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Reviewer: JVP (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2015 01:53 PM · On: Four mouthfuls
God, it's been years since you updated this story. And I have just discovered. Even though, it's been a long time, are you still going to finish this? I actually should be asking if you are okay since it has been a few years....
Reviewer: sugarglider (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Welcome To My World
Nice job!
Reviewer: sugarglider (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Four mouthfuls
Very well written thank you!
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Welcome To My World
Yes, I like! Please continue.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Four mouthfuls
I really like this. I just hope they end up together.
Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Welcome To My World
i like!
Reviewer: Chloabella (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Welcome To My World
Yes, I like.
Reviewer: Chalger3 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Welcome To My World
Wow, great start, i can't wait to see where you take this story
Reviewer: LadySeville (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 08:03 AM · On: Four mouthfuls
Your story instantly got my attention becuse I wondered what would have happened if Edward had attacked Bella that first day. I hope you will continue to add more chapters because i can't wait to see which direction you take the story.
Reviewer: invisiblevampire (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:47 AM · On: Welcome To My World
This seems slightly unlike Bella, but I really like it. Most of the stories about Edward attacking her that day show her falling for him right away, and it seems weird. I think your story is better. Keep going!
Reviewer: Cyartia (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 04:12 AM · On: Four mouthfuls
I love this story and are anticipating your next update with baited breath!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 05:58 AM · On: Welcome To My World
Please, for the love of all that is good in the world, please continue with this story. Its so original, so well written, so entralling, so fascinating!!!!! Please contnue it!!
Reviewer: TotallyKawaii (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 03:37 AM · On: Welcome To My World
This is a wonderful fic so far, and I'm looking forward to it being updated! ♥
Reviewer: Vampire_or_Werewolf (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 08:58 AM · On: Welcome To My World
yeah i like it was awosme i love emmet whoooo yeah this is samel
Reviewer: Mdots (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 12:09 AM · On: Welcome To My World
Very intense... Very well written. Excellent. Although there is too much angst for my liking... and believe me.. I was mourning for Edward and Bella both. So please, at least make this a happy ending. ...please please please Keep it up and update soon :D
Reviewer: DaintyGoddess (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 09:57 PM · On: Four mouthfuls
I must have more!!
Reviewer: maggiemypet (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 03:01 PM · On: Welcome To My World
Wow, this is really great!
Reviewer: IntoTheTwilight (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 02:15 PM · On: Welcome To My World
Ooooo write more. This is very, very interesting.
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 01:55 PM · On: Welcome To My World
yes! I like! Write more ;-)
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 01:40 PM · On: Welcome To My World
Jasper's a moron. Rose is a bigger moron. I mean, she spent YEARS moaning about how her life (death?) was ruined by mean ol' Carlisle; but Bella wasn't dying! Bella didn't HAVE to be changed! Somebody smack them both.
Reviewer: mamagrace (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 01:24 PM · On: Welcome To My World
You write so well that this story is painful to read...I hurt for them both. Are you continuing on now?
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 01:07 PM · On: Welcome To My World
I'm a little confused. Are you trying to portray Bella as being in the midst of newborn rage? Are you trying to portray her as recoiling from Edward because she sees it as an incestuous relationship? The only thing that I'm getting from this version of Bella is a spite, spite, and more spite. She truly seems to hate the Cullens and she seems to have made it her passion in life. I totally understand that Bella would/should feel victimized. I also can imagine how hurt she would be at hearing Emmett and Jasper tell Edward that it's ok to slip up now and then as she writhed on the ground. I also can see how Jasper telling her he thought about killing her to calm Alice would send her through the ceiling. What I don't see is any way out of the situation that you've portrayed. She's been raging for 8 years without ceasing. And she seems to want to do nothing more than hurt the Cullens. My question is why do they not ship her off to Denali? Why even keep her around?What redeeming qualities does this Bella have - beyond being a victim?
Author's Response: Bella was bitten by Edward before she got to know him. I think she has a right to hate the Cullens. And Edward's love for her is so strong; how could he EVER 'ship her off to Denali'?
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2008 12:56 PM · On: Welcome To My World
I definitely want more. This has all the signs of being an amazing story! So please please please write more!
Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 12:53 PM · On: Four mouthfuls
huh. this is different. i look forward to seeing what happens. *clicks next*
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 11:39 AM · On: Welcome To My World
I like very much! More please soon!
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