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Reviewer: Vamp-by-night (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2011 06:44 PM · On: "You're The Best, Jake."

Boooooo Get Jacob off the stage!!! LOL JK. Well... not really. I do hate Jacob. But I enjoy your story though!



Author's Response:

LOL, don't worry. You're not alone in the Jacob-hate :D

Reviewer: allycat38654 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2011 08:02 AM · On: "Dead."

This chapter was so NOT lame, i loved it and cant wait for more soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!

Reviewer: Vamp-by-night (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 07:02 PM · On: "Mine."

Oh my gawd! Although I can not condone murder I STILL love this Edward already. HOTNESS. Mine! HIS indeed. Prsh. Forget Jake. Jake who. Jacob gets on my nerves and I hope I dont have to read about him too much in this fic. I love where this is going. More loony edward please!



Author's Response:

Oh, of course, Murder is bad, bad, bad. :D

Thanks for reviewing! And reading! And breathing!

Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 12:12 PM · On: "Goodbye, Edward."

Uh... whoa.  How did Boy Edward wind up here?  Can't wait to read the backstory on THIS sick son-of-a-.... Well, you know.  And for being a "good" person, Carlisle didn't stick around very long, did he?

Thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

you are very welcome! and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: dustybritches (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 05:23 AM · On: "Dead."

I love Edward.  I love getting inside his head.  Opening up with the murder that lead to his arrest was brilliant.  Seeing it from his vantage point powerful.  Of course I lovvvvvve the "Mine."  Glad with this lunch room conversation to see Bella starting to use her Pych major and reach out constructively.  Apart from Angela and Alice, no one seems to be there to help the inmates.  I'd like to see Bella crawl out of herself and help others.  Maybe Edward can help teach her how.

Even with all that is disturbing about him, he's beautiful and complex.  Well written.

 



Author's Response:

*blushes* thanks! I also love Edward and his POV :D

thanks so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Kyvak (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 07:43 AM · On: "Dead."

LOVED it! Poor Edward, he is so abused =[ But sexy. Yes, still sexy. I missed you... And I just realized I haven't checked my email in MONTHS! I should probably go do that now.... :/

As always, great chapter! I can't wait for more! LUFF YOOU!

~Kyvak~



Author's Response:

awwww I miss you too! where have you been? and where is Chapter 7?????? I'm dying here.
AND I LUFF YOU MOAR.

~<3~

Reviewer: emsybobs (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 07:33 AM · On: "Dead."

Really enjoyed this! Always been a fan of any and all Darkwards, but this is a fantastically different version... Can't wait for more... xD



Author's Response:

why thank you! I plan to be on time this time! :D

Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 03:05 AM · On: "Dead."

Oh shit! So he has multiple personalities????



Author's Response:

hmmmmm you have to wait and see!

Reviewer: miki_hearts_edward_cullen (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 01:03 AM · On: "Dead."

Pitchforks? I'm cool with that, just as long as your able to type...

Loved the chapter btw, but it was a little short. :)



Author's Response:

I'm thinking of changing to a 9 page rule. 8 pages doesn't really do it anymore for me :)

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 11:54 PM · On: "Dead."

If I were Bella, I'd run for the hills screaming right about now... After their conversation, I can't help but wonder if meeting Carlisle again would help Edward? Bring back his voice of reason?

I hope Bella uses her newfound knowledge wisely. I get the feeling that what Edward needs most at the moment is someone who helps him resist the monster and bear the fear...



Author's Response:

ohohohoho... but you're not Bella :P

And so do I. Wouldn't it be horrible if she messed it up?

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 07:19 PM · On: "Dead."

Nutward! LoL  Naw, I'll stick with my "Psychward" -sounds better without the 'o'

Lovin' this crazy story! 



Author's Response:

why thank you very much! and hmmmm, it does sound better without the 'o' :)

Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 07:08 PM · On: "Dead."

I liked the chappy. It was intense and all full of twisted stuff that is Bella's brain right now.  Great job!! xod



Author's Response:

thanks! :D

Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 06:49 PM · On: "Dead."

Wow, that's quite a confession for Edward to tell Bella. How is she going to react to that? Is her desire to be with Edward going to override her sense of self-preservation?

Author's Response:

ooooooh we'll see :D

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 06:24 PM · On: "Dead."

Mine's lame. Issueward. Can Bella help him calm the monster by extinguishing him with good old fashioned sex therapy? I mean the voice did come around the time puberty started! Don't beat yourself up, but I want more! I may not have a pitchfork, but I have lots of pencils. And an electric sharpener!

Author's Response:

Electric sharpener? :O *flails*

Well, I plan to have this next update in on time, so we'll see if you have to put that graphite to use!

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 05:55 PM · On: "Dead."

More? please?

Author's Response:

if you say so... ;)

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 03:01 PM · On: "Dead."

i hope that edward won't let his voice get bella!



Author's Response:

so do I! *crosses fingers* ;)

Reviewer: KKCLOUD2 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 02:52 PM · On: "Dead."

Oh my gosh this update took forever. Definatly worth it though. 



Author's Response:

I know, right? D: and thank you very much! :D

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 08:45 PM · On: After All

Damn, is this a mental institution or a sexual institution?

What makes what Tyler did to Bella any different than what she did to Edward? And he's a patient, she is supposed to be in control of her mental facilities.

Evidentally she's more sexually frustrated than she believes.

I just can't get over that she could loose control with Edward like that.

I really want to get into both of their heads now!



Author's Response:

heh, you love it! ;)

next chapter coming in a few days max; it's in the queue!

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 07:05 PM · On: "Goodbye, Edward."

Well this is an Edward I've never encountered before.

Will his past be revealed to explain maybe some of his childhood occurences that may have brought him to this point?

I've got my bottle of wine ready as I settle into the rest of this story.

I hope it's not one I get interested in and then it gets abandoned.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 11:22 AM · On: After All

will edward be able to over come the bad voice and be with bella?



Author's Response:

who knows? LOL ;)

Reviewer: HeartStopsBeating (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 05:27 PM · On: "Mine."

i really liked the idea but i think for story telling purposes, it would have been more effective to build up to her meeting edward by seeing other patients first, maybe alice? also, i find it a bit hard to believe that they would leave someone as unstable as Edward free to roam. i think they'd atleast give him a supervisior at all times if not keep him locked away in a room. also, if he can get out of his room then why can't he get out of the hospital?

thoroughly excited to read more though!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 01:59 PM · On: After All

Staying for lunch is he....It will be interesting to see who in fact wins this internal struggle



Author's Response:

yes, stay tuned! ;)

Reviewer: Kyvak (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 12:21 PM · On: After All

Saving baby carrots...

LOVED the chapter! Edward is so cute and.... sadistic. It's a weird, but pleseant, combination! lol

I wonder if he really does have a problem? Or maybe you would actually play up the whole "demon" thing.... Not sure. Either way, I'm happy lol I hope the monster doesn't take over him and hurt Bella! That would suck!

You rock!

~Kyvak~



Author's Response:

Cute and Sadistic... yum ;)

next chap coming up(next few days), you also rock! :D

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 10:33 PM · On: After All

He doesn't have a mental illness? Yeah right. But I guess it's kind of normal for someone with a severe mental disorder to not admit as such...

Your chapters usually leave me shaking - for various reasons, fear, anger, anticipation... This one was no different. Thanks for updating!



Author's Response:

you are very welcome! the next chapter will be with you shortly :D

Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 06:53 PM · On: After All

Oh yea!  So he does take meds.  Obviously not the right ones but hey whatever. Awesome story!



Author's Response:

thanks very much! :D

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