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Reviewer: BellaPevensie96 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
CONTINUE! this story makes any day SOOOO much more fun!!!!
Reviewer: annalivia (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted
This was hilarious, laughing out loud the last few chapters! Carlisle's musings about the shelf-life was priceless...
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Really. This is way too good to quit. It does, however, almost demand a second story for the juxtaposition from Bella's revenge and the new picnic seige. The first "felt" complete on its own. It was awesome and funny as hell. Be proud. It now feels like a new story starting from scratch. I look foreward to updates.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Completely hilarious! Dude, even if we get caught, the last thing anyone’s gonna think is ‘blood-sucking vampires bombed us with a water balloon catapult! Dude that's a classic! :)
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Watering Hole
He he, gotta love Emmett and the fact that Bella can hold her own :)
Reviewer: cotnut (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
I really enjoyed your story. I am a mother of 3 boys. My oldest is almost 8 and I already see his mind working this way. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: WickdCal (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Watering Hole
I LOVE IT :)
<3 <3 can't wait fot more
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted
I don't think I've ever laughed so hard over a story! This was hysterical!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Conspiracy
Poor Poor Emmett!!!!!! He'll have all the Cullen women and Bella furious with him!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Phase 1
""By way of greeting, he leaned in and kissed Bella. I looked out the window and tried to ignore them.
Finally he released her and leaned his forehead against hers. “I love this devious side of you,” he chuckled.
“Yes, yes, you love everything about her, Edward. Now come on. Let’s get going!” Sheesh, leave it to him and he’d be out here all afternoon kissing Bella.
He grinned at me. “I fail to see how that’s a bad thing.”" Don't worry Edward, it not a bad thing!!
I love how Edward yelled at Jasper to beat Emmett!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yay Bella's acting doesn't suck!!!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Watering Hole
""Suddenly, without turning, Bella called up to the third floor. “Esss-meeee,” she dragged the name out into a prolonged whine.
“Yes, Bella?” Esme called back down, clearly confused.
“Emmett’s stalking me again,” she whined, managing to sound a lot like a six-year-old.
Behind me, my brothers burst into laughter."" I absolutely love this part. Its like you can actually hear a whiny 6 year old.
Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Your story is amazing!!!! The first prank was incredible. I love all the reactions. They're spot-on. I can't wait to see what trouble they'll get into with the catapult! :)
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Threats
"“You can use the third floor washroom to clean up,” Bella called after me. “It’s safe. I made Edward check!”" That was so totally awesomea~!!!!!!
Reviewer: chrrispysmomlee (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
I'VE READ THIS 3 TIMES AND LOVE IT MORE, EACH TIME. IT IS FUNNY, SURPRISING, THOUGHTFUL AND EXTREMELY WELL WRITTEN. YOUR (SM'S, OF COURSE) CHARACTERS ALL STAY IN CANON AND ARE ALL THE BETTER FOR IT. HURRY WITH MORE CHAPTERS!!!
Reviewer: sketchgirl (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Oh my goodness...please finish this story! I was laughing so hard I had tears...LOL! Wonderful story...really hilarious!!
Reviewer: RosalieRLH (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
Please please please, when's the next chapter coming!?!?!?!? Please, write the next chapter/sequel!!! PLEASE!
Reviewer: RosalieRLH (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted
I was laughing so much......please write one more fanfic that takes place after breaking dawn!!! please?
Oh, and my rating for this fic is.....FULL!!!!!
Reviewer: RosalieRLH (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Rosalie's Return
I was laughing so much when Rosalie yelled at Emmett and when Emmett was taking bath with tomato juice.
This is heaven!!! Please write more fanfictions like this!!!!
Reviewer: RosalieRLH (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pheromones
I think a part of me died of laughter when I was reading this fic!!! I've never laughed so much in this week!!!
AMAZING STORY!!
Keep it up!!
Reviewer: The Infamous Izzy (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
it had to cut off there! cant wait for more!
“Stow it in yer porthole, ya bilge rat!” lmfao.
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Busted
This one was absolutely hysterical!! I laughed so hard I had tears streaming down my face and my cheeks were sore by the time I finished. I loved how you were able to keep everybody in character, even Edward, when this situaltion is not one you would generally find him in. The whole take was woven rich with subtlety, and complexity that made it so much better. Well done!
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Threats
So fantastic. I love the light feel and upbeat, happy Edward in your stories!
Reviewer: Mandaliz8704 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
LOL this is hilarious... keep it up! I love it!
Reviewer: Twilighter001 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Watering Hole
That was too funny! I love it so much! When will you be updating more?
Reviewer: SookieSookie (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Instigator
your daugther was right emmett and a catapult is a good read and i cant wait for the next chapter.
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