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Reviews For Leaves of Grass
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 14

Awesome Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: lovestwilite (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 14

We're eating these chapters up as fast as you can write them.  We await the rest with much anticipation!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad.

Reviewer: bella m kasprzak (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 14

loved it!! i was so hoping i didn't have to wait til wednesday thankyou so much!!!! so i'm obsessed with conversations with my killer it is so good leaves of grass is my fav jasper bella story then cwmkiller



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the written correspondence. Ch. 14 will indeed go up on Wednesday on FFN, and I'll be doling out teasers. There's also a small (different) teaser on the LoG thread on the Twilighted Forums (under the AU board).

Reviewer: Suz Powell (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 14

Simply delightful ! Such a beautifully written letter; and I loved your description of Jasper as "primarily soft spoken but tended to speak profoundly". I feel like I'm reading a "Gone with the Wind" type novel... can't wait for the next chapter ! By the way, I'm suzaddiction on Twitter and fanfic. I'm writing/reading here as fanfic hasn't updated your story yet (but hopefully will rectify their problems soon). Thank you again for writing such a beautiful story. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. What a nice thing to say! What a surprise that the chapter came up first on Twilighted. Ordinarily, it takes a week for a chapter to get valiated, but this chapter went through the queue very quickly. Ch. 14 will go up on FFN on Wednesday.

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 14

I love your human, gentleman Jasper:) So well written!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: LuckyLamb (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 14

I absolutely LOVE historical fiction! Thank you so much for writing this. I'm  anxiously awaiting your next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying the historical aspects of the story.

Reviewer: ktblack25 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 14

i love this story =) update again soon!



Author's Response:

Ch. 15 will go in the validation queue in a couple days. I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 14

eeek! i definitely want a jasper now! eagerly anticipating the next chapter -L



Author's Response:

Who wouldn't want their own Jasper? : )

Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 14

Lovely!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 14

Wow!  Fabulous chapter!  I love, love, love Jasper's letter to Bella - you captured the sweetness of his feelings for her as well as how formally & eloquently an 1860's Southern gentleman would probably express himself when writing a letter to his sweetheart.  Cant wait for next update, especially if there's more correspondence between these two - I just wish Bella would hurry up & figure out that it's ok, that she's supposed to be with Jasper!  ...If his letter didn't start to overcome her reservations, I don't know what it will take! :)  Great work!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed his letter. We'll definitely see some more Jasper letters.

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 14

I am hooked!  Now I must wait for another chapter.  :sigh:



Author's Response:

I'm sorry for the wait, but I'm glad you're reading.

Reviewer: Lisre (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 14

I enjoyed another great chapter from you. I'm looking forward to see where you take this story next and to have som answers to several questions

Author's Response:

If you're looking for some answers, you may want to ask on the LoG thread on the Twilighted Forums (on the AU board).

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 13

Looking forward to reading more.  What a lovely story.  You asked for "pimping of stories" so here's mine:  My story is titled No Way Back.  If you get a chance to read it hope you like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I've added your story to my to-read list, so hopefully I'll have more reading time soon.

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 12

Steamy poetry..what a way to pass the day. 



Author's Response:

Who knew the 19th century was so hot?

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

"This is a party somewhat in my honor, and you did say I was a hero. I wouldn't want to pressure you, but I think that might entitle me to a dance."

:swoon:



Author's Response:

Haha. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 5

Another lovely chapter!

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

It is great that you included so much historical fact!  It is sad that today many, aside from military families, do not know the sacrifice of war.  Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review so many chapters. I'm glad you are enjoying the historical aspects. I loved doing the research for this story.

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

Looking forward to reading more. 

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 13

nooo! i was hoping for a kiss! eagerly anticipating the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

There was SO a kiss. Clearly, it was way too brief.

"I stopped breathing, and Jasper must have taken my silence as permission, because he lowered his mouth to mine. I felt my whole body respond, and I had to fight the urge to grab onto him and pull him even closer to me."

Reviewer: fairydust (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 13

I never review but I want to read more.  Very good story line can't wait to see what happens!!!   No rush ---- update update... : )



Author's Response:

Thank you for making an exception. I know I love hear what people think about the story. Ch. 14 was put in the validation queue as soon as Ch. 13 went up on the site. Hopefully, it will be up on here soon. Otherwise, it will be up on Fanfiction on Wednesday. Happy reading.

Reviewer: willyjoe (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 13

I love this story! After reading this chapter I can't wait for the next update. I really do hope that when she returns to her time that Jasper remembers her.



Author's Response:

Hopefully Ch. 14 will go up quickly. There is a very brief teaser for it up on the LoG forum thread. You can find it by going to the Twilighted AU board.

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 13

Ouch! If that had gone on any longer, I would have been crying! That is just the sort of heartbreaking situation that sets me off! The only reason I didn't cry when I first read New Moon was that I had read Breaking Dawn first, and the emotional impact of Edward leaving was severely lessened when I knew that they married and had a child in the end. (I read the books in the order I bought them, and I got BD before I could get the middle two). I cried at the movie though... but only a couple of tears.

I don't know who to feel more sorry for: Jasper, for the confusion he must be feeling at Bella's hot and cold reactions, knowing what he feels but unable to get that clarity from her; or Bella, because she knows that falling for him, with his whole other destiny and Alice to come, is just wrong and setting herself up for more heartbreak, yet she can't help it!

Now I so can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I can't imagine reading them out of order, or that you would even go back after finding out about the weirdness that is Renesmee. ; ) 

There is a very short teaser for the next chapter up on the "Leaves of Grass" Twilighted forum thread. You can find it on the AU forums.

Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

That was lovely and heartbreaking. How much of the future Jasper is changing because of this new past?



Author's Response:

Errr . . . um . . . *hides* We will definitely see/ get an idea of what has happened in the future at some point.

Feel free to share your idea/questions the LoG thread on the Twilighted forum.

Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 13

You have mesocaught upinthe greatstory I wassad to see teh end of the chapter.. really great stuff

thankyou for sharing!



Author's Response:

Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. I'll put it in the validation queue today.

Reviewer: Emmet Cullen Lover (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 13

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE! IT!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glaaaaaaaaaaad. Hehe.

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