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Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 10

ok 1 puzzle solved now how did she get attacked & omg so glad edward finally manned up & told her it was all a big lie

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wow, Didn't think she would tell him so quickly about Renee and Charlie, now that Edward would be so calm as he is.

<clicks> next...

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 10

Very good, and Finally Edward Wakes Up. Wonderful, I love It!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

WOW!! Bella has been through so much! I am glad that he finally confessed his feelings to her! Cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wow! Another great chapter. I didn't leave a review for Chapter 9 cause I was in too much of a hurry to get to Chapter 10, lol. This one definitely answered some questions, but not enough! Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 10

OMG Tears are streaming now. Poor Bella poor Edward.. as for Jake well lets just say I am team Edward all the way.....

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 10

So sweet. I love them together. Can't wait for an update. This is a reat story.

Reviewer: LadySeville (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 10

It's about time Edward told Bella he still loved her and lied to her when he left. I wish I could also smack him on the back of his head! I think Bella loves Jacob as someone who was there for her through some really difficult times but I don't think she loves him like she does Edward. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: MissGypsy (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 10

Very Nice... Well I have to say it DID love the talk that Edward and Alice had!!! Even if she didn't smack some sence into him! But I am happen that he has said his piece... So with that I do have my helment on and ready to go for Edwards NEXT stupid act!!!!!

Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 10

Ouch. How awful for Bella. Thanks for having Edward finally confess. Where do they go from here? And where is Jacob? Guess I'll have to wait for your next update. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 10

wow. that was intense. thank you for finally letting us into bellas past. i feel like i understand bellas actions a lot better now. i cant wait to find out where jacob is though. after everything jacobs done for bella, im not sure who bella will actually choose. she should pick edward because she loves him but she kinda owes jacob, and leaving him isnt really a good way to repay him (lol). please update soon. this story just gets better and better.

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 10

It's clear she doesn't love Jake. Please don't draw out her decision-making process between them toooo much!

Reviewer: twerd (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 10

ome, i totally cried

amfuckingazing

Reviewer: MissLucy (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 10

I really love this story so far. You write wonderfully.

Please update soon!

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 10

so I guess the next question is where is Jacob???

Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 10

Incredible. Wow, I have been sucked into this story from the first chapter, and now I'm sitting here anxious for more! Awesome story, looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 10

Aww, this is so cute, and so sad!

Reviewer: MissGypsy (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 10

Very nice chapter... I did have a nice laugh when Edward and Alice had there talk!!! Now I am very happy that Edward at least told her his feelings! So with that I have my helmet ready for him to be stupid!!!!

Reviewer: anonymous (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 10

Oh my mother fucking god. That was epic.

You did a very good job with Edward's confession. I liked Bella's reaction; it was very in character.

This is an amazing story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: starangel143 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 10

Another fantastic chapter...can't wait to read more! Thanks again!

Reviewer: mercury10872 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 10

omg, that was great again! So where do we go from here, lol! Cannot wait until the next update!

Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 10

this just keeps getting more and more agnst filled.

part of me wants a resolution soon, but part of me wants this to go on for a while because it is such a good read.

post soon~amy

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 10

good stuff :)

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 10

Because you're an idiot Edward, that's how you could have left her. Love the chapter!

Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 10

Ohhh good stuff! I cant wait for more!

I hope we find out what Bella was doing in Denali soon! And where the heck IS Jacob?

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