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Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 18
Ha. Jacob's lucky he got left alive. Some people would not of thought twice about getting rid of him. I never thought he and Bella belonged together anyhow. He was just wrong for her.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 18
Incredible! I'll be sad for it to end, yet I can't wait to see what happens :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 18
Sniffle a conclusion sniffle. I was prayingthis fight would of been stretched out I knew no one would ever rewally kill him. I was just hoping for some one on one Edward jacob full on to the death (with Edward doing what he did) kind of thing. sniffle the next chapter is gponna make me cry I have a feeling! This story pulled at heart strings and them bonding again realizing theri love...wait will she get turned...will they marry.....the next chapter must be uber long cause theres still so many un answered questions LOL Thanks again can't wait for the next chapter...Unless its really long and goo dthen I will wait patiently hehehe
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 18
He still lives!? Lol..I knew Edward was kind even if he doesn't have a heart
genius!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 18
Yay!!
Reviewer: star_66 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 18
Wow. Evil Jacob deserves what he got. I would've done the same (minus the fact that there would be absolutely NO way for me to even be in a fight and live, but that's different).
I know I sound like I'm Team Edward, but I'm not. Nor am I Team Jacob. I'm one of the few Team Switzerlands, so I can enjoy the fact that this isn't actually Jacob and he wouldn't really be evil, but for the sake of the story, it was necessary. I get that and it doesn't make anything worse for me. The story is still amazing.
Reviewer: anonymous (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 18
Yes! Finally! We're done with asshole Jacob! I'm so glad about that.
On the other hand, I'm sad that this story is going to end. :( I have really enjoyed reading it and anticipating the characters' actions. I look forward to reading more from you. Great writing!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 18
Woop woop I loved this chapter. I loved how Sam and Jacob have reversed roles and that Sam walked away from him. I loved Seth being Seth :)
And Emmett backing off allowing Rose the chance to fight for herself.
Edwards decision to allow Jacob to live was a smart one. Once Bella recovers from this traumatic event, I know she will reflect on this and be grateful that Jacob still lives. I think had Edward killed Jacob then his death would always be between them. Bella doesn't seem to hold any malice towards Jacob and truly wants him to find love. I think she must feel a wee bit responsible for his actions and blame herself for not being able to love him the way he wanted and needed to be loved.
But that is just my humble opinion :)
Another fantastic chapter. I do not want this story to end :(
Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 18
Yay! good story!
Reviewer: MisguidedAngel (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 18
YAY!!! *Huge round of applause*
I'm happy dancing they are going home:-)
Reviewer: Aimee (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 18
great update more when ur ready
Reviewer: aphroditecullen882 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 18
this has been a very great story to read. very fun.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOL, really, no one else thought of that?!? ¡Ay, qué rico! I am a bit sneaky that way! I'm actually reading all your other stories on that site right now, and as no surprise, your other stories are really, really good too! You know these characters so well, thank you so much posting these stories!
Reviewer: dazzlee me baby (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 18
so amazing. totally did not see that one coming.lol.
ahh so wonderful
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 18
oh no the story's ending in the next chapter? i cant wait to read the E/B conversation but i dont want this story to end. it was so good.
this chapter was really good. i like the way things turned out. im glad bella stood up to jake too.
cant wait to read the next chapter. ill be on my computer all day waiting for the update. :)
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 18
ooh good chapter!! loved it and loved jacob being shown what was wrong! great chapter!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 17
Wonderful, I can't Wait for more.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well, I just couldn't wait! So, I went to your Fanfiction site and read the last two chapters there! Great story, the best I've read yet! I'm even gonna re-read it tonight!!!
Author's Response: lol! you cheat big! but bravo, you're the first person to think of that.
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the reviews!
:D
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 17
AAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!
Get back!! I DEMAND you post the next chapter now! you CANNOT leave me hanging.... *sob* please?????
I need to know that everything is ok, come back...... your computer needs you; your keyboard is feeling lonely and your fingers need the exercise!! :)
Author's Response: I submitted it! I'm just waiting for validation!
and thanks for the five stars!
<3!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 16
Oh oh oh oh oh!
You can't stop there!! I'm glad I weas a wee bit late in reading this chapter so the next one is already posted.... or else I'd be going nuts.
Another brilliant chapter. I'm loving it.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 14
Great chapter once again
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 13
I am confused but I am sure the next Chapter will clear it up. Great chapter!
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 12
Husband? Did you mean fiancee?
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 17
AHHHHH!!!!! I have been a bad bad reader, and took a break to write and now I have so much reading to catch up on... but did I mention AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! I truly hope the next chapters come quickly!!! I really want to knock out Jacobs perfect pearly whites and shove them down his throat!!
*clears throat* Awesome chapter btw :)
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 17
you... bastard! *sigh* Cliffhanger.... grrrrrr....
Can't wait to read the rest though... Patiently waiting... Wonderfully well written!!!
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