Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 17 - She Is Mine in a Moment like This
hope that you still read reviews for this cause i love this story and this chapter gets me laughing til the tears come it soo funny jasper and emmett in the kitchen LOL LOL
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
your story was wonderful; I didn't think I would like it at first, but I stayed with it and found out how good it was. TY
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2012 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 17 - She Is Mine in a Moment like This
I hope u are still reading reviews as this story has been up awhile but i have to say im wiping tears of LOL while the guys tried to cook too funny! This is the 3rd time ive read mystery of you and i love it more im fairly new to twlighted and ive read some really good stories by some amazingly talented people you being one of them Thanks for sharing the talent hope i can read more from you in future
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2012 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
loved this so much it grabbed me from the start twists turns and depth well done LOVED the last line thanks for your hard work u put alot of love into this i could tell will be looking for new stories from you i hope theres lots! Please more
Reviewer: CullenObsessed_Maybe (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
That was a cute story. i enjoyed it
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
I loved this story. It had depth and twists and I fell completely in love with it. Thank you for sharing it.
Reviewer: stella sin (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
I liked this story very much. It could do with a little editing and a trip trough a thasaurus, but I really liked the plot line and the characters. I always am a sucker for a HEA:)
Sin~
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
What a great tearjerker, happy, fitting ending. Thank you for sharing this lovely story with us.
Judy
xoxoxo
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
I loved your story so much! You did such a great job; you're quite the storyteller. =) Thanks so much for writing. xoxo
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
I really enjoyed this story. It was very well written. The characters were so real and the interaction between the siblings was just hysterical! Thank you for sharing this story!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 34 - She Rights My World
I'm so happy this ended well and that Bella is back where she belongs. I hope the next chapter is one with news that Jake was gang raped in jail! What a bastard he is!
Superb writing by the way....
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 28 - She Indulges My Inner Kid
Coolest, most creative present ever!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 25 - She Runs
This is really a doozy of a roller coaster ride! Well at least the wolf is finally out of the bag... but I gotta have faith,right?
Seriously though, Bella really needs to get professional help to sort herself out...just sayin'
:-/
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 24 - He Wants All of Me
Damn! Definitely worth the wait!!!! So beautiful and so f---ing intensely sexy. I need a cigarette after reading this!
Beautifully written, thank you!
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 23 - She Handles Me With Care
Fiinally a crack in Bella's armor appears. I hope she's getting closer to a point where she trusts Edward enough to share herself with him - body and soul. I really think he deserves her trust - he's proven his worth to her so many times.
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
Thank you for the lovely story. I truly enjoyed every single chapter!
Reviewer: Millburn (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
Thank you for this...hugs back to you too! a great tale, well told, and I'll look out for the out-takes...but let's pick up on the Latin? it would be 'modus operandi' not 'modem'...but it did give me chuckle!
Thanks again, M
Reviewer: TwiMomDO (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
Wow. Just wow. I have stayed up far too late to finish this story--but the bleary eyes and dragging ass I will no doubt have tomorrow are definitely worth it for having read this story. Amazing. I so love all the devotion that E has for B in this story. Easily one of my favorites. Thanks for writing! I think I'll have to reread again.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
outtakes posted on this story or in a totally different story title? thanks or the sweet ending!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
I love when you leave on a high note! You were right to end it here, the story has been completed to the right point! Looking forward to your new stuff!
Reviewer: kate89 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
no, you can't be done! I need more!! This story is too good to let go.
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
I've really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it!
Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
Loved it!! Ended beautifully!! xoxo
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 35 - She Is My Forever
Loved the proposal :) It was perfect for them. Loved the end too :) I'll miss this story :(
Reviewer: MyaSarae (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 34 - She Rights My World
I have spent all day reading this story. I absolutely love it! I can't even put into words what I love about it...everything :)
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