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Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2013 01:55 PM · On: Burn, Baby

  'My jaw clenched as I realized it was something that belonged in a newspaper, or some type of periodical. She was promoting people to come invade our personal space. “It's a beautiful escape of the past and the polite staff will make you feel right at home. The ghosts however? Yeah, not so much ;)” she wrote. Apparently the idea of staying somewhere haunted delighted some people.        “No,” I said angrily, and the laptop suddenly snapped closed. The girl jumped a little and anxiously began to look around. I was shaking, I was so angry. Just recently, a man had used his status to try and demolish our home, but this girl was trying to bring more people in?'        Yeah, another one that signed her own death sentence.

  She really should have listened to Jasper.        :-|

Author's Response:

Yeah, that's true, she really should have.


*Shakes head*


And another one bites the dust...literally.

Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2012 04:08 AM · On: Burn, Baby


Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 06:41 PM · On: Ben

  'It didn't take long to drag him across the banister and throw him. The anger worked on command, I didn't even have to say anything, after I thought that the fall would be enough to kill him, the rope hanging from the chandelier acted on its own, wrapping around the mans throat.'        Are you saying the rope wrapping around Ben's neck was unplanned?

  Poor Ben.  He must have been terrified before the end.        :(

Author's Response:

Oh no it was planned, it just meant that she was controling it, not actually having to do all the work.

I know, I do feel sorry for  him :(

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 06:31 PM · On: Anger

  '“Z-Zane,” I said again and closed my eyes tight at how my voice whimpered. I'd never felt so small, so weak, as this moment. Not since the day I died. I was stronger than that. I was stronger than all of them.'        Really.  One of these days, you will have to tell us why she's so powerful.  Even if it's just to say no one knows why.  But I have a hunch you have a reasoning behind that.        :-]

  'Why couldn't they do anything on their own? children. Really, all I wanted to do was go see Renesmee, but nooo.'        She really likes Nessie, doesn't she?  At least, it keeps her safe, while Edward and Bella are safe because of the state problem.

  'He went down on his knee's quickly, and I liked that better because it put us at eye level. “First of all, you do not talk to me like that. Second of all, I don't give a rat's ass what you think about my plan. You either suck it up and do what I say, or you cross your fingers and hope that wherever a shredded ghost goes it's not Hell.”'        *gulp*  Scary.  Little.  Thing.        :-{

  Between Bella's denial and the ghosts' determination, I really don't know what will happen.  Except it will be bad.  Merry Xmas and New Year, Blood.        :)

Author's Response:

I actually do have a reason as to why Lilith is stronger than the others, but I may not ever be able to explain it in the actual story. If I don't, no worries Costa, I will tell you somehow. It may not be quite as awesome of a reason as you expect though...


Lilith really does like Ness lol :D we'll see how that'll work out ;)


I happen to think she'spretty scary myself XD which is, of course, the whole point *evil laughter*


Marry Christmas and a Happy New year to you as well, Costa :)

Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 02:11 PM · On: Renesmee

"thousands of people"?

Author's Response:


Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2012 04:06 PM · On: Ben


Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 05:52 AM · On: Anger


Author's Response:

The sad thing is that you're smileys are generating chapters. Everyone should thank you!

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2012 11:39 PM · On: Another Death

  “I actually got her,” I said with a grin, and I knew that would get his attention. He looked up quickly, interest written all over his face. “Have you ever tried possession?”        “No,” he said, “Lilith's against it.”        Against it?  Curious.  Seems like a neat tool, from their perspective.

  'The moment the truck's front wheels dropped off the driveway and onto the paved highway, I was suddenly forced out, like something held me back when everything else could go. I stood, dejected, on the very edge of the driveway, and watched the truck slam right into a tree directly across the pavement.        I barely heard Charlotte's scream.'        *tsk*        And here I thought Peter and Charlotte wouldn't be too damaged in Clayton's hands.  At least he didn't do it on purpose.

  Eyphah's mortician must be the only living person in town happy with the current state of affairs.        :-3


Author's Response:

Yeah Lilith doesn't like it at all. I might need to go and explain that...guess the boys could get caught and she could go on a rant about that...


Haha very true, Clayton didn't do it on purpose. Which is actually kind of ironic because he's the angriest...


*Falls over laughing* oh my gosh I never thought of that! I need to write a chapter from the mortician's pov! That would be great!

Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 02:50 PM · On: Another Death


Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 01:48 AM · On: Paranormal Activity

  'You learn over the years that if you return to the place where it all happened it's like...recharging your batteries.(...)        Some of the others didn't like to as much.(...)  as far as I knew, Lilith had never returned. Not that she needed too, she was stronger than all of us combined.'        Interesting, the recharging idea.  And yeah, you already hinted Lilith's strenght before.  I wonder why is that so...

  'She needed the strawberries for her pie, which wasn't that good anyway. Not that he would say that out loud. Ester was the kind of woman who would poison him if he ever said it. And no one would dare raise a finger at the poor, crying widow.(...)        He fell first. Straight through the opening he never saw coming because he was thinking about wrapping his hands around her neck and just killing her then and there.'        Tsk, tsk, tsk!  They weren't that great even when alive, were they?         :-/

  'I watched her fall asleep as my fingers trailed down her stomach softly. I couldn't stay with her, not like this. But it didn't mean she couldn't stay with me.'        Always looking for a replacement for Ester.  His luck(?) is that he's already dead;  otherwise...        :-}

  Again, poor Paul.  Poor Bree.

Author's Response:

Right, I thought it was an interesting idea too. I mean, they're all tied to the land, but for some reason it seems to make since that the spot it all happened would be really powerful...and maybe I'll explain Lilith's strength sometime...


Oh no, Ester and Fredrick have always been the awful, terrible ones. Liltih and Zane were actually good kids, and Clayton was straddling the line somewhere--generally a good person, no morals.


Lol yeah Fredrick is lucky that he's already dead :D otherwise Ester would murder him...


I know, I feel bad for the couple :(

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Paranormal Activity

Good gosh, Frederick. Debbie Downer, much? On a completely different hand, I reall like your story. Keep up the good work! ~RPW

Author's Response:

Haha yeah Frederick is the downer of the group. But I'm really glad you are liking it! Putting a new chapter in the cue now, so give it two weeks give or take :p

Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 05:30 PM · On: Paranormal Activity


Author's Response:

Haha thank you :)

Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 05:26 PM · On: Stepping Up The Body Count


Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 05:24 PM · On: The Business Man


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Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 05:11 PM · On: Time


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Reviewer: debslmac (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 05:07 PM · On: The Newcomers


Reviewer: twilightluvaX3 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2012 11:10 PM · On: Paranormal Activity

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