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Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 16
woohoo bring it on i always wondered what would happen if it had been the vamps against the wolves, so next chapter roll on
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 16
sneaky sneaky!!
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 16
i just started reading this story today. i'm terribly sorry that i haven't reviewed, but honestly, i just had to get to the next chapter. amazing story! i did catch the hiddent message thing, it reminded me of when alice let the message for bella in BD. You have thrown quite a few twists my way though.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 16
i just started reading this story today. i'm terribly sorry that i haven't reviewed, but honestly, i just had to get to the next chapter. amazing story! i did catch the hiddent message thing, it reminded me of when alice let the message for bella in BD. You have thrown quite a few twists my way though.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 16
Tears came to my eyes when I read that note from Bella. That was so beautiful!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 16
Oh oh oh oh oh!
You can't stop there!! I'm glad I weas a wee bit late in reading this chapter so the next one is already posted.... or else I'd be going nuts.
Another brilliant chapter. I'm loving it.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 16
I loved Jasper being there for Edward. And I loved her words in the letter.
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 16
YIPPY!!!! i am so glad that your story turned this way!!!! i can't wait for the battle for bella. i cannot tell you how excited that i am to read the next two chapters...
thanks~ amy
Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 16
The suspense!! The plot thickens!! Nicely done to have Edward and Bella walk in each others shoes! Now we can focus on despising Jacob!!
Waiting for tomorrows postings. :-)
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 16
ooh was not expecting that. how dare that piece of crap jacob do that to her. i hope the vamps come out fighting and take the dogs down. great chapter!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 16
Wow another great chapter. I hope the Cullen's go and kick so werewolve butt. Please keep up with the writing as I can not wait till the next chapter. Sincerely, PLV
Reviewer: MissLucy (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 16
Fantastic story so far. I'm definitely hooked.
Thanks for updating so quickly and keep up the wonderful work!
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 16
I wonder if Bella wildo something to hen the fight.
Great chapter..as always
Reviewer: bethann2103 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 16
Just read your whole story in one sitting and I love it! I love when i find a good story that has so much written. I really like the plot line and think you did a great job with the characters. i can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 16
I would walk through hell for Bella without even questioning it, why would I let myself be encumbered by 20 plus werewolves when she was what was to gain. Yay!! Hehe, i'm looking forward to some action :).
a large portion of you called the hidden message thing. I think I need to be less transparent with my writing, you all seem to be catching on rather quickly :p It's because we're smart and love your writing so much!
Reviewer: cwal (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 16
Gosh I hope they kill Jacob!! Sorry that was harsh but my gosh, he's a monster!! Go Eddie....go get her!!!!
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 16
This is amazing. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 16
Yeah I also figured out the note in the book, though I expected it to actually be written on a cover or something where it wouldn't fall out while he was running or something.
Why else would she want him to have it? (The book, not the note)
Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 16
She's going to try to kill herself, isn't she? I thought that might be what she was implying to as in 'might already be dead' and how he'd feel responsible for what happened after he left... maybe I'm reading too much into it, but he'd better get there quick; Edward can't handle loosing her again!
Great story, btw...very awesome in it's awesomness!
Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 16
Yea!!!! lets go and get her! I wonder how they can do it though. Can they keep her prisoner on the reservation forever? I can't wait for the update.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 16
Awesome! Bring it Jacob!
Reviewer: krissyp8 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 16
Wow. I love your story. I can't wait for Chapter 17. I'm dying here. I have to say it is an interesting twist on the original character, Jacob. Poor Bella, stuck with that jerk. You had me so teary eyed in this chapter. I can't wait for a happy ending for Bella and Edward.
Reviewer: dazzlee me baby (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 16
oh my... I had some idea about the letter, but I had no idea it would be that good. Oh I'm going to be sad when this story ends...lol. Def. one of my favorite stories...
Your doing an amazing job!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 16
Seriously, it's that close to the end? Knowing me and my horrible time zone, I'll end up reading the last part on Saturday. Can't wait!
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