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Reviews For Isabella Swan
Reviewer: lightninglaura (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 22

My floor is covered in tears! i hope your happy! they're ones of joy! your work is amazing and i like that edward and bella were already together at the start! Asome 10/10,

Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow!  I should have reviewed more, but I just couldn't stop reading!  I'm really shocked this story doesn't have more reviews!  GREAT READ!!  Good job...now you've got my interest peaked for Slither....so, I'm off!!  xoxox



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the story. Thank you for reading. =)

See yah in Slither. *winks*

Reviewer: serenityx3 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Why doesn't this story have more reviews? This story is so great. It's so different for once and very unpredictable! I really adore it. Especially since it centers around Bella and her life. Not just the romance portion, it gives her a character for people to relate to. I LOVE this. Might I add, I might make a video for it soon :)



Author's Response:

Wow, I would love that. Even if you won't be able to make it, I still want to thank you for that thought of even doing it. Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: laughter (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 14

Demonizing Charlie is AWESOME. I think it's a wonderful twist of the Twilight universe.



Author's Response:

Lol. Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 22

Thank you for hours of fantastic reading.  I am looking forward to your new story "Slither".  I love your interpretation of Bella and Edward and the rest of their family members.  So different from the usual depiction by other authors.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so happy you enjoy what I write. =) *hugs and kisses*

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 22

That was such a sweet ending :) I'm so sad it's over though :'( I'm going to miss this story.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Thank you. =) *hugs*

Reviewer: wolfgang (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow, an exhilarating end to an amazing ride. It's such a pleasure to meet a writer who not only prolifically updates, but delivers with every update. For what it's worth, I think this story deserves thousands of rave reviews, and we're happy to be able to enjoy talent in "Slither".

Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie. You just made me smile. Really. =)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 22

Honestly...sniff sniff.    I hate saying goodbye to characters.   You have made them part of our lives.   The storyline was wonderful...and it really did come full circle.   Bella was destroyed obviously by the loss of her mother and the emotional loss for so many years of her father, but in the end...she was there, at the beach, with her now husband, cliff diving where her mother had her ashes released, and where her mother had grown up.   Loved it.   Now Bella is a Cullen, and everyone is happy.   A little one on the way, and they are both thrilled.   Can't believe it is over.   You brought us so much happiness over the months...and we thank you.   It was a real pleasure to share in your first fanfiction, and to enjoy you as an author.   We will look forward to future publications.   Best of luck.  Until we meet again!  (Kissing my hand and blowing it to you) Hugs and Kisses.



Author's Response:

Hearing you say I gave you happiness with this little story of mine warms my heart. I am honored you even gave your time reading it. For that, I am thankful.

Hope to see you again in the future. =) *muahz*

Reviewer: juicybuff (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 22

i'm sad this is the end. i'm maddly in love with this story. you did a fantastic job. i also love slither. keep up with the good work.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you loved this story. Thank you. ;)

Hope to see you around in the future. *hugs* 

Reviewer: wolfgang (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 21

I love how E/B have both emerged stronger and wiser at the end of this journey...and the prelude to the proposal? It's unbearably sweet, like eating truffles while looking at a family portrait of Rob,Kristen,Jella and Bear.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. ;)

Thank you for always reading and reviewing. I appreciate it all of it. =) *hugs*

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 21

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 21

The story is starting to wrap up so nicely, but it's was such a wonderfully warm chapter.   Hearing about Bella's meeting with Billy, and what he pressed in her hand, sniff sniff...brought tears to my eyes.   He really did love Renee and didn't want to let her go completely.    It made me a little emotional.  So much wasted time.   Bella at least seemed to understand and it may have helped her.   Loved that you included this part.  It was great.    I also loved how Edward came back from his trip, and how he seems to propose in his own little way, well maybe pre-propose, if there is such a thing, lol.  Love your story.   Really don't want to see it end.



Author's Response:

I'm sad to see this story end, but as they say, all things must come to an end.

I wanted to show that Bella could someday forgive her dad, and by Billy giving her a symbol of her parent's love for each other, that might be a possibility.

Glad you liked it. Thank you. =)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 21

So Charlie wasn't as much of a douchebag as Bella though...hmm. Love the end of the chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: wolfgang (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 20

A closet the size of my home with instant virtual access and a clandestine, erotic room...I'm now the same shade as a granny smith. lol, great chapter as always!

Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you as always. =)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wow....hot hot hot sex with your roommate.   Things couldn't be much better.  Loved it!   So sweet and so erotic at the same time.   Got to love it!      It was also so sweet that Edward knew that Bella would need him...that she would be upset about Charlie.    Can't wait to hear more.   Write soon! 



Author's Response:

Thanks again. =)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 19

Damn....and holy damn.   Hot..hotter...hottest.   Ok....pretty hot that your boyfriend sets up a secret photo shoot, and marches in the room, wearing a robe.    Definitely got Bella all crazy first thinking he was a random model late, and then pow....great entrance.    Then HOTTER....Well, what can you say about a doing the sexy photo shoot with your super hot boyfriend and ending up with mind blowing sex....YEAH!   Then HOTTEST ....that same hot super sexy boyfriend buys a fabulous penthouse to have you move in....YES  YES  YES!  Way to go!  Loved it!  Reading on.   I guess I missed a chapter somehow...(slap my own face)



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie. Glad you loved it. *grins*

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 20

The whole photo closet idea totally reminded me of the movie Clueless lol. These two are insatiable...the sex floodgates runnith over :)



Author's Response:

Now that you mentioned it, I totally agree with you on that Clueless thing. 

Anyway, thanks. ;)

Reviewer: wolfgang (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 19

I wonder if Robsten has "almost porno" photos in their bedroom too...ahh, to be a fly on the wall, but I digress. Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Lol. That's a good one. Never thought about that, but hopefully they do. Lmao. Anyway, thanks. =)

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 20

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 19

Love the switcharoo at the photoshoot! That Edward is a sneaky little devil. Oh, Pervward :) Love the after-nap conversation and glad Bella said yes :)



Author's Response:

*grins* I loved this whole chapter, I'm glad you did also. Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 19

Good Chapter...



Author's Response:

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: cms02k (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 19

what a great chapter, I love how they love each other so completely.  So Sweet and amazing.  :D



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you liked it. =)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 18

Go Esme, indeed!



Author's Response:

=) Thanks.

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 18

Good Chapter......



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 18

First we listen to the strong over-jealous Edward (which of course is always hot) and the sweet over-protective Emmett (how he was caring for Rosalie, very very sweet) and then we finally hear about Extra Special Esme.   Wow.   I was actuallay thinking as I was reading the story...why doesn't she just threaten to leave him, I mean, if Carlisle really loves Esme, that would be her Ace in the Hole!!!   Hopefully it works!   If Carlisle is that crazy..who knows what he'll do next.   I hope Esme can keep Carlisle in check!!!  Some super love needs to stay in this story.    Love it all!   Keep us going!   Write when you can!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it sweetie. *grins*

Thank you for reading and reviewing. =)

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