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Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 17
that piece of shit needs to be taken out and the others shown just what he is. ok i am calm now LOL great chapter!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 17
HOLY CRAP WHY?
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT DO US?!
I'm in some form of shock right now. SERIOUSLY.
That cliffhanger hurts my SOUL!?!
*cries silently*
Please update soon. Like tomorrow. Like tonight.
That cliffhanger was beyond cruel.
I can't believe that Jake was hiding the fact that he was abusing Bella...why didn't Sam tell anyone. Some things can't be kept secret. Bella would've been in danger forever. UGH!! The treaty shouldn't apply to people who do choose the Vampire side on their own accord.
I'm hopelessly addicted to your story. Please update.
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 17
O?! Ugh..!! Jacob MUST die!!
whathappensnextwhathappensnextwhathappensnext!!!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 17
Don't you dare leave us here !!!!!! You must update ASAP. This is just too good.
Reviewer: star_66 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 17
How could you do that to me? I know I love cliffhangers, but to make me WAIT to read what happens next? You're a meanie face who loves to torture me.
I guess I deserve it, I didn't comment on the last chapter. I'm sorry. I promise to try to comment on the last few chapters.
I hope Edward and the Cullens save her. It would be cool if one or more of them died, but you probably don't want to do that. Oh well, most other fans hate me for my loving the death of characters, so I understand.
Reviewer: mercury10872 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 17
omg, I can't stand cliffhangers, lol..please tell another update is happening quickly! Great Job!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 17
OMG! I was like loving you so much when I saw three new chapters! But then you ended it like this! AHHH! Okay, maybe I'm overreacting just a smidge, but seriously...now I am going to be like crazy until those last couple of chapters are published! Jacob is definitely a bastard in this, and he probably wouldn't act like that in canon, but as you say writers are allowed some creative license, and it's pretty much central to the plot that he be an asshole. I like that the other wolves seem like pretty decent guys though. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks again to you and your validators for the super quick updates!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh Man, that is one heck of a cliffhanger!!! I look forward to getting 2 emails w/ updates tomorrow! How will it end????
Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 17
Ohhh, I love cliffhangers! Very awesome stuff!
Reviewer: MissLucy (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 17
This is honestly, one of my most favorite stories on the whole site. It's so well written, and oohhhh the suspense! You're killing me here!
But I will be patient because this is just such an awesome story. Please, please, please update soon!
~MissLucy
Author's Response: the last two chapters will be up tomorrow! thanks for the review!
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 17
that bastard dog!!!
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 16
YIPPY!!!! i am so glad that your story turned this way!!!! i can't wait for the battle for bella. i cannot tell you how excited that i am to read the next two chapters...
thanks~ amy
Reviewer: MisguidedAngel (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 17
*Goose Bumps*
Okay, you've got my undivided attention...That was an awesome chapter and of course it left me wanting more!!
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 17
Awesome update!!
Reviewer: dazzlee me baby (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
ahhh so good. I am a jacob fan an I am a Edward fan. So this whole Jacob being the bad guy thing isnt really that bad, its just a whole different direction then what everyone is use to. Dont let anyone tell you its bad, because it is a very wonderful story. :)
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 17
OMG. That is awsume. I never really though Jacob and Bella should be together anyhow. This just paints him in a whole different light. I really love this story. Please give us more.
Reviewer: aerialla (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 17
Incredibly done suspense. The last few chapters are definitely putting the icing on the cake.
Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 16
The suspense!! The plot thickens!! Nicely done to have Edward and Bella walk in each others shoes! Now we can focus on despising Jacob!!
Waiting for tomorrows postings. :-)
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 16
ooh was not expecting that. how dare that piece of crap jacob do that to her. i hope the vamps come out fighting and take the dogs down. great chapter!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 16
Wow another great chapter. I hope the Cullen's go and kick so werewolve butt. Please keep up with the writing as I can not wait till the next chapter. Sincerely, PLV
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 15
Oh Very good. And I must Say that I like your story very much and I think that you are doing an excellent job. As far as people yelling about Jacob not doing that, Oh well, it's your story and you can do whatever you want. This is your version of "What If" and no one can say that Jacob wouldn't act like that. Good Job. I check daily to see if there is a new posting, keep it up.
Reviewer: MissLucy (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 16
Fantastic story so far. I'm definitely hooked.
Thanks for updating so quickly and keep up the wonderful work!
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 16
I wonder if Bella wildo something to hen the fight.
Great chapter..as always
Reviewer: bethann2103 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 16
Just read your whole story in one sitting and I love it! I love when i find a good story that has so much written. I really like the plot line and think you did a great job with the characters. i can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 16
I would walk through hell for Bella without even questioning it, why would I let myself be encumbered by 20 plus werewolves when she was what was to gain. Yay!! Hehe, i'm looking forward to some action :).
a large portion of you called the hidden message thing. I think I need to be less transparent with my writing, you all seem to be catching on rather quickly :p It's because we're smart and love your writing so much!
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