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Reviews For Leaves of Grass
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 12

Whitman, well very erotic.

 

She is in another time. Why is she so worried about Edward. He is not there. This time will tell her what she needs in a man. Jasper or not. She will find out that companionship can be. Trust flowing both ways.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 2

Well, Alice and Jasper aren't mates. So is she going to mate with Edwardo??

I hope not.

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 20

Well, the update alert for this sat in my inbox for over a week before I was able to read the chapter, so I hope that means you'll be updating soon.

I wanted to slap Edward myself. He was being so overbearing and oblivious to what Bella was saying. But I could hug Alice. And Jasper. I can always hug Jasper. ;)

Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2011 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 20

OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!! I have never ever thought about Jasper and Bella together, but this story made me LOVE it!!!!!!!! I'm gonna add this fic to my favs so I can read the update and go find more JxB fics!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!



Author's Response:

There are some excellent J/B WIPs up right now on FFn. For a sweet Jasper, I really recommend the two fics "Slow and Steady" and "When Darkness Turns to Light." WDTtL is my favorite B/J fic. Happy reading.

Reviewer: tweety89 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 20

OMG you have to post the next chapter I can not wait. I have been following this story and I love it.

Reviewer: magicalheaher (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wow I found this story last night and I just couldn put it down. I the love story and how it built. I am really looking forward to what is going to happen now. Enjoy your vacation.

Reviewer: ElenaMF (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 20

OH MY GOSH!!!! That was freaking amazing!!! I LOVED it! Great job!

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2011 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 20

oh finally! I know this is probably just the beginning but wooooowie:)

Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 20

OOOOO! What is going to happen now! So exciting! 

I just gotta say, Poor Edward. But maybe he'll go see Tanya or something.

Love this story! Thank you for writing and for updating so quickly.  Love more Jasper, always!!

Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oooooohh!!!! (Happy wiggles!) He remembers! Thank you! That was nicely written.

 

Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 20

Wow, I don't have words! I am positively giddy and can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: ali208 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 20

That has got to be the worst teaser chapter ever... especially before you go on vacation. Seriously... come on... At least Bella doesn't have to work at winning him over. (Or does he? You never say who spoke that last sentence) Can't wait for the drama with dramaward to ensue. Oh and Alice's excitement is perfect. I would love to hear a little more of her opinion on the matter. Considering what you've done with Bella I can just imagine what you could do with Alice. :-) Thank you Thank you Thank you for a great story.

Reviewer: ali208 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 20

That has got to be the worst teaser chapter ever... especially before you go on vacation. Seriously... come on... At least Bella doesn't have to work at winning him over. (Or does he? You never say who spoke that last sentence) Can't wait for the drama with dramaward to ensue. Oh and Alice's excitement is perfect. I would love to hear a little more of her opinion on the matter. Considering what you've done with Bella I can just imagine what you could do with Alice. :-) Thank you Thank you Thank you for a great story.

Reviewer: ali208 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 20

That has got to be the worst teaser chapter ever... especially before you go on vacation. Seriously... come on... At least Bella doesn't have to work at winning him over. (Or does he? You never say who spoke that last sentence) Can't wait for the drama with dramaward to ensue. Oh and Alice's excitement is perfect. I would love to hear a little more of her opinion on the matter. Considering what you've done with Bella I can just imagine what you could do with Alice. :-) Thank you Thank you Thank you for a great story.

Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 20

OMG OMG OMG I'm in love with you. Best chapter yet. Can't wait for the next! Where are you going on vacation? Tomorrow my husband and I are taking our 1 year old son to Disneyland :)



Author's Response:

I'm jealous about Disneyland. We're spending a week in the Berkshires, where we rented a farm house.

Reviewer: Jholl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oh my goodness! Oh my goodness!!! I actually squealed at the end of this chapter!!! LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!!! I'm so in awe of what you can do! By the "stunned" look at the end, the tears were in my eyes!

While I really do hope that you have a wonderful anniversary, I'm a little afraid of what will happen to me when I start to detox ; )

Please have pity and don't make us wait too long!

Reviewer: carson_maverick_girl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 20

I may die waiting two weeks for an update to this story :)

Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 20

Ok wow, I really didn't see that coming - but I love the transition. I was wondering when/if time would skip forward again - honestly, I thought maybe you would have them both turned and then they'd have that much more time together, but this will certainly make for fantastic drama!

Thank you for the chapter - love your story! And have a great time on vacation :-)

Reviewer: AlmyraSilverblood (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 20

aahhhhFLLLAGERBASTEDPOOPHEADAAAAHHHHH

SO INTENSE

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 20

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeek! so excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Ariah (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 20

gahhhh no no no don't leave it there!! what happens next!  sorry am an impatient soul!  love this story can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: ktblack25 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 20

ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! this was awesome!! update soon! please please pretty please!

Reviewer: s blue (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 20

sweet.

Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 20

Are you freakin' kidding me???  I came to check my email, I did not expect to start crying...ugh, so good though.  I kinda forgot about Edward in this story and now I feel bad for him.  And I'm kinda pissed at Alice for essentially being Jasper's vampiric "fuck buddy".  Friends save your seat at the movies, they don't enjoy your man until he snaps out of amnesia.  OK now that I've said my peace, I am very excited to get the next chapter.  And I have to read Leaves of grass so I guess it's time to dig up my library card. 

Excellent work.

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 20

You have me in complete tears!!! I feel so bad for Edward I feel horrible for Bella. Then he remembers!!! Too many tears! Thank you I love it!

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