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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Epilogue
Poor Bella. Good story, I liked it.
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2012 03:20 PM · On: Another Visitor
WHAT?!
Reviewer: mercury_clare (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 09:25 AM · On: Epilogue
good story!
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Epilogue
i loved it!! sooo glad you finished it!! thanks!!
Reviewer: Nayarit (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Epilogue
HI! I just found this story and read all the way through it. I enjoyed it, it was a quick, fun read that captivated me. And, honestly, that's saying a lot because most the time I just skim through fics right now because I don't have the time to read. BUT I read this one front to back and really liked it. The characters really seemed to keep to canon, good job there, and it was interesting.
Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Epilogue
This is a wonderful story. I really love the gift that you gave Bella.
Reviewer: KristyRose (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Epilogue
Thank you for writting this. I enjoyed your storyline and the action. I usually don't like when stories swtich point of views, but you kept there from being much overlap in plot and it even moved things forward quite nicely. Enjoyed seeing Rosalie more involved in the action. Most writers would have just used Alice automatically. Glad you had Bella and Rose connect on their past experiences too. Overall, very easy to read, flowed nicely and great "what if" twist to it.
Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Epilogue
Loved this whole story. Hope to read more of your work. Thank you.
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Piano Lessons
oh shit, hopefully like bd she's not a normal newborn for charlies sake
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Fairytale
what does he mean she's free to leave god this boy can be so thick sometimes
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Too Late
holy fuck that was a gripping opening chapter jeez onwards & upwards did he manage to not kill her
Reviewer: Boredguy (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Epilogue
this i thought was a great story first fic i read but it will remain a favorite
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Epilogue
This was a good story, with a sweet ending, I really liked it! I'll look up what else you've written next!
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Teacher
i am really enjoying the twists to twilight; incorporating the attack and now james. even laurent and the wolves. are you planning on explaining how carlisle knew about sam? it doesn't really matter, obviously this is a different story than twilight, i'm just curious how you would incorporate that storyline. once i finish this story i'll have to see if you've written anything else.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Fairytale
well done. i was impressed with the first chapter and you kept up the quality. i'm often frustrated because the first chapter is very well done, but the following one just aren't as good.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Too Late
oh that was so good. i wish i could write more, but i really need to keep reading.
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Goodbye
god! bella and edward are both so blind sometimes. they both love eachother, but believe that the other is 'too good' for them. its some what annoying to me, the fact that they keep their feelings hidden even though the other feels exactly the same. i do hope they get together soon, all these hidden secretes are making me anxious.
dreamer. <#
Reviewer: DazzlemeDeathly (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Too Late
I don't know why but that made me gag. I'm not usually like that, I love gore! That wasn't even really gory to be honest. Yet you still made me gag! I think you deserve a pat on the back! I was close to tears aswell, poor Edward. I can just tell this story is gunna be gooood.
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Epilogue
Really enjioyed that story, well done!!
Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Sunrise
I love this fiesty, capable Bella!
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Epilogue
Good story. I wouldn't mind a sequel. : )
Reviewer: Passio_nate (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Epilogue
I love happy endings.
Sigh.
Reviewer: Lata525 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Epilogue
This was a beautiful story to read. It is a really good alternative to "Twilight". The circumstances in her being changed were sad but glad at the end there was a H.E.A. I look forward to reading your other work in the future.
Reviewer: mariann17 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Epilogue
Good ending!
Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Epilogue
I liked this story very much!
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