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Reviewer: theswissmiss (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

uhm, i love this. so.....when does it become a full story?...cuz, i'm not going to survive if this is all i get of these characters :)

p.s. churchward is my fave

Reviewer: babylight (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

that's so unfair....where the next chapter

Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was quite tasty!  I think it would be good if you continued it.

Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is promising! Pleeeeeeeeeeeze update!

Reviewer: orcagirl09 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

YEA! You get him Bella!

 I love the start of this story. Amazing job. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time out and reviewing! LOL It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!  

I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!  

Thanks again have a great rest of the week!

Reviewer: Teaste (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love me a little inexperienced Edward. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time out and reviewing! LOL It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!  

I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!  

 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was the funniest fucking start to a story ha ha .....love love it...ha ha sitting in church saying fucking bible and all that......edward is so weird and yet so adorable ha ha ...i bet he is the only virgin in that group,,,,jeez his parents have him wrapped,,,,good lord,,,,,hmmm i hope bella can seduce him,,,looking forward to more humor and lemons! loving sex pot bella ha ha



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for liking my story! It really makes it easier to write when you have such nice reviews from nice people such as yourself!  It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!  

I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!  

Thanks again!

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

love it update soon

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time out and reviewing! LOL It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!  

I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!  

 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Kinda love this! My ex-husband/high school sweetheart was a Preacher's kid, but he was the seducer, not me.



Author's Response:

OMG! I might need to get advice from you! Maybe you could PM me with some pointers! ;)

Thanks for taking the time out and reviewing! It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!

I am in the process of getting this story outlined and started to really get new chapters out. I love the make this experience more interactive for the readers (aka YOU!!), so anytime you have thoughts or suggestions for where I could possibly take this story- let me know. Or maybe if you just have a cute idea on how bella could "seduce" preacherward- PM me anytime.

Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow that was great..love a shy edward



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time out and reviewing! LOL It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox! 

I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!   Thanks again!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have to read more! This was so amazing, I've never read anything similar - go church boy! :-)

Thanks for sharing this, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for liking my story! Wheww! It makes it easier to write when I have such great people who review! It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!  I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!  

 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

oooo naughty lol loving this story more please

jules



Author's Response:

It is naughty, yes? Bahahhahha

Thanks for taking the time out and reviewing!  It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!  I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!  

 

 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful story - very funny & entertaining! I love Bella's personality & Edward's innocence!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time out and reviewing!

LOL It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!  I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!   Thanks again!

Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was interesting, I had my Bible out ready to follow along with the study lol.

Are you Christian or just like the idea of Bella seducing a 'good' boy? 

I'm interested to see where this goes



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am! I've been going to a Baptist Church my whole life. You probably won't be able to tell that from this story. It's just been something that has plagued my mind for awhile. But thanks so much for taking the time out and reviewing! 

LOL It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!  I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!   Thanks again!

Reviewer: ownedbytwins (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it!!

Reviewer: ownedbytwins (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time out and reviewing! You're an awesome reader if you actually remember this story and wish for the updates! LOL It seriously makes my day every time I see a new review pop up in my inbox!  I am in the process of getting this story outlined and have recently taken on a co-writer to do EPOV for future chapters so hopefully things will start being updated quicker!  

 

Thanks again!

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