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Reviews For Branching Inward
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 10: A Catalog of What Feels Good

Love love love this story!!

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 10: A Catalog of What Feels Good

Super hot!

Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2011 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 10: A Catalog of What Feels Good

This story continues to enthrallme...triggering such deep emotions....

 

Looking forward to new chapters.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2011 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 10: A Catalog of What Feels Good

Edward's home is a dream - I would move in any day. Your Edward is one of the hottest I've read about, so sexy, so talented, so full of secrets and surprises ...

 

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 08:54 AM · On: An Oak Tree Made of Thread

Loved the quilt and the little verse. Sooo ... Tanya died and Edward feels guilty. Each of your chapters makes me want to read more and really soon!

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 03:35 AM · On: An Oak Tree Made of Thread

Great writing!

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 09:34 PM · On: An Oak Tree Made of Thread

Yep his Tanya died there.  He is leaving next year or maybe sooner. So short story huh? He carries alot of guilt regarding her death.  That is really sad for him. Perhaps the new place will be good for him. He can move on find a new life and forget this missery.  He and Bella just met and afterall they are just friends.

 

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 6: Breath, Muscle, Strength

Well of course..............TANYA.. The love of his life has died, or left him.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Scent of Lilies and Soap

Intrigueing, I hope you will update often. Once a month and I will have to reread. I absolutely hate that. Some of the stories with lots of detail I wait for several chapters or the end before I read.

 

You are a good writer and the idea here is good. Keep going!

Reviewer: bellobella (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 07:00 PM · On: An Oak Tree Made of Thread

Wow..so intense and so beautifully written. I love it!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 03:43 PM · On: An Oak Tree Made of Thread

I just love this story!

Merrily

Kat

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 2: Portraits

That was nice.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 12:10 PM · On: An Oak Tree Made of Thread

Aww, great ending line here. I love this story!! Your Edward is AWESOME! I want him. :-)

Reviewer: bellobella (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 03:23 PM · On: Sparks

This chapter was so, so lovely. I am enthralled.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Sparks

Awww - what a beutiful date day and night. Makes me want to sit by the fire with Edward watching the stars. Those two are really unique as well as the Cullens. I'm so glad you resumed posting.

Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 04:34 AM · On: Sparks

A gentle, but slightly melancholy story.  Makes you want to pull him into your arms for a comforting hug.

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 11:57 PM · On: Sparks

<3<3<3

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 04:28 PM · On: Sparks

I'm so confused about edward. He's a tough cookie. I love a mysterious man though

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 02:39 PM · On: Sparks

All caught up, yay! Can't wait for the next chapter. :-)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Honey

Oh god yum. Do we really need willpower here? Wouldn't sex be better. Yes, yes, I think sex is better. God, I love the slow burn. :-)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 6: Breath, Muscle, Strength

Fantastic chapter - I really enjoy this story. It has a lot of heart and a lot of mystery to it that just makes it amazing!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: The Scent of Lilies and Soap

Great chapter. And a good pausing point for me. Can't wait to finish this AFTER I get done with some work. Very addictive though. Wonderful story. Fraught with mystery. Love it.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Light and the Darkness

And can't stop on that chapter either. Tho, what an AMAZING kiss!!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 3: Light Bulbs and Tea

Well, I certainly can't stop reading there! Please a kiss in the next chapter. *crossing fingers*

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 2: Portraits

I'm intrigued. I need to work, but I'm intrigued. Maybe just one more chapter...

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