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Reviewer: HelsBells (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: courtney1022 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
What the hell is E problem?????????
Reviewer: E_B (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
loving it pleas post asap
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
OH my goodness--there's so much pain between them, but there's obviously so much love deep down.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love the happier time with Bella and Edward even if it was short lived. Edward needs to stop being a douche...NOW!
Reviewer: searching4myedward (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 2
Just found your story and I'm hooked. I hope Bella gets to kick eward in the ass for treating her so badly. Update soon
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
That is the reason he's being such an ass to her? His dad really shouldn't have asked him to lie to his wife though. Sorry to complain; I really like the beginning to this story.
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 2
wow!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 2
Edward is handling all of this badly. As to the impact on Bella....maybe she'll take Alice's suggestion and go back to college, meet new people and try to make a life beyond Edward (as much as she loves him). Why? Because his behavior is slowly killing her; she needs some kind of outlet or focus to counter the loneliness she's been living with. But that's all up to you, oh mighty author!
Reviewer: Mer525 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
Yeah I'm still hating his guts. But loving this story!!! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: dancer15 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon.
Reviewer: vampiregirl72 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, great first chapter and I am hooked. What has brought Bella and Edward to this point? How did their relationshiop become this sham.........is he cheating?.....Can't wait for next chapters.
Reviewer: Mer525 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
Really good first chapter! I want to kick Edward in the balls. Was it really necessary for him to be so mean to her?! How on earth did they get to this point? I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oooo...Edward's a douche! I want to kick him in the shins :)
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
WTF crawled up Edwards ass he doesn't love Bella any more is he cheating on her
Author's Response: Guess you'll just have to wait and see ;)
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning. Why are the two so estranged? Guess we'll have to read more and see....
Author's Response: Yes! Next few chapters are written, so they just need to be validated. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great first chapter! I'm dying to know what's eating Edward.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just clicked on this to see what it was about and now I'm hocked. Damn. It was good and I'm very curious about their relationship and how it got to where it is. I luv angst and this seems to be full of it. I really feel for Bella and how lonely and unwanted she feels. And that she still loves him but also hates him because she still loves him after what he has done to her has me intrgued. I what to know how they got here so bad and with the way he acted or should a say didn't interact with her, how his family will react. Will he pretend so no one says anything or just go as he his and not care. And what an ass, telling her he's going to his parents but doesn't want her to come but his parents do so she's going. That was just so hurtful. He didn't have to tell her anymore then they were going to his parents. Unless he was trying to hurt her. Which it seems he was. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're hooked! The next few chapters are written so they just need to be validated. I'm glad you're really connecting with the characters. Thanks for the kind review!
Reviewer: CC Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
I liked it and look forward to the next chapter. What tore them apart? she didn't cheat; did he? You have me hooked.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope you like the next chapter :)
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