This was beautiful and breath taking. I had tears in my eyes as i finished, this is a testement to what couples who loose children are forced to go through. job well done 

That was awesomely beautiful and powerful. Good job doesn't even begin to provide the level of awesomeness you wrote.

This was a really great story. I found it on RobMusement: One shot recs & i am so glad I did. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review.  And for telling me how you found my story.  I must send whomever runs RobMusement my thanks.  I'm glad you enjoyed my little oneshot.

Perry

wow what a story, had me literally balling. great writing

Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words.  I'm glad you liked the story, and it had the desired effect.  Sometimes we just need a good cry, huh?  Again, thank you.  I LOVE every review.

Perry

Holy crap, this was amazing! I can count on one hand the number of times I've felt compelled to leave a review before, but I just had to for this. This is absolutely incredible! It felt almost like a movie, like I wasn't even reading anymore. It takes a really talented author to be able to transport a reader into the scene and make them forget it's not real. Hope to see more from you!

Author's Response:

I'm so happy my story compelled you to respond.  And that you have such kind words to say about my writing.  It's funny that you say that about "like a movie", because that's how I envision scenes in my head.  Where are people standing?  What are they doing with their hands?  What are their facial expressions?  Etc.  So I'm really glad you could see what I envisioned.

As for more...I'm working on it.  I have a one-shot in the process and a multi-chaptered fic (10 chapters in) that I'm trying to complete.  I'll post that when it's either close to completion or completed.  :)

Thank you for taking the time to review.  It means so much to me, truly.

Perry

wow, that was a tearjerker.  forgiveness is always wonderful, isn't it? 

Author's Response:

Forgiveness IS truly wonderful.  My late aunt, who was the matriarch of our family, explained to me that forgiveness isn't about forgiving the person who you feel wronged you; it's about the healing that YOU receive once you forgive.  Very wise woman.

Sorry I made you cry; but in a way I'm not because it means the emotions I was trying to convey came across like they were supposed to. 

Thank you so much for your review.  Means a lot to me.

Amazing! Beautifully written. Couldn't stop the tears while reading your story. One of the best O/S I ever read. Thanks for sharing with us.

Author's Response:

Now you're gonna make me cry.  To see that you think my story is one of the best O/S you've ever read.  Just wow!  Thank you so much for your review.  Means so much to me.

this was so beautiful!!

thank you!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.  You guys are using words like amazing, stunning...beautiful.  It just blows my mind.  Thank you so much for taking the time to review.  It is so very much appreciated.

Truer words were never written than "there are no words" to describe how it feels to experience and cope with losing a child. Your story was captivating and surreal. Beautifully written and your style of writing evokes emotions and feelings effortlessly. If this was written from experience, I hope you found this cathartic and healing. If this was not written from experience, you have insight and wisdom that is beyond imagination. I hope you continue to write other stories.

 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful review.  This was not written from experience, so thank you for your complimentary words.  It came to me with a writing prompt of "I Hate Myself For Losing You."  And it made me think of circumstances where love can be turned into hatred or something very close to it.  And this idea was born.

I am indeed continuing to write.  I'm working on another one-shot at the moment, and I have a multi-chaptered fic in the works (10 chapters in).  I'm hoping to get most of the story completed though before I start posting.  Again thank you...and I hope the same for you.  If this story hit a little close to home for you, I hope you found reading it cathartic and healing.

Beautiful story thank you so much for sharing

Author's Response:

Wow.  Just wow.  I'm amazed that you found my story to be as you described.  Thank you for your review.  It truly means a lot to me.

This was beautiful. Thank you so much for writing it. I have tears running down my cheek as I write.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.  I had tears while writing it.  It means so much to me that you were touched by this.  Thank you kindly for your review.