Awesome.  I love this story.  Oh, I so hope Edward kicks Jacob's ass.

No way. This is way too good. Grr this will keep me hanging.

Man, did you have to leave it on a cliffhanger :(

MORE MORE MORE SOON PLEASE!

You took the words out of my mind CLIFFHANGER NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have been shaking the whole time reading this chapter... when now typing this i am not able to hold my hands steady!!!! Oh My I can not wait for tomorrow to read the next chapters!!! I have to say this has been a great story to read.. 

EVIL. YOU HAVE FALLEN TO THE DARK SIDE OF THE FORCE. Cliffhanger :(

I want to see Edward kick Jacob's ass, tear his head off, and a few other things :P

AAARRRRGGG!!! Help me! I'm hanging on a cliffy!!!!!!

No review until I get a new chapter!!!!

Just kidding -- this is great! I wonder if in this universe if Sam can stand up and be alpha because Jake is being such a terrible Alpha.

Ok, I'm going to start off by apologising for not reviewing previous chapters. In all honesty I have been so immersed in the story that I was far to eager to get onto the next chapter. This story is absolutely brilliant. I've laughed (mainly at Emmett's pathetic jokes and outbursts) and done a fair share of crying. I'm such a sucker for angst stories, it would be an achievement to not cry.

I love how much of a prick Jacob is. I'm so Team Edward and even in Breaking Dawn I wanted to rip the stupid dog's head off!

I hope that our Vampires take out those dogs. Or even better yet, I would love to see the dogs turn on Jacob and side with the Vampires because of his horrendous lies. That would be absolutely insane (in a good way).

Anyway, I love your style of writing, the plot, the characterization and pretty much everything about this! I hope you can update soon as I am anxious for a good fight ;)

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Go get her, Edward!  They could swim with her....?  They have an advantage in the water.  Although that of course doesn't resolve the conflict and bring Jacob down like he needs to be!

I feel bi polar Yeah NO Yeah NO!  I am beginning to get whiplash :::snickers:::  I really love your story but you are so mean a nother cliffie you do this to torture me sniffle.  I understand that was a perfect way to ned but has my head spinning liek something from a horror flick..hehehe  I hope youpost again soon although I am so happy you have been posting this story so fast!  I really love the story I fear it coming to an end I klnow all good things do come to an end but I love your outlook for thecharacters and I so want to see Jake get neutered to prevent him from ever producing any spawn.  I am not a Jacob fan so killing him would be no big deal but I fear for your life from others who are dog crazed fans.  LOL  TTYL  Post again soon!

I loved Jasper being there for Edward.  And I loved her words in the letter.