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Reviewer: ans816 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 05:07 AM · On: Handcuffs and Heart-to-Hearts (VJGM)
Please write more soon! I really want to find out what happens next.
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Surprise, Surprise
I love little dogs... I have a cream Pomeranian (I had two, but my beloved Jojo passed away in August due to liver failure) named Honey Bun. She often sits on my lap when I am working on my own story or reading fanfics here.
One thing I am glad about... your B&E are taking their time. So often, the fan fics have them jumping in the sack right away. I am glad that your two seem to be a little more old fashioned, even if they have 'naughty' thoughts... they behave themselves.
Reviewer: MonkeyStar (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Handcuffs and Heart-to-Hearts (VJGM)
I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I still can't figure out how the camera got inside. Oh well...one of those mysteries...
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Not So Picture Perfect
That is some of the dangers of online dating. Lord knows I've met many a skeez over the years. None of them were as forceful as James, but still kinda creepy and forward for someone I just met. Glad Alice was able to get out of there so quickly.
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Let's Make a Match
This is a cute start. I met my hubby from an online dating site... match.com. LOL We've been together almost four years now, married just over a year.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Handcuffs and Heart-to-Hearts (VJGM)
Good chapter! I'm glad they found her in time.
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Handcuffs and Heart-to-Hearts (VJGM)
I'm so glad you updated!
Anyway, loved the chapter. Good thinking on Bella's part. If I were her, I probably wouldn't have been able to think on my feet as quickly as she did. But thank God she was able to escape, and thank God for Alice and Charlie being there for her.
Looking forward to this Valentine's chapter. Hopefully, Edward and Bella are able to do something really romantic to celebrate. And hopefully, Alice and Jasper get better at, well, *cough* you know LOL. Though I'm sure with time, things will improve :-)
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Handcuffs and Heart-to-Hearts (VJGM)
Great chapter! I'm glad Bella was able to get away from the wackos. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Handcuffs and Heart-to-Hearts (VJGM)
Fabulous update!
Keep up the great work!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: Twilight_1012 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Across the World with No Return? (VJGM)
OMG! this is amazong..your writing is so great...um i think that it shouldnt come undone. it would make what she has to do more exciting wiht her hands tied! :) then again...its bella :) i hope you update all your stories soon...cuz i luv um all :)
--Kayla--
Author's Response: I apologize for the long wait. Luckily, the semester is almost over, my relatives have moved out, and now I have a lot more time. I've also been taking part in The Fandom Gives Back. I am up for auction with drabbles and a one-shot/outtake, along with a ton of other amazing authors, artists, and crafters. I really hope you can stop by my thread. http://thefandomgivesback.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fic&action=display&thread=183
Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing my story and I am so happy you think my writing is great. It makes me proud to be an author, even if just in fanfiction. To make up for the wait, you get two teasers for the upcoming chapter!
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I stayed close to the wall outside the restroom and hurriedly clicked the down button for the elevator. The door opened and I got in with one last look over my shoulder. Lucy had begun to turn towards the restroom and caught sight of me, just as the doors began to close. I smashed the door close button, knowing she was probably coming after me.
I ran out as soon as the doors reopened on the bottom floor, looking back to see if they had taken the stairs. I ran smack into the last person I expected.
--
"Areyoutwosleepingtogether?" I blurted out, running the words together.
"What?" she asked, looking confused.
"It's just, you guys seem more touchy-feely, and I just thought that if you had gone to that step, we would have talked about it like we always do."
"Wait, what? I didn't even catch what you said. Are you asking if Jasper and I are...having sex?" She whispered out the last part.
----
Thanks for reading and for sticking with me. Hopefully, you'll stick with me till the end. Also, if you check out my profile on FF.net, there's always info about me and my stories.
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Strike a Pose
Ojk if she can get away with no harm quckly i vote untie the rope.. if not keep her tied
Author's Response:
I apologize for the long wait. Luckily, the semester is almost over, my relatives have moved out, and now I have a lot more time. I've also been taking part in The Fandom Gives Back. I am up for auction with drabbles and a one-shot/outtake, along with a ton of other amazing authors, artists, and crafters. I really hope you can stop by my thread. http://thefandomgivesback.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fic&action=display&thread=183
Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing my story. To make up for the wait, you get two teasers for the upcoming chapter!
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I stayed close to the wall outside the restroom and hurriedly clicked the down button for the elevator. The door opened and I got in with one last look over my shoulder. Lucy had begun to turn towards the restroom and caught sight of me, just as the doors began to close. I smashed the door close button, knowing she was probably coming after me.
I ran out as soon as the doors reopened on the bottom floor, looking back to see if they had taken the stairs. I ran smack into the last person I expected.
--
"Areyoutwosleepingtogether?" I blurted out, running the words together.
"What?" she asked, looking confused.
"It's just, you guys seem more touchy-feely, and I just thought that if you had gone to that step, we would have talked about it like we always do."
"Wait, what? I didn't even catch what you said. Are you asking if Jasper and I are...having sex?" She whispered out the last part.
----
Thanks for reading and for sticking with me. Hopefully, you'll stick with me till the end. Also, if you check out my profile on FF.net, there's always info about me and my stories.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Across the World with No Return? (VJGM)
I'm really loving this story. I'm glad to see that you have updated. I would vote for the rope coming loose but really which ever one will get us an update faster is even the better choice. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. As for the EPOV chapter. If it's for past chapters in his POV I would vote for the date he gave her the promise ring and the semi lemon that followed. If it's for future chapters I'd vote for the reunion chapter after the kidnapping or when the reach their first real lemon. You are doing a wonderful job with this story. All I can say is awesome writting.
Author's Response:
I apologize for the long wait. Luckily, the semester is almost over, my relatives have moved out, and now I have a lot more time. I've also been taking part in The Fandom Gives Back. I am up for auction with drabbles and a one-shot/outtake, along with a ton of other amazing authors, artists, and crafters. I really hope you can stop by my thread. http://thefandomgivesback.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fic&action=display&thread=183
Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing my story and I am so happy you think my writing is good. It makes me proud to be an author, even if just in fanfiction. To make up for the wait, you get two teasers for the upcoming chapter!
----
I stayed close to the wall outside the restroom and hurriedly clicked the down button for the elevator. The door opened and I got in with one last look over my shoulder. Lucy had begun to turn towards the restroom and caught sight of me, just as the doors began to close. I smashed the door close button, knowing she was probably coming after me.
I ran out as soon as the doors reopened on the bottom floor, looking back to see if they had taken the stairs. I ran smack into the last person I expected.
--
"Areyoutwosleepingtogether?" I blurted out, running the words together.
"What?" she asked, looking confused.
"It's just, you guys seem more touchy-feely, and I just thought that if you had gone to that step, we would have talked about it like we always do."
"Wait, what? I didn't even catch what you said. Are you asking if Jasper and I are...having sex?" She whispered out the last part.
----
Thanks for reading and for sticking with me. Hopefully, you'll stick with me till the end. Also, if you check out my profile on FF.net, there's always info about me and my stories. Thank you again for all the wonderful praise and I'll keep your votes in mind for the EPOV.
Reviewer: lost in his golden eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Across the World with No Return? (VJGM)
I love the determinism of Bella in this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon. :)
Author's Response:
I apologize for the long wait. Luckily, the semester is almost over, my relatives have moved out, and now I have a lot more time. I've also been taking part in The Fandom Gives Back. I am up for auction with drabbles and a one-shot/outtake, along with a ton of other amazing authors, artists, and crafters. I really hope you can stop by my thread. http://thefandomgivesback.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fic&action=display&thread=183
Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing my story. To make up for the wait, you get two teasers for the upcoming chapter!
----
I stayed close to the wall outside the restroom and hurriedly clicked the down button for the elevator. The door opened and I got in with one last look over my shoulder. Lucy had begun to turn towards the restroom and caught sight of me, just as the doors began to close. I smashed the door close button, knowing she was probably coming after me.
I ran out as soon as the doors reopened on the bottom floor, looking back to see if they had taken the stairs. I ran smack into the last person I expected.
--
"Areyoutwosleepingtogether?" I blurted out, running the words together.
"What?" she asked, looking confused.
"It's just, you guys seem more touchy-feely, and I just thought that if you had gone to that step, we would have talked about it like we always do."
"Wait, what? I didn't even catch what you said. Are you asking if Jasper and I are...having sex?" She whispered out the last part.
----
Thanks for reading and for sticking with me. Hopefully, you'll stick with me till the end. Also, if you check out my profile on FF.net, there's always info about me and my stories.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Across the World with No Return? (VJGM)
The story is great! Can you please write your stories so they fit on the page though? I have to constantly move the page over to read the chapters because it bleeds so far over on the right. Its not a huge deal, but it is really annoying and it does detract from me wanting to read your stories. Otherwise, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I apologize for the long wait. Luckily, the semester is almost over, my relatives have moved out, and now I have a lot more time. I've also been taking part in The Fandom Gives Back. I am up for auction with drabbles and a one-shot/outtake, along with a ton of other amazing authors, artists, and crafters. I really hope you can stop by my thread. http://thefandomgivesback.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fic&action=display&thread=183
Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing my story and that you think it's great. Makes me proud to be a writer for fanfiction. To make up for the wait, you get two teasers for the upcoming chapter!
----
I stayed close to the wall outside the restroom and hurriedly clicked the down button for the elevator. The door opened and I got in with one last look over my shoulder. Lucy had begun to turn towards the restroom and caught sight of me, just as the doors began to close. I smashed the door close button, knowing she was probably coming after me.
I ran out as soon as the doors reopened on the bottom floor, looking back to see if they had taken the stairs. I ran smack into the last person I expected.
--
"Areyoutwosleepingtogether?" I blurted out, running the words together.
"What?" she asked, looking confused.
"It's just, you guys seem more touchy-feely, and I just thought that if you had gone to that step, we would have talked about it like we always do."
"Wait, what? I didn't even catch what you said. Are you asking if Jasper and I are...having sex?" She whispered out the last part.
----
Thanks for reading and for sticking with me. Hopefully, you'll stick with me till the end. Also, if you check out my profile on FF.net, there's always info about me and my stories. Also, I will try something new so that it doesn't take up so much room. I wouldn't want to lose a reader over something silly like that.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Across the World with No Return? (VJGM)
Fantastic!
I haven't seen/read this story in such a long time, which actually made me enjoy it more!
Please update soon!
Author's Response:
I apologize for the long wait. Luckily, the semester is almost over, my relatives have moved out, and now I have a lot more time. I've also been taking part in The Fandom Gives Back. I am up for auction with drabbles and a one-shot/outtake, along with a ton of other amazing authors, artists, and crafters. I really hope you can stop by my thread. http://thefandomgivesback.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fic&action=display&thread=183
Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing my story and I'm glad you were excited to see it after the long wait! To make up for the wait, you get two teasers for the upcoming chapter!
----
I stayed close to the wall outside the restroom and hurriedly clicked the down button for the elevator. The door opened and I got in with one last look over my shoulder. Lucy had begun to turn towards the restroom and caught sight of me, just as the doors began to close. I smashed the door close button, knowing she was probably coming after me.
I ran out as soon as the doors reopened on the bottom floor, looking back to see if they had taken the stairs. I ran smack into the last person I expected.
--
"Areyoutwosleepingtogether?" I blurted out, running the words together.
"What?" she asked, looking confused.
"It's just, you guys seem more touchy-feely, and I just thought that if you had gone to that step, we would have talked about it like we always do."
"Wait, what? I didn't even catch what you said. Are you asking if Jasper and I are...having sex?" She whispered out the last part.
----
Thanks for reading and for sticking with me. Hopefully, you'll stick with me till the end. Also, if you check out my profile on FF.net, there's always info about me and my stories.
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Across the World with No Return? (VJGM)
I'm so happy that you've updated! And I'm happy to see that Bella seems to be formulating a plan to get out of captivity. Hopefully that happens soon. It's so sad reading about her being all tied up and tortured. Speaking of being tied up...please untie her! Seriously, it sucks to be without use of one's hands.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter :-)
Author's Response:
I apologize for the long wait. Luckily, the semester is almost over, my relatives have moved out, and now I have a lot more time. I've also been taking part in The Fandom Gives Back. I am up for auction with drabbles and a one-shot/outtake, along with a ton of other amazing authors, artists, and crafters. I really hope you can stop by my thread. http://thefandomgivesback.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fic&action=display&thread=183
Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing my story. To make up for the wait, you get two teasers for the upcoming chapter!
----
I stayed close to the wall outside the restroom and hurriedly clicked the down button for the elevator. The door opened and I got in with one last look over my shoulder. Lucy had begun to turn towards the restroom and caught sight of me, just as the doors began to close. I smashed the door close button, knowing she was probably coming after me.
I ran out as soon as the doors reopened on the bottom floor, looking back to see if they had taken the stairs. I ran smack into the last person I expected.
--
"Areyoutwosleepingtogether?" I blurted out, running the words together.
"What?" she asked, looking confused.
"It's just, you guys seem more touchy-feely, and I just thought that if you had gone to that step, we would have talked about it like we always do."
"Wait, what? I didn't even catch what you said. Are you asking if Jasper and I are...having sex?" She whispered out the last part.
----
Thanks for reading and for sticking with me. Hopefully, you'll stick with me till the end. Also, if you check out my profile on FF.net, there's always info about me and my stories.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Across the World with No Return? (VJGM)
Glad you updated! I hope things get better! Either way is fine as long as she is able to get away and back to Edward.
Author's Response:
I apologize for the long wait. Luckily, the semester is almost over, my relatives have moved out, and now I have a lot more time. I've also been taking part in The Fandom Gives Back. I am up for auction with drabbles and a one-shot/outtake, along with a ton of other amazing authors, artists, and crafters. I really hope you can stop by my thread. http://thefandomgivesback.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fic&action=display&thread=183
Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing my story. To make up for the wait, you get two teasers for the upcoming chapter!
----
I stayed close to the wall outside the restroom and hurriedly clicked the down button for the elevator. The door opened and I got in with one last look over my shoulder. Lucy had begun to turn towards the restroom and caught sight of me, just as the doors began to close. I smashed the door close button, knowing she was probably coming after me.
I ran out as soon as the doors reopened on the bottom floor, looking back to see if they had taken the stairs. I ran smack into the last person I expected.
--
"Areyoutwosleepingtogether?" I blurted out, running the words together.
"What?" she asked, looking confused.
"It's just, you guys seem more touchy-feely, and I just thought that if you had gone to that step, we would have talked about it like we always do."
"Wait, what? I didn't even catch what you said. Are you asking if Jasper and I are...having sex?" She whispered out the last part.
----
Thanks for reading and for sticking with me. Hopefully, you'll stick with me till the end. Also, if you check out my profile on FF.net, there's always info about me and my stories. Don't worry, she'll be back with Edward soon enough. I can't keep them apart for too long. :D
Reviewer: huntergirl89 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Rosalie's Advice and Room 307
what and u havnt updated why!?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm super sorry about the delay. Here's your
teaser to make up for it. --“You know, Bella, I've been watching you.
Waiting for this moment. You and that dumb oaf took Alice away from me.
Edward took someone away from my girl. It's time for payback. You'll be
able to see how Edward is doing without you, when we move you. There
are cameras on his house and yours.” I couldn't, no, wouldn't believe
what he was saying. How could Edward have done anything to Victoria? I
still didn't understand why I was the one here, though. I looked away
from the camera, though James continued to film around me and go on
talking.--
I've sent it in to the beta, just need it to be approved! Hope you stick around!
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Rosalie's Advice and Room 307
Ok, what the hell? Bella had nothing to do with James or Victoria. It was Alice that went out on the date. Not that Alice deserves to be kidnapped, but still. It ticks me off that Bella was set up. I do hope that Edward or someone else can come and find her and get her the hell out of there...quickly!
Speaking of Edward, I'm glad he took what Bella had to say well. Then again, I figured he would. He's just amazing :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm super sorry about the delay. Here's your teaser to make up for it. --“You know, Bella, I've been watching you. Waiting for this moment. You and that dumb oaf took Alice away from me. Edward took someone away from my girl. It's time for payback. You'll be able to see how Edward is doing without you, when we move you. There are cameras on his house and yours.” I couldn't, no, wouldn't believe what he was saying. How could Edward have done anything to Victoria? I still didn't understand why I was the one here, though. I looked away from the camera, though James continued to film around me and go on talking.--
If you go back a few chapters, you'll notice a very subtle hint lol. I had been planning something like this to take place since I brought James into the story, but didn't do a good job of slowly weaving it more than once or twice haha. Hopefully you don't hate me for it lol. Gonna try and update by the end of next week. Thanks for sticking with me! :D
Reviewer: dawn141 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Rosalie's Advice and Room 307
whoat wow! get bella away from james
bella needs edward right now
bella get away from james
whats gonna happen
please update soon as possible
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm super sorry about the delay. Here's your teaser to make up for it. --“You know, Bella, I've been watching you. Waiting for this moment. You and that dumb oaf took Alice away from me. Edward took someone away from my girl. It's time for payback. You'll be able to see how Edward is doing without you, when we move you. There are cameras on his house and yours.” I couldn't, no, wouldn't believe what he was saying. How could Edward have done anything to Victoria? I still didn't understand why I was the one here, though. I looked away from the camera, though James continued to film around me and go on talking.--
Things will work out. Don't worry. My stories will always have a happily ever after. I will try to update by the end of next week. Thanks for sticking with me! :D
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Rosalie's Advice and Room 307
WHAT !!!! oh my god you just pulled the comfy rug right out from under me with that one.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm super sorry about the delay. Here's your teaser to make up for it. --“You know, Bella, I've been watching you. Waiting for this moment. You and that dumb oaf took Alice away from me. Edward took someone away from my girl. It's time for payback. You'll be able to see how Edward is doing without you, when we move you. There are cameras on his house and yours.” I couldn't, no, wouldn't believe what he was saying. How could Edward have done anything to Victoria? I still didn't understand why I was the one here, though. I looked away from the camera, though James continued to film around me and go on talking.--
As long as it doesn't make you not want to read anymore, then we're good lol. There will be a happily ever after though, so no worries. I will try and update by the end of next week. Thanks for sticking with me! :D
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Rosalie's Advice and Room 307
Nine pages isn't something to be ashamed of or anything! Please update this soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm super sorry about the delay. Here's your teaser to make up for it. --“You know, Bella, I've been watching you. Waiting for this moment. You and that dumb oaf took Alice away from me. Edward took someone away from my girl. It's time for payback. You'll be able to see how Edward is doing without you, when we move you. There are cameras on his house and yours.” I couldn't, no, wouldn't believe what he was saying. How could Edward have done anything to Victoria? I still didn't understand why I was the one here, though. I looked away from the camera, though James continued to film around me and go on talking.--
I'm used to writing longer ones to make up for my long delays. Felt bad that it was pretty short for me. The next one will be even shorter, sadly, but it has to be for what I'm going to do. I'm going to try and update by the end of next week. Thanks for sticking with me! :D
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Rosalie's Advice and Room 307
OMG!!! I can't believe you left it there. Update quick like a bunny!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm super sorry about the delay. Here's your teaser to make up for it. --“You know, Bella, I've been watching you. Waiting for this moment. You and that dumb oaf took Alice away from me. Edward took someone away from my girl. It's time for payback. You'll be able to see how Edward is doing without you, when we move you. There are cameras on his house and yours.” I couldn't, no, wouldn't believe what he was saying. How could Edward have done anything to Victoria? I still didn't understand why I was the one here, though. I looked away from the camera, though James continued to film around me and go on talking.--
I tried so hard to get it updated as quick as possible, but life has been working against me lately. I'm trying to get the chapter out by the end of next week. Thanks so much for sticking with me and hope you don't hate me now lol. :D
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Rosalie's Advice and Room 307
Awwww fuck me! Hopefully Bella will get saved before anything truly irrepairable happens.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm super sorry about the delay. Here's your teaser to make up for it. --“You know, Bella, I've been watching you. Waiting for this moment. You and that dumb oaf took Alice away from me. Edward took someone away from my girl. It's time for payback. You'll be able to see how Edward is doing without you, when we move you. There are cameras on his house and yours.” I couldn't, no, wouldn't believe what he was saying. How could Edward have done anything to Victoria? I still didn't understand why I was the one here, though. I looked away from the camera, though James continued to film around me and go on talking.--
There will always be a happily ever after in my stories. I don't like ending on sadness, although some people can pull it off, I couldn't handle it lol. Anyway, I'm going to try and update by the end of next week. Thanks for sticking with me! :D
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Boytoys & Jewelry With A Side of New Years
So, I'm finally caught up with the entire story. :)
And I love how everything is playing out. I think it's hilarious how Jake's a dog. It's so appropriate! lol. I was a little worried about Tanya, but I really like how you added her in. And this karaoke part was awesome.
Anyways, can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: So glad that you liked the story so far. Hopefully, you will continue to stick with me till the end. Thanks for reviewing and here is your preview for reviewing. The chapter should be coming up within a week.
--My alarm woke me up at 7:30 am, buzzing annoyingly loud. I crawled out of bed and went to the kitchen to get breakfast. Alice was already in there, most likely eating before her class. “You know, I've been having some strange dreams the past couple nights.” “Isn't that normal for you?” I asked, smiling, as I poured myself a bowl of cereal. “These ones had (?) in them.” I stopped pouring to pay full attention to her.--
Who could she be dreaming about? :D
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