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Reviewer: ajendas (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 7

i'm supposed to be packing up my life into boxes while it's still light but I can't seem to stop reading this...i guess you can call that a compliment right? Thanks for the excuse to procrastinate some more!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hmmmm, I still think something is not right. Perhaps Bella and Jake are friends but I don't think he is her fiance though.

Another well written chapter. I loved rose's apology to Bella :) Edward should have known better.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 7

Very nice. Very well written. You have me hooked now.

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 7

Have I told you lately that I love your story? Because I absolutely do! I'm torn between thinking Bella's fiance is a werewolf (specifically Jacob) or another vampire (cause she's going to Alaska and if she was with Jacob she wouldn't have to go there) or non-existent as I really wish! Edward, oh Edward! I'm actually hoping that Rose is going to wait for him to leave and take it upon herself to tell Bella that Edward loves her! I know none of the rest of the family will do that, but Rosalie never really cares too awful much about making Edward mad. I loved seeing Emmett stand up to Rose; too often he justs seems like her trained dog or something and it's nice to see Emmett hold his own and take up for his little sister! It was kind of weird hearing Esme trying to be "cool" with Bella, lol, and of course Alice's shopping addiction is always a nice little side note! Loved it!

Reviewer: mercury10872 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 7

Very good, very good! Funny to read how upset Emmett is with Rose considering she always wears the pants in that relationship, lol. I hope Bella reveals her secrets soon and that she gives Edward another chance. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

This is going right into my favorites! I love the mystery behind this story, I'm dying to know more details!!!

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 7

I'm definitly hooked.

Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ok - sometimes I can be a bit dense. It took me an embarrasingly amount of chapters before I thought that maybe it was Jacob who "attacked" her - though why it is taking so long for him to get in touch with her is beyond me. He might feel bad - but you would think that he would be concerned. Or maybe he was mad that she was leaving - or she was looking for Denali or who know. But I think it was Jacob -- or at least a werewolf. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

Yeah! He says hes gonna fight for her but wheres his damn back bone! Ugggh Edward needs to grow a pair especially if that phone of hers ever does ring!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 7

Is bella lying about having a fiance? Loved this chapter. Cannot wait for more

Reviewer: Anna (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

Very interesting chapter. Lots to think about. Glad that Bella was able to relieve Jasper's guilt. Noticed that Bella is still dodging fiance questions. Hmmm. Rosalie's got me pondering. Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

another great chapter. this story is getting better and better with each chapter. i still dont like the whole engaged thing but hopefully it will all work out.

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 7

“She’s engaged.”

“And I’m part German! That doesn’t make a damn bit of difference.” She retorted, finally turning to look at me.

That reminds me of the 'And I'm a virgo' part in the third book, i love this story cant wait for an update!

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