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Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

awesome chapter

Reviewer: risabella (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 13

Now you did it. You made me cry. I was already close several times during the last 13 chapters.

I'm lost for words at the moment. I know I should quit and go to bed but I don't know if I can.

Heartbreaking story. Thank you.

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 13

I am confused but I am sure the next Chapter will clear it up. Great chapter!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 13

I can't blame Bella for being angry and mistrustful of Edward. She is a strong person to hold up so well after everything she has been through. Edward is an idiot but he loves her. I hope she realizes that even though he doesn't deserve she will never be complete without him.

Reviewer: aerialla (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 13

God you really know how to hit people in the heart don't you.

Forget the trout it's too good for you. Liverwurst now there's something icky I can throw at you, it has a good velocity and sticks to just the right places. ;)

Reviewer: twerd (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 13

oh god, this is so sad. i must admit that i kinda love angsty edward, but callie! oh, i bet this is not going to go very well for him. loved it though, keep up the good work

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 13

Powerful stuff!

Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh my this chapter and the one before are so heart wrenching it is unbearable.

Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow.

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wonderful, just so emotional. I love this story and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 13

ooh loving this..!!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh what a sad chapter! But thanks so much for the quick update! :)

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow! Chapter 13 had me dying inside for Edward! You really captured his pain well, you actually got me to cry. I'm so curious how this will end, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

wow. i feel sorry for edward. i dont know how i could live with myself if i knew it were my fault that four other innocent people died.

will the story change POVs so we know what bellas going to do or is bella coming back?

please update soon.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 13

OME! You owe me a box of hankies!

How sad Callie was her little sister, one she never got to meet :(

Another fantastic chapter.

Now i'm all caught up I need you to hurry and update!!

Reviewer: MissGypsy (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 13

**crying** that is sad!!! So Jacob lost control? The way she stopped mid sentence last chapter makes me think that a werewolf is to blame for Bella being hurt!!! So has for Edward - well thats him being stupid! So I'll me waiting for the next chapter and hopefully he steps up!! I did enjoy this chapter very emotional!! Nicely done...

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh, please end B&E's suffering! And by extension, OURS! This is torture! Sweet torture....but TORTURE still! MORE PLEASE!!!!

Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow, oh wow!! Did she write the part about unexplained car accident results in drowning too? Is she planning to kill herself?

So good. Your story is so good I can't stand it!! I can't wait for the update!!!

Reviewer: dazzlee me baby (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 13

this is getting to be so thrilling!

I love it!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 13

Did...Bella try to off herself?

Or did her fiance (aka Jake) die in a car accident? Or I guess battling Victoria in the water?

WHAT!? EVIL EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!! SO EVIL IT'S NOT FUNNY!!

Update soon. PLEASE!

Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 13

Aww....that is so good and sad and... I don't know. I love it! Can't wait for more!

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