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Reviewer: risabella (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 13
Now you did it. You made me cry. I was already close several times during the last 13 chapters.
I'm lost for words at the moment. I know I should quit and go to bed but I don't know if I can.
Heartbreaking story. Thank you.
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 19
Awww! I just found this and thought it was a great story. Very complete.
I don't worry so much about the Jacob characterization because, honestly, anyone could change (obviously vampires not so much) to be come an ass.
People get too sensitive and in fanfic, really, we should all be allowed to play with the characters as we see fit.
Great story!
Reviewer: TeamEdward4eva (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 19
YOU ARE A FREAKIN GENIUS!
this truley is amazing :D
Reviewer: wildchild1954 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 19
I really liked this story. My only problem with it stems from the fact that sometimes you say they've been apart for 3 years and sometimes you say 2 years. Which is it?
Reviewer: MrsDazzled (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 19
Great story, I just read it through all morning! My one burning question was if Bella would end up changed, thanks for answering that for me :o)
Reviewer: brookie (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 19
naohh! how cute! i love it!
Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 19
Dear author!
what a wonderful story! I liked it very much ! Jacob was a bit out of character but hey it's fanfiction and I'm not the biggest Jacob fan either .
It was an interesting story. Well done!
Yours, Cathy
Reviewer: kallan0100 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 18
haha! take that Jacob! i love this story
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 19
NIce
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wow!! This was my first Twilight Fan Fic, I've read and it was great!!! I'm not gonna lie, I bursted out laughing at the part where Jasper asks Edward to tone down the lust because he had an urge to kiss Emmett! I thought it was hilarious!! Great job!! :)
Reviewer: cullen-cougar (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 15
I'm not sure when you wrote this....I just found this tonight......but I have to say, I'm no Jacob fan either.......and I LOVE your story....great job so far!!!
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 19
WOW!
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh my goodness, this story is absolutely amazing
Reviewer: Ghscheer90 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 19
Even though I'm mad that you made Jacob into a villan and sam the good morally right one, I have to admit that your story was gripping and amazing! GOOD JOB!
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wonderful Story! I really enjoyed Jacob as the Bad Guy!!
Reviewer: Rachel Black (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
Firstly, I absolutly loved your story! All that drama caused me a severe lack of sleep tonight hehe!
I can actually believe that Jacob could turn out to be like that though. He had to endure loving a girl who woul never love him back the same way, surely a person can only take so much of that before it changes them? So your Jacob in this story doesn't seem entirely unbelieveable to me.
I really loved how you wrote Bella and Edward so well. I've noticed with some fic's that some people can write about Edward OR Bella really well, and one of them isn't one so well, you managed them both.
Bella is so selfless, it pains me! The letter she wrote to Edward made me all weepy, hopefully that was what you were aiming for!
I really look forwar to reading the rest of your fic's!
Reviewer: ak24691 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 19
The best fanfiction I've ever read...
Please write another story!
Author's Response: thank you so much!
I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: ak24691 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh my God - This is an absolutley amazing fanfiction!
I LOVE IT - please continue
Reviewer: Peonies (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 19
Awesome story!! :)
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 19
Thank you for a wonderful story. I liked it very much.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 6
I usualy don't review mid way if I see tht the story is complete, but I am hooked. I am guesing that Victoria went after Renee and Charlie and that Jacob is her fiance. Is all that time with him blocking Alice though? If she were to have been pregnant, I would imagine that they would have found out in the hospital and all... I will continue.
Reviewer: Allure-and-Insanity (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
Just had to add i sooo loved it ... i realized the comment i made about jake sounded like i didnt but i sooooooo loved it u really r a gifted writter enjoyed reading it alot :D anyone reading reviews should take the time to read this story really wonderfuly done
Reviewer: Allure-and-Insanity (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 19
I really liked it great writting it could have come right out of the book but aww it was soo sad to have Jake be mean didnt feel right ... still amazing writting vivid images wonderful thanks for sharing
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
Interesting, intriguing. Moving on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: msashlyjudd8 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wow. I have to say I sort of like this version better then the original lol. I think you did a wonderful job. you made me laugh and cry. Great Great job I cant wait to read more from you. And dont worry I am a Huge Jacob hater so I loved how he was portrayed and he got what was coming to him FINALLY.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.
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