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Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 17
cool chapter
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 17
aaaagghhhhh
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great Chapter! I am glad the truth about Jacob came out.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 17
Wonderful, I can't Wait for more.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 17
AAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!
Get back!! I DEMAND you post the next chapter now! you CANNOT leave me hanging.... *sob* please?????
I need to know that everything is ok, come back...... your computer needs you; your keyboard is feeling lonely and your fingers need the exercise!! :)
Author's Response: I submitted it! I'm just waiting for validation!
and thanks for the five stars!
<3!
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 17
AHHHHH!!!!! I have been a bad bad reader, and took a break to write and now I have so much reading to catch up on... but did I mention AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! I truly hope the next chapters come quickly!!! I really want to knock out Jacobs perfect pearly whites and shove them down his throat!!
*clears throat* Awesome chapter btw :)
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 17
you... bastard! *sigh* Cliffhanger.... grrrrrr....
Can't wait to read the rest though... Patiently waiting... Wonderfully well written!!!
Reviewer: krissyp8 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 17
Awesome. I love this story. Oh, I so hope Edward kicks Jacob's ass.
Reviewer: paigecullen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 17
Can't wait for more you are really doing great.
Reviewer: EragonSaphiraRider (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 17
No way. This is way too good. Grr this will keep me hanging.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 17
HOw could you do that to me!! ily2 but it's gunna kill me!
Reviewer: Jessie (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 17
Man, did you have to leave it on a cliffhanger :(
Reviewer: asmbpu (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 17
It took me a while to get into this story, but I'm really glad I kept reading.
Good luck as you continue!
Reviewer: halconmia (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 17
MORE MORE MORE SOON PLEASE!
Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 17
I love this story! Although I do love Jacob (don't worry, I am not team edward!), I still like this twist! I need more!
Reviewer: MissGypsy (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 17
You took the words out of my mind CLIFFHANGER NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have been shaking the whole time reading this chapter... when now typing this i am not able to hold my hands steady!!!! Oh My I can not wait for tomorrow to read the next chapters!!! I have to say this has been a great story to read..
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 17
I'm on the edge of my seat!!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 17
EVIL. YOU HAVE FALLEN TO THE DARK SIDE OF THE FORCE. Cliffhanger :(
I want to see Edward kick Jacob's ass, tear his head off, and a few other things :P
Reviewer: RhiannonCullen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 17
your story is really really good. i was hooked. i hate cliff hangers. can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 17
AAARRRRGGG!!! Help me! I'm hanging on a cliffy!!!!!!
Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 17
No review until I get a new chapter!!!!
Just kidding -- this is great! I wonder if in this universe if Sam can stand up and be alpha because Jake is being such a terrible Alpha.
Reviewer: hus8 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 17
Wow!! Great set up and writing. I can't wait to see what happens in the standoff
Reviewer: Simply-Sardonic (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 17
Ok, I'm going to start off by apologising for not reviewing previous chapters. In all honesty I have been so immersed in the story that I was far to eager to get onto the next chapter. This story is absolutely brilliant. I've laughed (mainly at Emmett's pathetic jokes and outbursts) and done a fair share of crying. I'm such a sucker for angst stories, it would be an achievement to not cry.
I love how much of a prick Jacob is. I'm so Team Edward and even in Breaking Dawn I wanted to rip the stupid dog's head off!
I hope that our Vampires take out those dogs. Or even better yet, I would love to see the dogs turn on Jacob and side with the Vampires because of his horrendous lies. That would be absolutely insane (in a good way).
Anyway, I love your style of writing, the plot, the characterization and pretty much everything about this! I hope you can update soon as I am anxious for a good fight ;)
Favorited =D
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 17
NO NOT A CLIFFIE!! NO NO NO!!
will the entire pack fight if they find out the truth? i hope not. at least bella is safe now... wel safer. if a fight does start who knows what'll happen to her. will she be injured and then changed? ok thats wishful thinking. i really want bella to be changed though.
please update soon. i cant wait for tomorrow.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 17
Go get her, Edward! They could swim with her....? They have an advantage in the water. Although that of course doesn't resolve the conflict and bring Jacob down like he needs to be!
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