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Reviewer: stephlj (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 02:26 PM · On: Millie POV outtake
Excellent story! Loved this Bella more than the original. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Reviewer: pmuley309 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 30
Loved the story...
Reviewer: Pumpkinpie87 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 06:18 AM · On: Millie POV outtake
I finished this story a few days ago, but forgot to review. This story was so good. I was addicted to it and I read it in one day. I loved every minute of this story.
Reviewer: moirae (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2011 04:43 AM · On: Millie POV outtake
What a lovely story! I'm always a little wary of non- E/B pairings but I'm so glad I gave this story a chance. Your writing is lovely and you brought something unique, yet still true, to these characters. I really enjoyed it- thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: mrsbcullen (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
So Far so good...
Reviewer: EarthhAngel (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 09:37 PM · On: Millie POV outtake
I started reading this story as a way of procrastination. I was astounded by how much I LOVED this story. You have given me the inspiration to work on a story of my own featuring, Jasper and Bella. I just thought you should know that your superb writing had inspired another to write also.... Please continue writing, you're my only Favorite Author.
Reviewer: bephoebe (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 09:26 AM · On: Millie POV outtake
What an awesome addition to a fabulous story. Leaves of Grass is, by far, one of my most favorite fanfics. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: freakybfsfan (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Thank you. This story is probably the greatest fanfiction i've read. I enjoyed everything about the writing, from character development to the pacing. Please, continue writing, and preferrably non-canon couple stories, because you did very well at this.
Reviewer: bella m kasprzak (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 11:17 AM · On: Millie POV outtake
i got all excited at this email! then i'm like wait i already read this on fanfiction.net. so you posted it over here. now i get it.. haha i still enjoyed reading it and as always it is amazing every time!!! Thank You
Reviewer: Allthatglitters (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Millie POV outtake
I love this story!
Reviewer: arkallie26 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Millie POV outtake
I loved this story and the outtake was great too! I really think you should write another jasper/bella story there really just isn't enough of them :)
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Millie POV outtake
That was so so so very sad, but touching as well.
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 30
amazing!!!! what a perfect way to end it!! not an easy thing to do, kudos! and thank you for brightening my weekend with this story =)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 29
absolutely beautiful, cried at the dance with Charlie! really really well done!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 24
hot! loved that they were together, ALTHOUGH I would not have minded if you took it slower (more naughtly scenes to read =). I wonder if Jasper is right about the pregnancy thing.... hmmm will have to wait and see!!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 23
ooooh! cliffhanger! =)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 22
my goodness, I think I started panting, I just LOVE how you are writing in Edward and Bella's relationship as a detriment to Bella. I always thought her lack of confidence wasn't a good thing and you are addressing it without trashing it, as if the step was needed for her to see how much better she could be with Jasper. I am so glad she is becoming a woman and we don't just read about an insecure teenager!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 21
beautiful... and weirdly it isn't a strange twist to have Edward out of the picture!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 18
OMG I am so touched by this chapter, how lovely that you included the poem!
and the sex was OH so hot, I just love that her made her breakfast. You write very well, your imagergy and the way you make the characters jump off the page are spot on!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 17
sigh =)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 14
I just love how you write Jasper, his role in SM books is small and for good reason, but it is wonderful to explore his character through your writing. I can't wait to read more!
I am literally falliing in love with him myself which is odd, as I am such an Edward girl!
Reviewer: Zmade (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 30
This was... I can't even begin to describe how wonderful. I started off begrudgingly impressed to riveted to absolutely in love. I'm not crazy about this ship, but this story transcends all the bull. Not only was this a whirlwind of a plot excellently crafted, the prose itself flows around your ideas and brings them to life. There was no halting or awkward dialogue, no moments that ripped me out of the story to criticize or ponder over, nothing but smoothness. I am so impressed and thankful that you took the time to create and share this with us.
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 13
amazing, i never thought i would go for a story that had Bella choose someone else really well done!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
very cool, i love the history you are including!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 2
interesting twist! I really like how Bella is standing up for herself, wish that had actually happened in New Moon =). I also am impressed with your take on why Jasper attacked, very cool explanation!
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