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

So interesting. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I have so many questions...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so. I can't promise I'll answer all of them, but you're always welcome to ask questions.

Reviewer: Niere (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 2

The suspense is tremendous. Even knowing that it's a B/J story, finding out how they get together is exciting. I'm hurrying on to the next chapter and hoping that there will be more to follow soon.(?) So far it's been great!



Author's Response:

I hope you continue to enjoy the build up. There will be another chapter next week. 

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 3

congrats! girl or boy? name? how cute is he/ she?

loving the story can't wait for the next update i'm intrgued :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the congratulations. He is an adorable little boy named Will. I hope you continue to like the story.

Reviewer: willyjoe (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

Love it!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: chelleb (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying this.  Congratulations on the baby!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting first couple chapters.  Will be interested to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. The next chapter will be up in a few days.

Reviewer: willyjoe (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 2

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you. The next chapter is already in the validation queue.

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 2

more please :)



Author's Response:

After a short break in the new year, I'll return to weekly updates.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story. 

Reviewer: PosyThatsMe (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 2

I wanted to make a review, so here I am making one to you. ;D

Well, I just wanted to tell you that I really hate that she isn't back with Jasper yet! But I can wait.. I can wait.. I can't wait, okay?!

So please write a new chapter, I'll take your story on Story Alert on FanFiction okay?

I'm currently working on a story like yours in the moment also, thought I want her there in the first chapter, so I'm working in a very long time ;) I'll send you the link as soon as first chapters done, I understand if you won't leave a review, I don't like it when people ask me to read their stories.. Gives a lot of pressure! But please just read the first chapter! (My penname on FF is 1sab3ll3 H16tlock)

I'll hope the best for you and your children, for now goodbye ;)

 

~Posy

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Posy,

Thank you so much for the review. I will, of course, read your story; I love any good Jasper fic. It will take a few chapters of this story for her to actually meet Jasper, but once she does, I, at least, think he's pretty wonderful and worth the wait. I am so interested to see how your storyline will compare to mine. This story has been kicking around in my head for a while after reading "Beyond Time," and Edward and Bella time travel fic. If you haven't read this one, you MUST. I spent a few weeks doing research about the war in Texas, life on the Civil War homefront for Confederate women, and 1862 before finally sitting down to write my outline.

The first two chapters are now up on both Twilighted and FF. I'm taking a little pause for the holidays (and because I had a baby yesterday morning), but rest assured that the majority of the story is already written. Once I take a short fanfiction "maternity leave," I will return to weekly postings.

Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow - didn't see that one coming! - very clear writing and looks like a nice ride ahead!  Nice that the storyline is WAY different!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Ihope you enjoy the story as it continues.

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

intriegued. can't wait to see where you take this and eagerly anticipating the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  I hope you enjoy the story as it continues.

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