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Reviewer: grayskiesatdawn (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Just a Kiss

Freaking awesome one-shot! I read your profile and I do have to agree with you. E/B stories make Jake out to be either a big-time jerk or just dump his character to get rid of him. And most J/B stories make Edward out to be an ass or heartless. Not saying that either one isn't from time to time in the original stuff, but Bella has a strong connection with both. So there's no reason for this petty stuff when you can have them both.

Still your stuff rocks! Jacob is perfectly in character. Bella, not so much, but for the love of god, she needs to be OOC.

Reviewer: aej1085 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Just a Kiss

Reviewer: Charmer216 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Just a Kiss

This was very sweet

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Just a Kiss

I always love the J/B....they seem so natural... (swooning here)...LOL...Great one shot....hope u do more...

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