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Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 05:04 AM · On: Lost
OK so now the worm turns! Poor Alice, she has such a true understanding of what is happening at such a young age. Thanks - Xanath
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 06:22 PM · On: Fever-
Dude are you really going down this road?. Your writing a pedifile guide. A 'what not to do, when preparing to rape a school yard'. LMAO. Come off it. Good lawd.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 06:06 PM · On: Alice-
Is she still 13 when aro stalks her????? LMAO. All the resources of the V's and its used to stalk a 13yr girl for aro. LOL.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2013 05:10 PM · On: Reborn
Jane created her own hell. Aleida did nothing to deserve her faith, nothing.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2013 05:20 AM · On: Death Jump
Stupid plan on Jane part. She really is no good at this plotting stuff.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 06:57 PM · On: Crush Crush Crush
SMH. Jane is most definetly NOT a strategic thinker.
Aleida power is fascinating. Tell me, can she effect the past or does she just veiw it? If she has the ability to affect the past... talk about power. That would put her right at number one. She could even erase aro, but that would erase her and on and on the domino's fall. hmmm, leaves alot to ponder.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 06:12 PM · On: Competition
This whole so called 'genius' plot has one big hole. ARO. He may not touch one of them before this plot is over, but he will; one day. Then what?.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 03:21 PM · On: Complications
Politics. Here we go.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 02:18 PM · On: Don't you mourn the sun
That was so f'd.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 02:00 PM · On: Drops of Sun
pssssht. Jane is loss cause. Demetri snuck a kiss in, then aro came in an made his own claim. She is 26, and they were allowed to get married at 16 and younger back then, so I don't see the problem.
Still kinda weird.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 12:16 PM · On: Charlotte
That was...tough. smh
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 11:37 AM · On: The Traveler
So... Demetri turned by Jane. Jane and Alec get promoted to council members. Entrapping them even further. Furthermore, jane has a secret crush on aro.
Q: Where are the wives?.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 11:07 AM · On: Revenge
Talk about a deal w/ the devil.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 08:58 AM · On: Who is Like the Lord
Yes, jane would need to be loving and trusting to an extreme amount to be that faithful to aro, before chelesea[ charminion] arrival. Good character development.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 08:23 AM · On: God's Justice
I see aro has no guards with him. Also rather convient that the crowd disperse, the priest leave soon after, and that they are alive. That had to be the most 'convienent' part. Alot of convienence parts to take to place of creativity.
Reviewer: psalms139 (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2012 05:50 PM · On: God's Justice
This is so good. The first chapter is written well enough that it could stand alone without the other chapters and still hold it's own in a fanfic contest. Keep up the good work
Reviewer: Avalonia (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 07:59 AM · On: God's Justice
Very interesting! I've always thought there was a sad lack of Jane and Alec fics, especially with such a fascinating history. I can see I have lots of chapters to catch up on; may take me a while but I'll be back!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 02:50 PM · On: Hell
'You see, for many of us London or at least England was their homeland, and it hurt them terribly to see the place they loved reduced to ashes. Many actually asked for permission to go to the city to see if they could help rebuilding it.(...) Much as we hated humans nobody could have ever, ever wished such a tragedy on anyone.' I confess this surprised me.
'Unlike Marguerithe, who had actually awaken some kind of sympathy inside me, hers being the first murder I ever regretted, I couldn’t bring myself to feel any affection for Mariette. Her love of God was exasperating, and her belief that I would undoubtedly be placed among the highest angels when I finally went to His side always made me want to kill myself, or her, or both.' Oh, right! I remember; her experiences with "people of the faith", if you really can call then that, when she was human, left a scar.
“Not turn her back, no. I want her to willingly give herself up to me, and then suffer for it. I want to have her conscience torment her forever. That will be more fun: seducing her, making her fall, and let her feel the remorse for it, instead of just perverting her and shatter everything she is, not to mention that to do that entirely would be impossible.” Hmm... Seeing this, I have to wonder if Jane was the only one in that room to suffer in the hands of the Church. :-/
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 10:53 AM · On: Ice
“Remember what he told you about the child? That he wants a child?” he asked. I nodded. “Well, he’s trying to get it.”(...) “Really? But, still, how…?” Well, with human women, of course. He’s trying to get a human woman to have his child.” I guess this answers my question about hybrids. :-]
'After months of debating with what was left of my conscience and my very prominent ambitions, I chose to help my Master to get whatever he wanted.(...) And, of course, once said child was safely in this world, the mother would have to go.(...) Then, with a motherless baby, Aro would turn to the one who always had always stood by him, who had aided him and the only one who he could trust with such a treasure –me. And then, finally, we would all get what we wanted.' Anyone else feels that this is an ill conceived plan? Again, she would have to hide it from his gift for eternity. Didn't work very well the first time. I suppose it would all depends on how much Aro would care for the mother of his child, once it was delivered. Anyway, I'm with Caius and Alec. It won't give her Aro's heart, no matter what.
Looks like it will be the hard way, then.
Reviewer: JadeZOMBIE (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2012 11:39 AM · On: Hell
I've never been overly fond of the Volturi... But this story has changed that. It's absolutely wonderful.
Reviewer: tabbycat627 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 01:42 PM · On: Reborn
loved it!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 11:29 AM · On: Shattered Ice
You can say whatever you want about Aro, but the man is smart! And I guess it solves the problem of hiding-from-him-for-eternity. :-]
Not that it feels like a victory for Jane right now, between the cold water bucket Aro threw on her and Chelsea's realization.
And he wants a child... Interesting. Makes me wonder how do you rule hybrids in your universe...
Reviewer: tabbycat627 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 05:47 PM · On: Shattered Ice
(0.0) wow, just wow
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Reviewer: tabbycat627 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 01:37 PM · On: Better Than Revenge
please post MORE! I need it! lol. awesome chapter
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Better Than Revenge
Well, I'll be damned! She got away with it. She really got away with it. :-}
Now she, and Alec, just have to be careful with every time Aro touches them, to cover certain memories...
For the rest of eternity.
Geez...
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